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27th November 2005, 10:46 PM
Ahl-e-mehfil ko mera adaab. Ek taweel arse ke baad iss bazm mein kuch leke haazir hua hoon. Jo hai so aapke saamne hai. Apne taasuraat se zaroor nawaazein.
yunn baat baat pe aakhoN ko tarr nahi karte, Qaraar-o-chain ko zer-o-zabar nahi karte. zer-o-zabar = up & Down, hamaari baat ki manaa ke ehmeeyat kam hai, to hum bhi paar hadd-e-mukhtasar nahi karte. hadd-e-mukhtasar = limit of shortness yeh kiss libaas mein ayee hai kushi ghar mere, isse qubool kyoN deewar-o-darr nahi karte. kabhi hai dil ke masaayil to kabhi duniya ke, khudaaya aap kyon mujh par nazar nahi karte. masaayil=issues/matters. woh be-dili se sune hai jo mein kahoon dil ki, ajab hai baat kya jo dil mein ghar nahi karte. dil mein tha wahm tere khwaab mein aaoon ya nahi, aise haalaat mein koi safar nahi karte. wahm=suspicion/doubt shaoor khoob hai "Talib" ko magar yeh dekho, kiya hai aisa jo aashufta-sarr nahi karte. shaoor=wisdom, Aashufta-sarr = Insane/ sarr phira. Talib. |
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28th November 2005, 03:51 AM
Hamesha ki tarah aap ka yaha kalaam bhi
kabeel e tareef hai... Talib G ! Shukriya jo hamein isse padhne ka mauka diya aapne...! Apna khayaal rakhiyega  Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai 
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28th November 2005, 05:39 AM
bahaut hi khoobsurat lafzon ka istemaal kiya hai aapne apne kalaam mein...urdi ki pakeegzi aur jazbaaton ka sailaab, sabhi kuch lajawaab hai....yuhin likhte rahiyega....take care
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28th November 2005, 10:26 AM
talib saheb
bohat khoob ghazel kahi hai aap ne. behad sakoon o inbisaat mehsoos hua aap ka yeh kalam parh ker. her tarah se ek mukammil shahkaar hai yeh. her misra aur her shayr bohat sehal aur bermahal hain. aap ne khoob kaha hai janab. "shaoor khoob hai "Talib" ko magar yeh dekho" kiya hai aisa jo aashufta-sarr nahi karte meri bharpoor daad qabool karein talib saheb. aap ki sehat aur asoodgi ke liye dua go hoon. God bless you. musharrafhusain |
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28th November 2005, 10:28 AM
Talib Sir humesha ki tarah lazwaab kalaam hai
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Re: yunn baat baat pe aakhoN ko tarr nahi karte -
28th November 2005, 10:49 AM
hamaari baat ki manaa ke ehmeeyat kam hai,
to hum bhi paar hadd-e-mukhtasar nahi karte. yeh kiss libaas mein ayee hai kushi ghar mere, isse qubool kyoN deewar-o-darr nahi karte. kabhi hai dil ke masaayil to kabhi duniya ke, khudaaya aap kyon mujh par nazar nahi karte. talib bhai kaise hai huzooor aap??? ek arse baad aapko padh raha hooon...wahi behtreen andaaz,,wahi shayara tabiyat aur wahi dil ko choo lene ka hunar phir paya hai aapke kalaam mein.ek behtreen gazal par apne dil ki kashamkash ko bayaan kiya hai aapne...yun to sari hi gazal shaandaaar hai,,magar yeh kuch sher behad pasand aaye...meri dil se mubaaraqbaad aur daad kuboool kijiye,,is khubsurat rachna par. -MANOJ kUREEL karte hai jo "kureel" se gila karte rahein. |
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28th November 2005, 05:38 PM
bahut accha likha hai Talib ji....
accha laga padkar.. likhte rahiye jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai uth jati hai kalam likhne ko wo pyar deewana hota hai kar deti hai haal-e-dil bayaan wo kalaam shayraana hota hai jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai... ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* duniya mein kitna gam hai apna gam phir bhi kam hai ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* |
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28th November 2005, 10:28 PM
Talib Sir...
ek paak raag sa kalaam...jiske ashaar aaroh(ascending) aavroh(descending) se karte nazar aate hain...dil pe taal lagataar bajti hai...that is what i felt when i read the whole thing...beautiful! Only a Talib can say... tha wahm tere khwaab mein aaoon ya nahi, aise haalaat mein koi safar nahi karte. stirring lingering sadness is what makes a good shayar they say... aise umda khayaalon ko pirone pe daad kabuul kijiey gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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Re: yunn baat baat pe aakhoN ko tarr nahi karte -
28th November 2005, 11:12 PM
yunn baat baat pe aakhoN ko tarr nahi karte, Qaraar-o-chain ko zer-o-zabar nahi karte. hamaari baat ki manaa ke ehmeeyat kam hai, to hum bhi paar hadd-e-mukhtasar nahi karte. Waaaaah... bahut khoob bhai...! yeh kiss libaas mein ayee hai kushi ghar mere, isse qubool kyoN deewar-o-darr nahi karte. kabhi hai dil ke masaayil to kabhi duniya ke, khudaaya aap kyon mujh par nazar nahi karte. Waaaah...Khoobsurat bayaani....! woh be-dili se sune hai jo mein kahoon dil ki, ajab hai baat kya jo dil mein ghar nahi karte. dil mein tha wahm tere khwaab mein aaoon ya nahi, aise haalaat mein koi safar nahi karte. Beautiful expressioon once again....! shaoor khoob hai "Talib" ko magar yeh dekho, kiya hai aisa jo aashufta-sarr nahi karte. Well said...! Dear Talib Bhai, Kaise hain? Ummeed hai sab acche se hi hoga...! Bhia.. ek baar fir bahut hi khoobsurati se byaan kiya hai aapne apne ehsaas ko.. padhkar bahut accha lagaa...Meri dil se daad kubool lijiyega is khoobsurat rachna ke liye....! Yun hi likhte rahiye.. apna khayal rakhiyega Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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30th November 2005, 08:54 PM
Shukriya Mushkil Sahab,
Khushi huee yeh jaan kar ke aapko yeh kalaam pasand aaya. Aate rahiyega aur apna khayaal rakhiyega. Talib. |
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30th November 2005, 08:57 PM
Farhana Jee Adaab,
Aapne apne taassuraat iss kalaam ke baare mein zaahir kiye, dil pur kaif ho gaya. Ummed hai mustakbil mein bhi nazr-e-karam qaayam rahega. Aapki taareef se sarr-a-paa shukr guzaar hoon. Filhaal izaazat dijiye, Philr milenge gar Khuda layaa. Allah Hafiz. Talib. |
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30th November 2005, 09:01 PM
Janaab musharraf sahab,
Harr baar ki tarah aapne phir ek baar iss kism se tareef ki hai maano kaandhe pe haath rakh ke baRa bhai hauslaa afzaaye karr raha ho. Mere aakaa ho sake to koi galati bhi meri nazar kar diya karein. Aapki tareef aur dua dono se mamnoon-o-mashkoor hoon. Apna khayaal rakhiyega. Dua go. Talib. |
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1st December 2005, 12:32 AM
talib jee
behad umda behad khoobsurat kalaam hai ye dil se pasand aaya kabhi hai dil ke masaayil to kabhi duniya ke, khudaaya aap kyon mujh par nazar nahi karte. very well said bahut khub shaoor khoob hai "Talib" ko magar yeh dekho, kiya hai aisa jo aashufta-sarr nahi karte. gajab or kya likhun lafj nahi hain likhte rahiye hame sakoon dete rahiye tum mujhe bhool bhi jao to ye haq hai tumko ! meri baat or hai maine to mohobbat kee hai !! :) anish.paliwal@gmail.com:) |
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1st December 2005, 08:55 PM
Dear Garima,
Shukriya aapki tareef ka. Ummeed hai aap ba-khair hongi. Apna khayaal rakhiyega. Talib. |
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1st December 2005, 09:04 PM
Manoj Bhai Adaab,
Sarkaar hum to yahiN hai aap kahiye kya haal hai? Shukriya aapki tareef ka. Hazrat kabhi koi nuks bhi nazar kar diya kijiye...Filhaal izaazat dijiye. Dua go. Talib. |
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1st December 2005, 09:06 PM
Kuhulikha Jee,
Pehli baar humkalaam ho raha hoon aapse. Shukriya iss post-o-reply ke rishte ka silsilaa shuroo karne ke liye aur ek baar phir shukriya meri tareef karne ke liye. Ummeed hai raabtaa qaayam rahega. Aap bhi apnaa aur apnoN ka khayaal rakhiyega. Chaltaa hoon. Talib. |
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1st December 2005, 09:14 PM
Mohtarma Parastar Sahibaa.... Salaam!!!
Aap ki tareef ka shukriya adaa karne ke liye mujhe koi tarteeb nazar nahi aa rahi... Iss liye saadgi pesh-e-khidmat hai. Shukria Jee jiss sher ka aapne intekhaab kiya hai woh aisaa hi kuch soch karr likha tha ,ke hum aksar kahin jaane ke liye jab nikalte hain,ya safar par jaate hai aur agar uss waqt dil mein ek wahm, khaTka, doubt aa jaaye to we prefer ke uss jagah nahi jaanaa chahiye. Kehte hai ke kuch bura hota hai, ya kaam nahi banta. Well...mehbooba ke khwaab mein jaane hi walaa tha ....aur dil mein wahm aa gayaa iss liye woh safar nahi kiya maine. Talib. |
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2nd December 2005, 10:09 AM
mere talib,
kai baar padhi tumhari rachna.. badhaai..... maasi |
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2nd December 2005, 05:55 PM
ohhhh...
tau yeh aapke ikhtiyaar mein hai ki aap apni mehbooba ke sapnon jaate hain ya nahin...lol...apke us sher se mujhe apna kuch likha yaad aaya... kaati tamaam shab aankhon hi aankhon mein jab tak na laayi neend khwaab unke sajaa ke yeh zidd ki tab tak neend ke aagosh mein nahin jaayeinge jab tak mehboob sapnon mein nazar na aaye... dono hi soorat mein ye mumkin nahin...khwaabon par kab ikhtiyaar raha hai kisi ka...lekin shayar ke tassavvur mein sab kuch possible hai...shayri is not always logical...because emotions are not... gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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5th December 2005, 06:06 PM
Kuhulikha sahiba adaab,
Thank you so very much for the appreciation. Sorry for late resonpse. Aap ki tareef ka tah-e-dil se shukr guzaar hoon. Aate rahiyega aur apna khayaal rakhiyega. Pulkit mere bhai.... Muaf karna lekin aaj kal kaafi zyaada kaam mein masroof rehta hoon. Kayee baar to site mein login karke phir logout karna paDta hai. Tareef ke liye bohot bohot shukriya. Filhaal chalta hoon. Phir milenge gar KHUDA laaya. Meena maasi...... Kem cho..? tamaari tabiyat kem che. Saaru laagu tamaaro jawaab vaanchi ne. Pachi maliye....Jai shri krishna. Talib. |
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Salaam~Dear Ismail Jee, Hope You Are Well
Dil Ko Achchha Laga...Khoub Likhte Hain Aap~*~Younhi Likhte Rahiyega**Dil Ki Gehraaion Ki Gehraaion Se Dher-o-Dher Saare Phoul_Shukriya_Daad Quboul Kijiyega **Khush Rahiye ye Duwaaon ke saath ijaazat...**Take Care...**God bless You. Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche** *~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~** *Pure Love** |
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