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Post ~* merii jaan terii sharaarateN *~ - 30th October 2015, 02:32 PM
Ahle bazm ko shaad kaa aadaab, muddat ke baad likhne baiTha to jaane kin ehsaason kin khayaalon me kho gayaa... aur yaq bayaq kalam bhi chalne lagee.. thamne par jo saamne aks ubhar kar aaya to nazm jaisi shaql ikhtiyaar huii... aap sab ke saamne pesh kar rahaa hoon chand khayaal, nosh farmaaiyegaa aur apnii keemtii raay se nawaaziyegaa....... shukriyaa.



wo gaye dino ki nawaazisheN,
wohii aashiqii wo muhabbateN.
meri jaan lene lagii hain ab
merii jaan terii sharaarateN.

wo har ek baat pe rooThnaa,
meraa terii baahon me TooTnaa,
mujhe jaan se pyaari lagen,
terii choTi choTi shiqaayateN.


tujhe dekhne ki hai aas bhii,
tu hai door bhii tu hai paas bhii,
mujhe Khwaab me dikhne lagee,
terii berukhii terii aadateN.

merii hasraton ka sawaal hai,
teraa husn hai ke jamaal hai.
terii ik jhalak mil jaae to,
terii laakh hoNgii inaayateN.

mashhoor hai kissaa meraa,
tujhe kahte haiN hissaa meraa,
mujhe khauf-e-duniyaa na rahaa,
manzoor saarii tohmateN.

hai Gazab ye kaisii museebateN,
ye kahaan se aatii hain aafateN,
tere rukh se GhooonGhaT kyaa uThaa,
yahaaN uTh rahii hain qayaamateN..


Shaad...........

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Ahle bazm ko shaad kaa aadaab, muddat ke baad likhne baiTha to jaane kin ehsaason kin khayaalon me kho gayaa... aur yaq bayaq kalam bhi chalne lagee.. thamne par jo saamne aks ubhar kar aaya to nazm jaisi shaql ikhtiyaar huii... aap sab ke saamne pesh kar rahaa hoon chand khayaal, nosh farmaaiyegaa aur apnii keemtii raay se nawaaziyegaa....... shukriyaa.



wo gaye dino ki nawaazisheN,
wohii aashiqii wo muhabbateN.
meri jaan lene lagii hain ab
merii jaan terii sharaarateN.

wo har ek baat pe rooThnaa,
meraa terii baahon me TooTnaa,
mujhe jaan se pyaari lagen,
terii choTi choTi shiqaayateN.


tujhe dekhne ki hai aas bhii,
tu hai door bhii tu hai paas bhii,
mujhe Khwaab me dikhne lagee,
terii berukhii terii aadateN.

merii hasraton ka sawaal hai,
teraa husn hai ke jamaal hai.
terii ik jhalak mil jaae to,
terii laakh hoNgii inaayateN.

mashhoor hai kissaa meraa,
tujhe kahte haiN hissaa meraa,
mujhe khauf-e-duniyaa na rahaa,
manzoor saarii tohmateN.

hai Gazab ye kaisii museebateN,
ye kahaan se aatii hain aafateN,
tere rukh se GhooonGhaT kyaa uDaa,
yahaaN uTh rahii hain qayaamateN..


Shaad...........

Waaah!!....kya kahoon...itni pyari nazm likhi hai aapne... kya khoob muhabbat bhare ehsaas hain ki bas padhne wala kho hee jaye...shuruaat se aakhir tak khoobsoorat.....dilkash tohfa diya hai aapne mahfil ko .....

Bahut mubarak baad....aur dil se duayein..ki yun hee muhabbat bhare nagme likhte rahein aap.....

Hamesha khush rahein.....


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Ahle bazm ko shaad kaa aadaab, muddat ke baad likhne baiTha to jaane kin ehsaason kin khayaalon me kho gayaa... aur yaq bayaq kalam bhi chalne lagee.. thamne par jo saamne aks ubhar kar aaya to nazm jaisi shaql ikhtiyaar huii... aap sab ke saamne pesh kar rahaa hoon chand khayaal, nosh farmaaiyegaa aur apnii keemtii raay se nawaaziyegaa....... shukriyaa.



wo gaye dino ki nawaazisheN,
wohii aashiqii wo muhabbateN.
meri jaan lene lagii hain ab
merii jaan terii sharaarateN.

wo har ek baat pe rooThnaa,
meraa terii baahon me TooTnaa,
mujhe jaan se pyaari lagen,
terii choTi choTi shiqaayateN.


tujhe dekhne ki hai aas bhii,
tu hai door bhii tu hai paas bhii,
mujhe Khwaab me dikhne lagee,
terii berukhii terii aadateN.

merii hasraton ka sawaal hai,
teraa husn hai ke jamaal hai.
terii ik jhalak mil jaae to,
terii laakh hoNgii inaayateN.

mashhoor hai kissaa meraa,
tujhe kahte haiN hissaa meraa,
mujhe khauf-e-duniyaa na rahaa,
manzoor saarii tohmateN.

hai Gazab ye kaisii museebateN,
ye kahaan se aatii hain aafateN,
tere rukh se GhooonGhaT kyaa uThaa,
yahaaN uTh rahii hain qayaamateN..


Shaad...........
Janaab is haseen aur dil fareb nazm par khaaksaar ki daad qubool farmaiye yakeen maaniye chehre par ek muskaan si aa gayi hai....Bahut naazuk Bahut taaza lage yeh ashaar.....

Yunhi bazm roshan rakhiYeGaa


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Waaah!!....kya kahoon...itni pyari nazm likhi hai aapne... kya khoob muhabbat bhare ehsaas hain ki bas padhne wala kho hee jaye...shuruaat se aakhir tak khoobsoorat.....dilkash tohfa diya hai aapne mahfil ko .....

Bahut mubarak baad....aur dil se duayein..ki yun hee muhabbat bhare nagme likhte rahein aap.....

Hamesha khush rahein.....
khaak lafzon ko pasand karne ke liye aapka tahe dil se shukrguzaar hoon madhu saahibaa..... tashreef laati rahiiye khush rahiye...

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Janaab is haseen aur dil fareb nazm par khaaksaar ki daad qubool farmaiye yakeen maaniye chehre par ek muskaan si aa gayi hai....Bahut naazuk Bahut taaza lage yeh ashaar.....

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Ahle bazm ko shaad kaa aadaab, muddat ke baad likhne baiTha to jaane kin ehsaason kin khayaalon me kho gayaa... aur yaq bayaq kalam bhi chalne lagee.. thamne par jo saamne aks ubhar kar aaya to nazm jaisi shaql ikhtiyaar huii... aap sab ke saamne pesh kar rahaa hoon chand khayaal, nosh farmaaiyegaa aur apnii keemtii raay se nawaaziyegaa....... shukriyaa.



wo gaye dino ki nawaazisheN,
wohii aashiqii wo muhabbateN.
meri jaan lene lagii hain ab
merii jaan terii sharaarateN.

wo har ek baat pe rooThnaa,
meraa terii baahon me TooTnaa,
mujhe jaan se pyaari lagen,
terii choTi choTi shiqaayateN.


tujhe dekhne ki hai aas bhii,
tu hai door bhii tu hai paas bhii,
mujhe Khwaab me dikhne lagee,
terii berukhii terii aadateN.

merii hasraton ka sawaal hai,
teraa husn hai ke jamaal hai.
terii ik jhalak mil jaae to,
terii laakh hoNgii inaayateN.

mashhoor hai kissaa meraa,
tujhe kahte haiN hissaa meraa,
mujhe khauf-e-duniyaa na rahaa,
manzoor saarii tohmateN.

hai Gazab ye kaisii museebateN,
ye kahaan se aatii hain aafateN,
tere rukh se GhooonGhaT kyaa uThaa,
yahaaN uTh rahii hain qayaamateN..


Shaad...........
Aadaab Shoaib miyaan,

Bahut hi zordaar lagi aapki yeh bayaaani... Ehsaas se bharpoor, har sher apne aap me mukammal hai... Meri dil se dheron daad kubool karen... Yun hi mehfil ki shobha badhaate rahen...

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6th November 2015, 11:23 PM
Waah Shaad bhai waah

Bahut khoobsurat Ghazal ki ibadatein
kalam tumahara lata hay qayamatein

After a long time read one of your best creations.keep up the good work.

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