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' Kahin Koyi Phuul Angaara Na Ho Jaaye...! ' -
23rd April 2010, 04:22 PM
Saanson main shaamil ho, lahu main rawaaN ho
Lekin mere haathon ki lakeeron mein kahaaN ho By Unknown Poet Jab tak in nazron ko qayaamat ka nazaara na ho jaaye Khwaaish hai meri siyaahi ka kam dhaara na ho jaaye Darr hai kahin gustaaqi mujh se doobaara na ho jaaye Mehfil main phir ism bad-naam tumhaara na ho jaaye Ba-raunak-e-mehfil mehar banne ka jisse shauq nahin Duaa kijiye yaha shakhs koyi touta sitaara na ho jaaye Teri tasawur nazm main sajaane ki hai li kasam meine Likhunga jab tak ye nafas qazaa ko pyaara na ho jaaye Inaayat phuulon ko hogi gar apne chaman se door raho Naraaz ho toum, kahin koyi phuul angaara na ho jaaye Saccha khwaab woh hai absaar ko jo bandh hone na de Adhura jo rahe, kahin aissa sapna hamaara na ho jaaye Tareef ko nichaawar itna na kiya kijiiye ‘Amanush’ par Kahin Khudaa ko bhool kar woh khud-aara na ho jaaye Mehar - Sun Nafas - Breath Absaar - Eyes Khud-aara - Self Adorer  Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai 
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23rd April 2010, 05:48 PM
Danny bhaiya:
Pranaam..! kaise hai.n aap? aSh'aar tou baRe hi dil-kaSh raheN.. aur maQ'te kaa tou kehnaa hi kyaa!! waah! Khoob ! ees naGhz Ghazal par mere dil se niklii hu'ii daad ko qabUl farmaayeN! KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN duaaoN ke saath ijaazat Jai Shree kriShnaa..! aapka ~ Dhaval |
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23rd April 2010, 08:05 PM
Inaayat phuulon ko hogi gar apne chaman se door raho
Naraaz ho toum, kahin koyi phuul angaara na ho jaaye Saccha khwaab woh hai absaar ko jo bandh hone na de Adhura jo rahe, kahin aissa sapna hamaara na ho jaaye Tareef ko nichaawar itna na kiya kijiiye ‘Amanush’ par Kahin Khudaa ko bhool kar woh khud-aara na ho jaaye Danny Ji...Namaste ! Matle se Maqte tak sirf wah wah hi nikal raha hai....har ashaar purkashish rahe aakhir tak....bahut umdaa khayal....adaayegi aur bayaani bhi purasar rahi....aakhir ke teeno sheyr dil ke khaas kareeb rahe....nice creation..... dil se daad hazir hai....qubuul farmaayen.... yunhi likhte rahen... khush rahen... apna khayal rakhen... duaaon ke saath.....  YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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25th April 2010, 07:31 AM
Teri tasawur nazm main sajaane ki hai li kasam meine
Likhunga jab tak ye nafas qazaa ko pyaara na ho jaaye Jee......Nice One.....dil ko chhuu gaya.... ! Radhika  Seene Me Zakham Utarey Chale Gaye Jo Humpe Guzari Guzarey Chale Gaye Woh Aayega Ek Din Milne Humse Naam Uska Hi Pukarey Chale Gaye E-mail : radhika.nm2@gmail.com |
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25th April 2010, 01:33 PM
Bohat bohat khoobsurat Ghazal rahi mushkil saheb...........dil se daad kabool kare.
Par tujhe bevafa bhi kehna achcha nahi lagta... Mob.: +971 501297654
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28th April 2010, 06:30 PM
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Aap ke daad tah-e-dil se kabuul hai...! Apna khayaal thik se rakhna, ok...? Aashirvaad ke saath Jai Shree KriShna...! Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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5th July 2010, 05:36 PM
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Aapka saath yuNhi banaa rahe,iss se jyaada hamein kya chahiye...! Thik se apna khayaal rakheiN, ok...? Duaaon ke saath Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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5th July 2010, 05:53 PM
Inaayat phuulon ko hogi gar apne chaman se door raho
Naraaz ho toum, kahin koyi phuul angaara na ho jaaye Saccha khwaab woh hai absaar ko jo bandh hone na de Adhura jo rahe, kahin aissa sapna hamaara na ho jaaye Bohat khoobsurat ehsaas haiN Danny ji....... Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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5th July 2010, 10:32 PM
Saccha khwaab woh hai absaar ko jo bandh hone na de
Adhura jo rahe, kahin aissa sapna hamaara na ho jaaye bahot khoob.... hats off you. I have no words for these two lines ... beautiful work. keep writing tc |
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6th July 2010, 09:35 AM
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kishore bhai radhe radhe lajawaab bahut khoob..........dil se daad kubul karen...prabhu aapki kalam ko apni rahmaton se nawaaje duaon ke saath Aapka Apna Ishk 'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है email: rkm179@gmail.com 
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20th July 2010, 06:37 PM
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Take care, ok...? Duaaon ke saath Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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20th July 2010, 06:39 PM
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Tah-e-dil se daad kabuul hai...! Apna khayaal rakheiN, ok...? Duaaon ke saath Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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20th July 2010, 10:59 PM
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maza aa gaya padh kar...khaas taur pe ye sher.. Ba-raunak-e-mehfil mehar banne ka jisse shauq nahin Duaa kijiye yaha shakhs koyi touta sitaara na ho jaaye Tareef ko nichaawar itna na kiya kijiiye ‘Amanush’ par Kahin Khudaa ko bhool kar woh khud-aara na ho jaaye meri taraf se dheroN daad.... Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi.... vikramjethi@gmail.com |
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Tanhaa Raahi
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21st July 2010, 11:32 AM
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Thanks for appreciating Keep yourself well, ok...? Ashirvaad ke saath Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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21st July 2010, 11:35 AM
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Thanks for liking this one too...! Take very good care of yourself, ok...? VD loves you With blessings Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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21st July 2010, 11:41 AM
danny sahab apki ghazal me asar hai hai ek.....
Tareef ko nichaawar itna na kiya kijiiye ‘Amanush’ par Kahin Khudaa ko bhool kar woh khud-aara na ho jaaye ye sher sabse khaas raha........... aur sabhi shero ne nishaa choRa...apna apna very neat and cogent and coherent and consise..... bahot acche.... regards |
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21st July 2010, 11:48 AM
kamal kamal kamal danny danny danny fantastic fantastic fantastic
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21st July 2010, 11:52 AM
Tareef ko nichaawar itna na kiya kijiiye ‘Amanush’ par
Kahin Khudaa ko bhool kar woh khud-aara na ho jaaye Bahut hi khaas hai aapki ye peshkash, gahare mayne hain is shayir ke |
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21st July 2010, 03:19 PM
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ghazal nahayat hi haseen lagi MashaAllah keep writing razia |
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21st July 2010, 03:33 PM
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Likhunga jab tak ye nafas qazaa ko pyaara na ho jaaye Inaayat phuulon ko hogi gar apne chaman se door raho Naraaz ho toum, kahin koyi phuul angaara na ho jaaye Saccha khwaab woh hai absaar ko jo bandh hone na de Adhura jo rahe, kahin aissa sapna hamaara na ho jaaye ji very nice creation.................. Radhika Seene Me Zakham Utarey Chale Gaye Jo Humpe Guzari Guzarey Chale Gaye Woh Aayega Ek Din Milne Humse Naam Uska Hi Pukarey Chale Gaye E-mail : radhika.nm2@gmail.com |
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2nd November 2010, 01:46 PM
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Apna khayaal rakheiN Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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2nd November 2010, 01:48 PM
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Apna khayaal thik se rakheiN, ok...? With blessings Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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2nd November 2010, 01:50 PM
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Regards Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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2nd November 2010, 01:52 PM
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Thanks so much Take care, ok...? Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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2nd November 2010, 01:55 PM
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Apna khayaal rakheiN Regards Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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Tanhaa Raahi
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2nd November 2010, 02:00 PM
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Take care God bless you Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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2nd November 2010, 02:04 PM
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Thanks once more for appreciating, Radhika Ji...! With blessings Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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