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Gumshuda - 14th August 2003, 10:27 AM

Tum to galey laga lo doston,
Ki ab nahi lagti acchi tanhai,

Dosti ka haath do doston,
Tanhai mein yaad aayi uski bewafai.
   
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14th August 2003, 11:08 AM

Bahot hi gheri baat kehe gaye aap jassuj.
Ki tanhayee meine yaad aaye unki bewafayee.
Likhte raheyega..
   
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16th August 2003, 01:36 PM

Jassuj Jee, wah keya baat hein, aapka toh jawaab nehi.
Bewafa, kitna ahsaani se aaplog yeh lafhj boldete hein.
Bewafa lafhj bolna kitna ahsaan hein lekin kaun bewafa aur keise bawafa? Do explain it too.
Kabhi kabhi aankho dekhi baate bhi galat hosakte hein.
Aap log toh kuch nehi dekhke aur nehi kuch sunke hi yeh lafhj istemal kardete hein.
Keya khub kaha hein. Bohot khub.
Khudh ko pehle dekhe fhir auro ke bare meh bolna!!!

Thanks. Take care. God bless.
Shimul.

Kisise kabhi Pyaar kiya toh agar aisi waisi koi baate hogayi toh samajh ne ki kowshish karo, lekin nehi Bewafa ka naam asaani se boldiya.
Good, keep it up.

Meri baat agar bura laga ho toh zaroor mujhe boldijiyega.
Mein bura nehi manungi.
Waise aap ka keya reason hein Bewafa istemal karne ka?


*Aapni Parwaaz-e-Takhayyull Hain Zamane Se Juda
Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche
Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain
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Jawab - 17th August 2003, 11:49 AM

Vaise to i m free to express what i have in my heart,
Just for your kind information, i would really like to tell u,

I loved her since i was in 5th class and we had a relationship of about 13 years. She married somebody else without even informing me. She didn't even gave a single thought to my feelings, now what do you want me to call her.

Tumhari baat ka bura to nahi laga,
lekin phir bhi hai to voh bewafa.

I m not writing all this for appreciation, just to express myself which i didn't do before.

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17th August 2003, 01:25 PM

Jassuj Jee, Mein samajh gayi hu. I am sorry if my words have made you feel bad. Mein toh aaj kaal yeh lafhj bardasht nehi karsakti toh ish liye likhdee thi. Waise toh haar Insaan ek nehi hoti hein. Koi kisipe aise hi ilzam bhi laga dete hein. Lekin aapke sath usne thikh nehi kee. Aur ish ki saza kabhi na kabhi usko zaroor milega. Yeh jo aapko dard horaha hein yeh aise nehi jayega. Mein aapke liye duwa karungi ke aapko thora chain miljaye. Baas duwao meh aap shamil zaroor rahenge, yehi mein karsakti hu. Mere baash meh aur kuch hein toh nehi ke mein kuch aur karsaku. Khuda sunraha hein aur aap fikar nehi karna, mujhe pata hein yeh baate aapko bilkul achha nehi lagega.
Lagna bhi nehi chahiye. Aaj se aap mujhe aapna dost samjhiyega.
Aapka dard ka mehsoosh mein karsakti hu.
Shayed aap jeise mehsoosh kar rahe hein waisa toh nehi lekin mujhe puri puri ahsaash hein. Jab kisipe beette toh uskohi pata chalta hein ke yeh dard keya hoti hein.
Baas aur kuch nehi bolti mein. Hosake toh mujhe mafh kardijiyega.
Thanks. Aapna khayal rakhiyega.
God bless.
Shimul.


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