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mera pata - 7th October 2004, 01:17 PM
Ye man jo udas ho chala hai
socha aaj us se thode sawal kar lu
ankho se dekha man ko
kuch keh nahi payi
jaise sab sawal wahi pe ruk gaye ho
ye tanhaiya aur bhi mayus ho chali
ye bhiga mausam na bhaye man ko
na tumse baat kar saKU
man hi man main gumsum si
ye khula asman ye udte panchi
barish ne phailaye hari vadiya
par na jane kun
isme se kutch na dikhai pade mujhe
main talash main hun us saks ki
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7th October 2004, 07:55 PM
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mita apni is choti si rachna mein bohat bohat bare bare sawaal uthayein hain tum ne.
yeh voh sawaal hain jo her hassaas aur dardmand dil rakhne wale insaan ke dil mein paida hote hain aur voh tamaam umr in sawaalaat ke jawaab dhoondtaa rehtaa hai.
bohat khoob mita,
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THANKS - 7th October 2004, 08:11 PM
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7th October 2004, 08:37 PM
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arre wah subhan allah bohat khoob likha hai tumne

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Re: mera pata - 7th October 2004, 08:42 PM
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Ye man jo udas ho chala hai
socha aaj us se thode sawal kar lu
ankho se dekha man ko
kuch keh nahi payi
jaise sab sawal wahi pe ruk gaye ho
ye tanhaiya aur bhi mayus ho chali
ye bhiga mausam na bhaye man ko
na tumse baat kar saKU
man hi man main gumsum si
ye khula asman ye udte panchi
barish ne phailaye hari vadiya
par na jane kun
isme se kutch na dikhai pade mujhe
main talash main hun us saks ki
shayad wo hi mujhe mera pata de de
Meeta ji…namaste..kaisi hain aap?

Apki rachna kitni simple kitni pyari hai…ekdum jaise seedha dil se nikli aur dil takk pahunch gayi.

Bas hardam yahi umeed ki kahin toh koi hoga jo inn sabb sawalon ka jawab dega aur bas ussi shaks ka intezaar…bahut pasand aapki rachna…dil ki gehrayion se nikli daad kabool kijiyega

Chalti hoon…apna khayal rakhiyega

Main zakhm zakhm hoon phir bhi tujhe dikhayi na doon
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accha likha hai bohat likhte rahiyega ....

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thanks - 8th October 2004, 11:17 AM
[QUOTE]Originally posted by Bina
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THANKS - 8th October 2004, 11:19 AM
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Re: Re: mera pata - 8th October 2004, 11:21 AM
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Meeta ji…namaste..kaisi hain aap?

Apki rachna kitni simple kitni pyari hai…ekdum jaise seedha dil se nikli aur dil takk pahunch gayi.

Bas hardam yahi umeed ki kahin toh koi hoga jo inn sabb sawalon ka jawab dega aur bas ussi shaks ka intezaar…bahut pasand aapki rachna…dil ki gehrayion se nikli daad kabool kijiyega

Chalti hoon…apna khayal rakhiyega
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ROOPALI MAIN USI PAL KE INTEZAR MAIN SHAYAD...................APKI DUWAN KA ASAR HO.

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THANKS - 8th October 2004, 11:22 AM
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