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Originally Posted by sushiljain
these are some dohas which i wrote...hope for some replies..
naa mera koi naam hai,
naa hai koi pehchaan.
Prabhu charnon ka daas hoon,
bas itna hai gyaan.
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ruk jaa manwa ruk jaa, bhaaga koso koss,
par ko dekha bahot hai, ab dekho antar dos.
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deenanath se milan ka, 'sushil' ek hi rasta,
pahaad chadhe na mile, woh toh antar mein basta.
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aatam hi woh tirth hai, jisme sai hoy,
baahar dhoondhe naa mile, mile aapan mein khoy.
------------sushil
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Dear Sushil ji,
bahot acha likha hai aapne..god bless u..kuch dohe mere apne bhi aapke samaksh rakhta hun:
Sant fakir kahe sun raahi idhar-udhar mat dekh,
Manjil teri ek hi, chahe rahe ho anek;
Bhagwe me bhagwaan ko dhundhe murakh insaan,
Sar ke baal badhane se hi milta nahin hai gyaan;
Tera bhagwaan tu hi jaane main na jaanu bhai,
Main to jaanu itna, aaj kisine aadhi roti khai.
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Pradhyuman