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Ek baar Yoon bhi dekho.... - 24th March 2012, 09:00 PM
AankhoN se Qatl karnaa Woh Khoob Jaante haiN,
Rah Rah ke dekhiye woh Chilman se Jhaankte haiN.

Parwaah kise ye ab hai, Jannat Mile ya Dozakh,
Woh Hashr me Milenge to Chal ke Dekhte hain.

Ik Lala-Rukh GuloN sa , Dekhaa hai kya Guzrte,
Gulshan se Baarha hum, ye baat Poochte haiN.

Mehfil me hoon PashemaaN unki InaayatoN se,
Sab jiske Muntazar haiN, woh Hum ko Dekhte haiN.

Ek baar Yoon bhi Dekho, Jal jaaye yeh Saraapa,
Bas Aakhri Karam yeh , Hum tujh se Chaahte haiN.

Ab Shaad woh nahi to Shiqvaa tumhe hai Kaisaa,
Aashiq to Umr-e-Raftaa Tanhaa GUzaarte haiN.


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24th March 2012, 10:36 PM
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AankhoN se Qatl karnaa Woh Khoob Jaante haiN,

Rah Rah ke dekhiye woh Chilman se Jhaankte haiN.

Parwaah kise ye ab hai, Jannat Mile ya Dozakh,
Woh Hashr me Milenge to Chal ke Dekhte hain.

Ik Lala-Rukh GuloN sa , Dekhaa hai kya Guzrte,
Gulshan se Baarha hum, ye baat Poochte haiN.

Mehfil me hoon PashemaaN unki InaayatoN se,
Sab jiske Muntazar haiN, woh Hum ko Dekhte haiN.

Ek baar Yoon bhi Dekho, Jal jaaye yeh Saraapa,
Bas Aakhri Karam yeh , Hum tujh se Chaahte haiN.

Ab Shaad woh nahi to Shiqvaa tumhe hai Kaisaa,
Aashiq to Umr-e-Raftaa Tanhaa GUzaarte haiN.

Shaad...

Bahot Khoooob..!!!!! Bada Acchaa likha haai janaab aapne..!!

Kaun Kambakhat Kehta hai,
Ke Sirf Ghaalib ko hai pata,
Radeef, Kafiya, Matla, Maktaa....!!
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24th March 2012, 11:01 PM
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AankhoN se Qatl karnaa Woh Khoob Jaante haiN,
Rah Rah ke dekhiye woh Chilman se Jhaankte haiN.

Parwaah kise ye ab hai, Jannat Mile ya Dozakh,
Woh Hashr me Milenge to Chal ke Dekhte hain.

Ik Lala-Rukh GuloN sa , Dekhaa hai kya Guzrte,
Gulshan se Baarha hum, ye baat Poochte haiN.

Mehfil me hoon PashemaaN unki InaayatoN se,
Sab jiske Muntazar haiN, woh Hum ko Dekhte haiN.

Ek baar Yoon bhi Dekho, Jal jaaye yeh Saraapa,
Bas Aakhri Karam yeh , Hum tujh se Chaahte haiN.

Ab Shaad woh nahi to Shiqvaa tumhe hai Kaisaa,
Aashiq to Umr-e-Raftaa Tanhaa GUzaarte haiN.


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WaaH ! Shaad Bhai ! BaDhe Pyaare Ashaar Kahe HaiN ... Khoobsurat RawaaN DawaaN Ghazal Huii Janaab ... Bayaani Bhi UmdaaH Rahi ... Laajawaab Peshkash ... Dilkash ... Purkash ... Aur Nayaab ... Dilee Mubaaraqbaad !!!



YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

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25th March 2012, 11:17 AM
waah waah waah !! Shaad bhaaii

mazaa aa gayaa.. dil se daad !!

KhuSh rahiye... apnaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

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25th March 2012, 08:01 PM
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AankhoN se Qatl karnaa Woh Khoob Jaante haiN,
Rah Rah ke dekhiye woh Chilman se Jhaankte haiN.

wahh bahut khoob.bahut-2 khoobsurat matla hai.........bas ik baat kahna chaahata hu- oola aur saani dono woh ka use kiya hai aapne...........agar oola men woh kee jagah kya likh le..........kuch is tarah

aanjho se qatl karna kya khoob jaante hai.

baaqee to ye matla top class hai

Parwaah kise ye ab hai, Jannat Mile ya Dozakh,
Woh Hashr me Milenge to Chal ke Dekhte hain.

khoob kahaa................dhero daad.

Ik Lala-Rukh GuloN sa , Dekhaa hai kya Guzrte,
Gulshan se Baarha hum, ye baat Poochte haiN.
wahh bahut acche.............bahut khoob


Mehfil me hoon PashemaaN unki InaayatoN se,
Sab jiske Muntazar haiN, woh Hum ko Dekhte haiN.
ye to behatreen sher hai...............zabardassssssst.


Ek baar Yoon bhi Dekho, Jal jaaye yeh Saraapa,
Bas Aakhri Karam yeh , Hum tujh se Chaahte haiN.
acchha hai......acchha hai........daad o mubaraqbaad


Ab Shaad woh nahi to Shiqvaa tumhe hai Kaisaa,
Aashiq to Umr-e-Raftaa Tanhaa GUzaarte haiN.

sach kahaa.........aur khoob kahaa . saanee bahut pasand aaya.


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bahut hee shaayraana mizaaz hai is ghazal ka..........bhai lutf aa gaya padkar.
sach men...........god bless u..........stay happy.
   
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26th March 2012, 11:46 AM

AankhoN se Qatl karnaa Woh Khoob Jaante haiN,
Rah Rah ke dekhiye woh Chilman se Jhaankte haiN.

Wah Wah …Boht Khubsurat Matla Hai Janab….. Dheron Daad

Parwaah kise ye ab hai, Jannat Mile ya Dozakh,
Woh Hashr me Milenge to Chal ke Dekhte hain.

Ik Lala-Rukh GuloN sa , Dekhaa hai kya Guzrte,
Gulshan se Baarha hum, ye baat Poochte haiN.
Wah…..Boht Khooob

Mehfil me hoon PashemaaN unki InaayatoN se,
Sab jiske Muntazar haiN, woh Hum ko Dekhte haiN.
Wah Wah….Boht Umdah Sher Hai Saheb…..

Ek baar Yoon bhi Dekho, Jal jaaye yeh Saraapa,
Bas Aakhri Karam yeh , Hum tujh se Chaahte haiN.
Wah Wah Wah Kia Kehnay….. Behtreen…..

Ab Shaad woh nahi to Shiqvaa tumhe hai Kaisaa,
Aashiq to Umr-e-Raftaa Tanhaa GUzaarte haiN.
Wahhhhhhh …Shaad Saheb…Boht Khubsurat Maqta Hai….Daad…
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Aap Ka Ye Kalaam Boht Boht Umdah Or Laajawaab Raha….. Rawaan Lehja, …. Dheron Daad Qabool Farmaiye…Yunhi Likhtay Rahiye……. Khush Rahiye…..



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26th March 2012, 04:51 PM
shaad saheb kya kahuN, bahut umdaH ghazal kahi hai aapne....
padhte padhte kai baar padh gaya....lekin sach meN abhi tak dil nahi bhara...
aapka ye qalaam aisa hua hai jaisa ki kisi shayar ki hasrat hoti hai ki mera qalaam aisa ho ki log baar baar padheN....
aapko bahut bahut daad-o-mubaaraqbaad....

'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali
Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho
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waah waah waah !! Shaad bhaaii

mazaa aa gayaa.. dil se daad !!

KhuSh rahiye... apnaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

aapka

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AankhoN se Qatl karnaa Woh Khoob Jaante haiN,
Rah Rah ke dekhiye woh Chilman se Jhaankte haiN.

Parwaah kise ye ab hai, Jannat Mile ya Dozakh,
Woh Hashr me Milenge to Chal ke Dekhte hain.

Ik Lala-Rukh GuloN sa , Dekhaa hai kya Guzrte,
Gulshan se Baarha hum, ye baat Poochte haiN.

Mehfil me hoon PashemaaN unki InaayatoN se,
Sab jiske Muntazar haiN, woh Hum ko Dekhte haiN.

Ek baar Yoon bhi Dekho, Jal jaaye yeh Saraapa,
Bas Aakhri Karam yeh , Hum tujh se Chaahte haiN.

Ab Shaad woh nahi to Shiqvaa tumhe hai Kaisaa,
Aashiq to Umr-e-Raftaa Tanhaa GUzaarte haiN.


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sach men...........god bless u..........stay happy.

Shukriyaa uffaq saahab, bahot bahot shukriyaa kalaam ki pazeeraaai ke liye.. aaap aaye aur apni behskeemti raaay pesh ki bahot nawaazish.. main aapki raay se poori sehmat hoon.. baharhaaal agli baar in baatoN khayaal rakhungaa... shukriyaa janaab...

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AankhoN se Qatl karnaa Woh Khoob Jaante haiN,
Rah Rah ke dekhiye woh Chilman se Jhaankte haiN.


Wah Wah …Boht Khubsurat Matla Hai Janab….. Dheron Daad

Parwaah kise ye ab hai, Jannat Mile ya Dozakh,
Woh Hashr me Milenge to Chal ke Dekhte hain.

Ik Lala-Rukh GuloN sa , Dekhaa hai kya Guzrte,
Gulshan se Baarha hum, ye baat Poochte haiN.

Wah…..Boht Khooob

Mehfil me hoon PashemaaN unki InaayatoN se,
Sab jiske Muntazar haiN, woh Hum ko Dekhte haiN.

Wah Wah….Boht Umdah Sher Hai Saheb…..

Ek baar Yoon bhi Dekho, Jal jaaye yeh Saraapa,
Bas Aakhri Karam yeh , Hum tujh se Chaahte haiN.

Wah Wah Wah Kia Kehnay….. Behtreen…..

Ab Shaad woh nahi to Shiqvaa tumhe hai Kaisaa,
Aashiq to Umr-e-Raftaa Tanhaa GUzaarte haiN.

Wahhhhhhh …Shaad Saheb…Boht Khubsurat Maqta Hai….Daad…

Janab Sameer Shaad Sb….. Ab Rafta Rafta Aap Bhi SDC Se Ghaayib Hotay Ja Rahay Hain….Agar Kabhi Kabhaar Aap Yahan Aayen Bhi To Sirf Or Sirf Apna Kalaam Share Karnay Aatay Hain, Ye Bhi Aap ki Inaayat Hai…. Magar Mujhy Ziaada Khushi Tab Ho Gi < Jab Aap Pehlay Ki Tarha Baqaaida Waqt SDC ko Den…
Aap Ka Ye Kalaam Boht Boht Umdah Or Laajawaab Raha….. Rawaan Lehja, …. Dheron Daad Qabool Farmaiye…Yunhi Likhtay Rahiye……. Khush Rahiye…..

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shaad saheb kya kahuN, bahut umdaH ghazal kahi hai aapne....
padhte padhte kai baar padh gaya....lekin sach meN abhi tak dil nahi bhara...
aapka ye qalaam aisa hua hai jaisa ki kisi shayar ki hasrat hoti hai ki mera qalaam aisa ho ki log baar baar padheN....
aapko bahut bahut daad-o-mubaaraqbaad....

Janaab vikram Saab ko nacheez ka salaam arz ho.. Baad salam ke ummeed karta hoon ke aap khush o khairiyat se honge... Aapka reply padha, alfaaz seedhe dil tak utar gaye.. Waise shukriyaaa aapka jo aaap is hasrat ke rubaroo hue... aaakhir dost hi to dil ki baat samajh sakte hain.. haina..

Aapki daad aur duaaaoN ke liye tahe dil se shukrguzaar hoon... tashreef laaate raheN.. aur apna khoob khayal rakkhen... shukriyaa......

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AankhoN se Qatl karnaa Woh Khoob Jaante haiN,
Rah Rah ke dekhiye woh Chilman se Jhaankte haiN.

Parwaah kise ye ab hai, Jannat Mile ya Dozakh,
Woh Hashr me Milenge to Chal ke Dekhte hain.

Ik Lala-Rukh GuloN sa , Dekhaa hai kya Guzrte,
Gulshan se Baarha hum, ye baat Poochte haiN.

Mehfil me hoon PashemaaN unki InaayatoN se,
Sab jiske Muntazar haiN, woh Hum ko Dekhte haiN.

Ek baar Yoon bhi Dekho, Jal jaaye yeh Saraapa,
Bas Aakhri Karam yeh , Hum tujh se Chaahte haiN.

Ab Shaad woh nahi to Shiqvaa tumhe hai Kaisaa,
Aashiq to Umr-e-Raftaa Tanhaa GUzaarte haiN.


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din ba din apki shayri me nikhaar aa raha kya baat hai

Lagta hai kisi k husn ka jaadoo hai
Lagta hai kisi k payar ka asar
lagta hai koi khubsurat khawab aya hai

Anil Arora

Naulekahe par tere khoon ki boond hai,
Motiyo ki jagah par jada kaun hai,
Jiski khatir daga chandini se kare,
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bahot khoob shairi ... dilee daad ............
Behad shukriyaa ... Behad nawaazish Thakuraain... Muddat ke baad aapko Mehfil me maujood paakar behad khushi mili hai... ummeed hai yunhi aati rahiyega.. hausla-afzaai farmaati raheN... Shukriyaa....

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din ba din apki shayri me nikhaar aa raha kya baat hai

Lagta hai kisi k husn ka jaadoo hai
Lagta hai kisi k payar ka asar
lagta hai koi khubsurat khawab aya hai
janaab Anil saahab ko Shaad ka muhabbat bhara aadaab... har baar ki tarah is baar bhi aapka saath milaaa aur muhabbbat bhare alfaazoN se aapne jo is koshish ko nawaaza hai, main behad shukrguzaar hoon aapka.. aur jo baat aapne kahi uski wajah wo bhi ho saktaa hai jo aapne likha magar sabse badi wajah hain aap doston ka saath, pyaar aur duaaeN... ummeed karta hoon aage bhi ye saath aur pyaar milta rahega... khush rahiye.. apna khoob khayaal rakhiye... Shukriyaa...

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Ek baar Yoon bhi Dekho, Jal jaaye yeh Saraapa,
Bas Aakhri Karam yeh , Hum tujh se Chaahte haiN.


bahot hi umdaa ghazal hai ji
bar bar padhne ko mann karta hai
daad dheron kabul kijiye

:-ek bujhaa hua dhumil

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woh lauT kar nahiiN aayaa gaye dinoN ki taraH
   
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Ek baar Yoon bhi Dekho, Jal jaaye yeh Saraapa,
Bas Aakhri Karam yeh , Hum tujh se Chaahte haiN.


bahot hi umdaa ghazal hai ji
bar bar padhne ko mann karta hai
daad dheron kabul kijiye
Bahot bahot shukriyaa aapka Jiyaa ji.. mujhe behad khushi hasil hoti hai jab jab aap yahaan tashreef laati hain, aur is baar bhi aapko ye adnaa si koshish pasand aa saki meri khushnaseebi hai... tashreef laati rahen..
apna khayaal rakkhen.. shukriyaa

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