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~* tanhaaiyaaN baakii raheeN..*~ -
16th February 2015, 01:03 PM
Mahfilon ke baad bhii tanhaaiyaaN baakii rahiiN, Mar gayaa main par merii betaabiyaaN baakii rahiiN. Ab wo afsaanaa nahii hai yaad bhii is shaher ko, par abhii do shakhs kii RuswaaiyaaN* baaki rahiiN. Shabnamee BoondeN agar Gul se chalak jaaeN bhi to, Pankhudee me.N oss kii parchaaiyaaN baakii rahiiN. Wo judaa to ho gayee Dolee me ik din baith kar, Par mere kaano.N me kuch ShahnaaiyaaN baaki rahiiN. Uske chehre se sabhii rangeeniyaaN to uD gayeeN, Par abhii kirdaar* ki raanaaiyaaN* baakii rahiiN. Wo miTaa daale har ik alfaaz us deewaan* ke, par merii GazloN ki sab gahraaiyaaN baakii rahiiN. Raat bhar us aankh men naa Neend theee na chain thaa, Par subhaa jalwaa-numaa angDaaiyaaN baakii rahiiN. Ab muhabbat ke sabhii main Pech-O-kham* se door hoon, kyuN bhalaa fir Shaad ye barbaadiiyaaN baakii rahiiN. महफ़िलों के बाद भी तन्हाइयां बाकी रहीं, मर गया मैं पर मेरी बेताबियां बाकी रहीं अब वो अफ़साना नही है याद भी इस शहर को, पर अभी दो शख्स की रुस्वाइयां बाकी रहीं. शबनमी बून्दें अगर ग़ुल से छलक जाएं भी तो, पन्खुड़ी मेँ ओस की परछाइयां बाकी रहीं. वो जुदा तो हो गयी डोली मे इक दिन बैठ कर, पर मेरे कानोँ मे कुछ शहनाइयां बाकी रहीं. उस के चेहरे से सभी रंगीनियां तो उड़ गयीं, पर अभी किरदार की रानाइयां बाकी रहीं. वो मिटा डाले हर इक अल्फ़ाज़ उस दीवान के, पर मेरी ग़ज़लोँ की सब गहराइयां बाकी रहीं. रात भर उस आंख में ना नींद थी ना चैन था, सुबहा को जल्वा-नुमा अंगड़ाइयां बाकी रहीं. अब मुहब्बत के सभी मैं पेच-ओ-ख़म से दूर हूं, क्यूं भला फ़िर शाद ये बर्बादियां बाकी रहीं. Meanings of difficult words- Ruswaaiyaan- Humiliation. Kirdaar- Character Raanaaiyaan- Beauties. Deewaan- Book, collection of ghazals. Pech o kham- perplexity,difficulty Shaad..... |
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16th February 2015, 01:39 PM
Waaah...Shaad jee...kai baar padi aapki ye gazal par fir se baar baar padne ko jee krta hai ... bahut khoob alfazon ka istemaal kiya hai aapne..alfaaz sath nhi de rahe kya likhoon..bas is khoobsurat gazal ke liye dher saree daad.. kubool karein.. yoon hee har baar hame kuch naya aur dilkash padne ka mauka dete rahein..khush rahein..
likhte rahein...  अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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16th February 2015, 05:16 PM
Shaad bhai
Namaste Bhai kya khoob Ghazal bazm mein pesh kee haii...dil khusb ho gayaa...mazaa aa gayaa sach me... dil se daad Aapka Dhaval |
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17th February 2015, 09:30 AM
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kyaa kahun, kaise kahun kaise aapka shukriyaa adaa karun mujhe samajh nahii aa rahaa hai...... aapne jis darjaa kalaam ki tareef kar diii hai, uske ewaq me mujhe shukriyaa ka lafz nahi mil rahaa hai, lagta hai jo kahunga kam saabit hoga...... aapkaa ehsaanmand ho gayaa hoon jo aapne mujhe is darjaa izzat bakshi...... duuaaon me aage bhi yaad rakhiyegaa..... aatii rahiyegaa..... ham bhi koshish karenge ke likhte rahen.... shukriyaa... |
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17th February 2015, 05:58 PM
Behatreen bhai - bahut khoob likha hai
Ab wo afsaanaa nahii hai yaad bhii is shaher ko, par abhii do shakhs kii RuswaaiyaaN* baaki rahiiN. Wah Wah Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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17th February 2015, 10:36 PM
shoiab bhai kya baat hai ....kheench layi aapji ghazal yahan.......
वो जुदा तो हो गयी डोली मे इक दिन बैठ कर, पर मेरे कानोँ मे कुछ शहनाइयां बाकी रहीं. ye lines to jaiSe dil me ghar kar gayi.... एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था Arvind Saxena Ph. No. 7905856220 |
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17th February 2015, 11:55 PM
Abhi mein sone hi wala ki aapki gazal padhi.. janab sach kahu to meri nind ud gayi.. itna acha likha hai aapke ki ek ek sher dil ko chu gaya or nindo m bhi mujhe dard ka ehsaas kara gaya.. ye apki rachnaye hi hai jo is andheri raat ki khubsurati or khamoshi ko or gehra kar deti hai.. behad umdaah Shaad Bhai.. jaise jaise padhta jata hu apne aap mera hath table pe jata h or aapke liye wah wah or taliya baj ut ti h..
in lines ne mere dil ko dard se bhar diya.. वो जुदा तो हो गयी डोली मे इक दिन बैठ कर, पर मेरे कानोँ मे कुछ शहनाइयां बाकी रहीं. yu hi likhte rahe or kush rahe.. duao k sath.. mujhe Lafzo ne maar dala hai...nm |
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19th February 2015, 01:06 PM
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Dhaval bhai aadaab..... kaise hain aap, ummeed krta hoon khush honge.... aapki nazre inaayat aur mmehrbaani ka saboot jo aapke lafz laf de rahe hain wo bahot badee baat hai mere lliye bhai..... aapkii razaamandii mil gayee to mujhe yaqeenho gayaa ke kalam theeekk thaak likha hai...... pasand karne ke liye tahe dil se shukrguzaar hoon aapka....... daad sar maathe pe..... aaate rahiyegaa bhai...... Shaad..... |
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19th February 2015, 03:18 PM
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19th February 2015, 07:05 PM
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Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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20th February 2015, 08:59 PM
Shoaib bhai ,,
Kya baat hai bhai , aap tau cha gaye humare dil pe ... Jaise jaise perte gayehum gazal aapki, Her ashar per humari taaliyaN baki rahi. Sanjay Sehgal khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar , Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar. |
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22nd February 2015, 05:19 PM
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22nd February 2015, 05:20 PM
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Masha Allah kya baat hai. aap maujood hue to meri aankhon ko yaqeen na aaya.... fir sochaa zaroor kuch khaaas hoga is baar ki tahreer me jo aap tashreef le aaye...... bahot shukriyaa aru ji...... aate rahiyegaa... khush rahiye Shaad.... |
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22nd February 2015, 05:24 PM
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ab main aapse kyaaa kahun.... aapne to mujhe kaarzdaaar banaa diyaa apnaa itnii izzzat tavajjoh de kar, main jiske laayaq bbhii nahi hoon..... mere paas lafz nahi hain ke main aaapko shukriyaaa adaa karuN..... aapka pyaaar yunhi bana rahe .. main yahi duaa karta hoon..... aage bhi aape aane aur pyaare pyaare alfaazon ka intezaaar rahegaa..... Apna khayaal rakkhen... khussh rahen Shaad..... |
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26th February 2015, 09:56 AM
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aur aapke tareef karne ka andaaz hame deewaana bana detaa hai har baar... aur bandaa magroor ho jaata hai baar baar.... aamad banaae rakhiyegaa.. duaaon se nawwaazte rahiyegaa khaaksaar ko..... shukriyaa......... Shaad... |
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26th February 2015, 10:00 AM
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aapki daad aur duaaen bahot maayne rakhtii hain mere liye aur main inhe bahot sambhaal kar rakhungaa.... mujhe yaad hai SDC ke wo meraa shuruaatii daur jab aap har baar mere toote foote alfaaz ko saraaha karte they aur hauslaaa badhaaya karte they... aaj waqt bahot badal gayaa hai, masrufiyat badh gayeee hai magar fir bhii wahi intzaar qaayam rahtaa hai..... ummeed hai aapko bazm me fir maujood dekhunga.... aate rahiyega.... apna khayaall rakhiye.. Shaad...... |
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27th February 2015, 10:45 AM
Ab muhabbat ke sabhii main Pech-O-kham* se door hoon,
kyuN bhalaa fir Shaad ye barbaadiiyaaN baakii rahiiN. waaah .. Shaad bhai .. waaah.. kamaal ka nageena inaayat kiya hy aap ny meHfil ko .... teh-e-dil sy beshumaar daad .. is besh-kemaati kalaam ky liye haazir hy janaab! tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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27th February 2015, 04:25 PM
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aapki muhabbaton aur khuloos se mamnoon hoon Sanjay saahab........ duaaone me yaad rakhiyegaa Shaad..... |
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