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a............ - 30th March 2002, 12:50 AM

naya ho is feild ...aaduri baate likh raha ho ...aappp ke comments pls likhye ga ...shayad aur accha lihk saku


sub se bada dard woh hai jab:

ek jhoot se jab muskurahat aati ho

ya ek shuch se aanso nikal aate ho

ek dil se kisi ka naam mit jata ho

ya dil mei kisi aur ka naam aajata ho

maar ke bhi woh zinda rahai

ya zinda reh kar bhi maar jaye.


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30th March 2002, 05:22 AM

bohat hi achi soch hai aap ki asif jee

issey pehle i wouldnt have thought bout these things....specially


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sub se bada dard woh hai jab:

ek jhoot se jab muskurahat aati ho

ya ek shuch se aanso nikal aate ho

ek dil se kisi ka naam mit jata ho

ya dil mei kisi aur ka naam aajata ho

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shukriya fari - 30th March 2002, 05:44 AM

apne mere likhne ke uppar kuch kaha ...bahot accha laga

ab kuch umeed jagi ...

thank u


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