mere qaatil ki ye tamanna hai
phool bankar girenN mere aansoo
Kya baat hai janaab..100 daad pesh hain is ek sher par....
Waah!!!!!
Matla behad asar daar to maqta seedhe dil ko chhoota hua....kamaal ashaar huye hain sabhi manikhej aur purasar..
Hamari daad ko bhi jagah dijiyega apni bazm me.....likhte rahiye aur bhi behtar..
.....bada intzaar karaya mahfil ko is baar par chaliye ghazal aisi pesh ki hai ki mafi di ja sakti hai....
khushk aankhon me kho gaye aansoo
ek apne naa ho sake aansoo
jab chalee baat bewafaai kii
ham ne chupke se pee liye aansoo
aadmii kii yahii tamanna hai
haale dil bhii kabhii kahe aansoo
meraa hansnaa to usne dekhaa hai
is dafaa us ko bhii dikhe aansoo
mere qaatil ki ye tamanna hai
phool bankar girenN mere aansoo
jo agar paDh sako to paDh lenaa
Khat me bheje hain kuch mere aansoo
ye mere dil kii beimaanii haii
ab bhi aate hain yaad me aansoo
Shaad aise na yaad kar us ko
chal paDenge ruke ruke aansoo....
Shaad...
Khoob ehsaas hue hai mere bhai mukhtasar si baat ko itni gehraayi mein bayaan kiya hai ki bas kya kahein.......yunhi bazm mein humhe nayaab nagme dete rahiye
Qasid
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नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं
क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ
रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है
'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें
mere qaatil ki ye tamanna hai
phool bankar girenN mere aansoo
Kya baat hai janaab..100 daad pesh hain is ek sher par....
Waah!!!!!
Matla behad asar daar to maqta seedhe dil ko chhoota hua....kamaal ashaar huye hain sabhi manikhej aur purasar..
Hamari daad ko bhi jagah dijiyega apni bazm me.....likhte rahiye aur bhi behtar..
.....bada intzaar karaya mahfil ko is baar par chaliye ghazal aisi pesh ki hai ki mafi di ja sakti hai....
Khush rahein..
Madhu..
bahut bahut shukrguzaar hoon aapki is darjaa muhabbat, khuloos aur pazeeraai ke liye mohtarmaa...
aap jaise aala shoraa ki nazar gar khaaksaar ko naseeb ho jaae to kalaam me sone chaandi ke wark chaDh jaate hain.....
dil ki garaaiyon se mashkoor o mamnoon hooon aapkaa... aamad banae rakhiyegaa
Shaad bhai....hamesha se aap khoob hi likhte ho, so kya tareef karu aapki shayri ki, haa yeh baat alag hai ki kuch ehsaas aise hote hai jo seedhe dil par asar karte hai, lagta hai ki yeh mere dil ki baat hi kahi hai....aisa hi ek ehsaas...!!
jo agar paDh sako to paDh lenaa
Khat me bheje hain kuch mere aansoo
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
Shaad bhai....hamesha se aap khoob hi likhte ho, so kya tareef karu aapki shayri ki, haa yeh baat alag hai ki kuch ehsaas aise hote hai jo seedhe dil par asar karte hai, lagta hai ki yeh mere dil ki baat hi kahi hai....aisa hi ek ehsaas...!!
jo agar paDh sako to paDh lenaa
Khat me bheje hain kuch mere aansoo
tahe dil se aapka shukr guzaar hoon Sunita dee.... aapne jo alfaazon ki gahraai me chupe hue ehsaason ko pakad liyaa hai, aur pasand kiyaa hai....
shad sahab bahut hi zabardast kalam se
sajaya he aapne bazm ko
yuhi Dillon ko khilate rahiye
super .,......peshkash
SHAKIR ALI
derii se jawaab dene ke liye muaafii ka arzmand hoon.....
aur shukrguzaar hoon jo aapne mujhe is laayaq samjha , is kalaam ko pasand karne ke liye tahe dil se shukriyaa aapka... aate rahiyegaa
Samandar sa baną dete hain Ansoon
Na gava inhein Anmol hain Ansoon
Kuch Shaakh tufanon mein hilte hain jab
Baraste hain fir kuch Ansoon
Aaya jo toofan chala bhi jayega
Ek Indradhanush bhi layainge ye Ansoon
Beautiful poetry Shaad.Remember that Tears are really precious.Kčep Smiling
kyaa baat hai Sukanya dee... aapne bahot hi khoobsurat kalaam ke andaaz me jawaab diyaa hai, mujhe aapke ehsaas behad pasand aaye.... aur bahut shukriyaa aapka jo aapne is kalaam ko pasand kiyaa hai...
Khoob ehsaas hue hai mere bhai mukhtasar si baat ko itni gehraayi mein bayaan kiya hai ki bas kya kahein.......yunhi bazm mein humhe nayaab nagme dete rahiye
aapki daad aur duaaon ke liye tahe dil se shukrguzaar hoon mere bhai...
aate rahiyegaa , aapka saath banae rakkhen..