*~* Mohabbat Zindagi Ban Jati Hai *~*

Taish · 08:32 PM

bazm ke sare aashiqon ko is nacheez aashiq ka salaam,

Ishq ki anjaan galiyon me aaj phir is nacheez aashiq ne shirkat ki hai.ek aur bahut puraana kalaam aap sab ke nazar kar raha hoon bas isi umeed ke saath ki ye kalaam bhi aap sabhi ko bhaayega.

har dard ki hoti alag jubaani,har palak pe baithi ek alag kahaani,koi to bataye mujhe,kyun wo kisi aur ki deewani,kyun jo ishq behta aankhon se meri,use ye jug kehta paani,wahi dard se bhara raha bachpan,aur wahi rahi khaufnak jawaani,tu aaj sunlo is ghayal ki kahani,uske un ashkon ki jubaani...........

Maanta hun ki zindagi bhi tadpati hai,
Par mohabbat to jeena sikhati hai,
Zindagi mohabbat nahi ho sakti kabhi,
Par mohabbat zindagi ban jaati hai.

Mohabbat ek jaanlewa aadat hai,
Jisme hoti shikwa-shikayat hai,
Par aashiqon k liye to,
Yahi unka khuda aur yahi ibadat hai.
Wo mohabbat hi to hai yaar,
Jo jeevan ko haseen banati hai.
Zindagi mohabbat nahi ho sakti kabhi,
Par mohabbat zindagi ban jaati hai.

Mohabbat hi saathi aur tanhaai hai,
Yahi hoti hansi aur yahi rulaai hai,
Isi me hote kasme wade saare,
Aur isi me hoti bewafai hai.
Wo mohabbat hi hoti hai,
Jab aankhon me koi samati hai.
Zindagi mohabbat nahi ho sakti kabhi,
Par mohabbat zindagi ban jaati hai.

Mohabbat me sab majboor hote hain,
Kabhi paas to kabhi door hote hain,
Par job hi ho jaye samaa,
Wo ishq ke nashe me choor hote hain.
Jab yaaden zannat ban jaati hain,
To wo mohabbat kehlati hai,
Zindagi mohabbat nahi ho sakti kabhi,
Par mohabbat zindagi ban jaati hai.

Jab koi bediyon ko payal kar jaati hai,
Har jhalak uski,kayal kar jati hai.
Jab hota uska mehfil me aana,
Uski har ada hume bas“ghayal”kar jati hai.
Wo mohabbat ki daastan hai ki,
Har saans me kisi ki khusboo aati hai,
Zindagi mohabbat nahi ho sakti kabhi,
Par mohabbat zindagi ban jaati hai.

Maanta hun ki zindagi bhi tadpati hai,
Par mohabbat to jeena sikhati hai,
Zindagi mohabbat nahi ho sakti kabhi,
Par mohabbat zindagi ban jaati hai.

pooja_d · **Re: *~* Mohabbat Zindagi Ban Jati Hai *~* -** 11th September 2006, 08:40 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by ghayal_shayar
bazm ke sare aashiqon ko is nacheez aashiq ka salaam,

Ishq ki anjaan galiyon me aaj phir is nacheez aashiq ne shirkat ki hai.ek aur bahut puraana kalaam aap sab ke nazar kar raha hoon bas isi umeed ke saath ki ye kalaam bhi aap sabhi ko bhaayega.

har dard ki hoti alag jubaani,har palak pe baithi ek alag kahaani,koi to bataye mujhe,kyun wo kisi aur ki deewani,kyun jo ishq behta aankhon se meri,use ye jug kehta paani,wahi dard se bhara raha bachpan,aur wahi rahi khaufnak jawaani,tu aaj sunlo is ghayal ki kahani,uske un ashkon ki jubaani...........

Maanta hun ki zindagi bhi tadpati hai,
Par mohabbat to jeena sikhati hai,
Zindagi mohabbat nahi ho sakti kabhi,
Par mohabbat zindagi ban jaati hai.

Mohabbat ek jaanlewa aadat hai,
Jisme hoti shikwa-shikayat hai,
Par aashiqon k liye to,
Yahi unka khuda aur yahi ibadat hai.
Wo mohabbat hi to hai yaar,
Jo jeevan ko haseen banati hai.
Zindagi mohabbat nahi ho sakti kabhi,
Par mohabbat zindagi ban jaati hai.

Mohabbat hi saathi aur tanhaai hai,
Yahi hoti hansi aur yahi rulaai hai,
Isi me hote kasme wade saare,
Aur isi me hoti bewafai hai.
Wo mohabbat hi hoti hai,
Jab aankhon me koi samati hai.
Zindagi mohabbat nahi ho sakti kabhi,
Par mohabbat zindagi ban jaati hai.

Mohabbat me sab majboor hote hain,
Kabhi paas to kabhi door hote hain,
Par job hi ho jaye samaa,
Wo ishq ke nashe me choor hote hain.
Jab yaaden zannat ban jaati hain,
To wo mohabbat kehlati hai,
Zindagi mohabbat nahi ho sakti kabhi,
Par mohabbat zindagi ban jaati hai.

Jab koi bediyon ko payal kar jaati hai,
Har jhalak uski,kayal kar jati hai.
Jab hota uska mehfil me aana,
Uski har ada hume bas“ghayal”kar jati hai.
Wo mohabbat ki daastan hai ki,
Har saans me kisi ki khusboo aati hai,
Zindagi mohabbat nahi ho sakti kabhi,
Par mohabbat zindagi ban jaati hai.

Maanta hun ki zindagi bhi tadpati hai,
Par mohabbat to jeena sikhati hai,
Zindagi mohabbat nahi ho sakti kabhi,
Par mohabbat zindagi ban jaati hai.

wah ghayal ji
aaj aapke in ghayal shabdon se to hum ghayal ho gaye. mean bahot hi achhe alfaaz hai aapki shayri me.

aur kya kahu sach me bahot hi khoob likha hai khass kar ye

Jab koi bediyon ko payal kar jaati hai,
Har jhalak uski,kayal kar jati hai.
Jab hota uska mehfil me aana,
Uski har ada hume bas“ghayal”kar jati hai.
Wo mohabbat ki daastan hai ki,
Har saans me kisi ki khusboo aati hai,
Zindagi mohabbat nahi ho sakti kabhi,
Par mohabbat zindagi ban jaati hai.

bahot hi pyara likha hai aapne.

ab ummid nahi karungi ki aap unhi likhte rahenge. kyu ki yakeen hai ki aap likhenge.

aapki dost
pooja

Dhaval · 12th September 2006, 10:03 AM

hi janab ghayal ji

aapki ye peshkas har bar ki tarha bahot hi umda hai

aur har lafz bahot hi achhe hai ,

aapkli tarif pehle hi ho chuki hai ab main kya kahu aur kuch bas aapki age aur bhi pehkas hame padhne ko mile yehi ummid karte hai aapse

aapka dost
dhaval

Taish

Quote:

Originally posted by pooja4588
wah ghayal ji
aaj aapke in ghayal shabdon se to hum ghayal ho gaye. mean bahot hi achhe alfaaz hai aapki shayri me.

aur kya kahu sach me bahot hi khoob likha hai khass kar ye

Jab koi bediyon ko payal kar jaati hai,
Har jhalak uski,kayal kar jati hai.
Jab hota uska mehfil me aana,
Uski har ada hume bas“ghayal”kar jati hai.
Wo mohabbat ki daastan hai ki,
Har saans me kisi ki khusboo aati hai,
Zindagi mohabbat nahi ho sakti kabhi,
Par mohabbat zindagi ban jaati hai.

bahot hi pyara likha hai aapne.

ab ummid nahi karungi ki aap unhi likhte rahenge. kyu ki yakeen hai ki aap likhenge.

aapki dost
pooja

shukriya aapka.waise ek baat kahun main kabhi kisi ko ghayal karna nahi chahta tha bas ghayal rehna chahta tha.waise aapko ahcha laga jaan kar khushi hui.umeed karta hun ki aage v aap padhte hi rahiyega hume.aur hume to likhna hi padega wo to humari zindagi hi hain.

Taish · 12th September 2006, 10:45 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by dhavalrami4you
hi janab ghayal ji

aapki ye peshkas har bar ki tarha bahot hi umda hai

aur har lafz bahot hi achhe hai ,

aapkli tarif pehle hi ho chuki hai ab main kya kahu aur kuch bas aapki age aur bhi pehkas hame padhne ko mile yehi ummid karte hai aapse

aapka dost
dhaval

dhaval ji shayad pehli baar aap aaye hain humari mehfil me aane ka bahut bahut shukriya.ahcha laga jaan kar ki aapko humara kalaam pasand aaya.aur hum koi tareef ke k\abil nahi wo to bas padhne wale ka nazariya hai jo unhe aisa lagta hai.nahi to hum nacheez kisi kabil nahi.aur maine regular likhta rehta hun ye kalaam to bahut purana tha.isiliye itni umeed aap rakh sakte hain ki ghayal mehfil humesha sajti rahegi.umeed hai aap aage v yunhi humari mehfil ki rangat badhate rahenge.

ISHIQA AGGARWAL · **Re: *~* Mohabbat Zindagi Ban Jati Hai *~* -** 16th September 2006, 04:09 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by ghayal_shayar
bazm ke sare aashiqon ko is nacheez aashiq ka salaam,

Ishq ki anjaan galiyon me aaj phir is nacheez aashiq ne shirkat ki hai.ek aur bahut puraana kalaam aap sab ke nazar kar raha hoon bas isi umeed ke saath ki ye kalaam bhi aap sabhi ko bhaayega.

har dard ki hoti alag jubaani,har palak pe baithi ek alag kahaani,koi to bataye mujhe,kyun wo kisi aur ki deewani,kyun jo ishq behta aankhon se meri,use ye jug kehta paani,wahi dard se bhara raha bachpan,aur wahi rahi khaufnak jawaani,tu aaj sunlo is ghayal ki kahani,uske un ashkon ki jubaani...........

Maanta hun ki zindagi bhi tadpati hai,
Par mohabbat to jeena sikhati hai,
Zindagi mohabbat nahi ho sakti kabhi,
Par mohabbat zindagi ban jaati hai.

Mohabbat ek jaanlewa aadat hai,
Jisme hoti shikwa-shikayat hai,
Par aashiqon k liye to,
Yahi unka khuda aur yahi ibadat hai.
Wo mohabbat hi to hai yaar,
Jo jeevan ko haseen banati hai.
Zindagi mohabbat nahi ho sakti kabhi,
Par mohabbat zindagi ban jaati hai.

Mohabbat hi saathi aur tanhaai hai,
Yahi hoti hansi aur yahi rulaai hai,
Isi me hote kasme wade saare,
Aur isi me hoti bewafai hai.
Wo mohabbat hi hoti hai,
Jab aankhon me koi samati hai.
Zindagi mohabbat nahi ho sakti kabhi,
Par mohabbat zindagi ban jaati hai.

Mohabbat me sab majboor hote hain,
Kabhi paas to kabhi door hote hain,
Par job hi ho jaye samaa,
Wo ishq ke nashe me choor hote hain.
Jab yaaden zannat ban jaati hain,
To wo mohabbat kehlati hai,
Zindagi mohabbat nahi ho sakti kabhi,
Par mohabbat zindagi ban jaati hai.

Jab koi bediyon ko payal kar jaati hai,
Har jhalak uski,kayal kar jati hai.
Jab hota uska mehfil me aana,
Uski har ada hume bas“ghayal”kar jati hai.
Wo mohabbat ki daastan hai ki,
Har saans me kisi ki khusboo aati hai,
Zindagi mohabbat nahi ho sakti kabhi,
Par mohabbat zindagi ban jaati hai.

Maanta hun ki zindagi bhi tadpati hai,
Par mohabbat to jeena sikhati hai,
Zindagi mohabbat nahi ho sakti kabhi,
Par mohabbat zindagi ban jaati hai.

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ISHIQA AGGARWAL · **Re: *~* Mohabbat Zindagi Ban Jati Hai *~* -** 16th September 2006, 04:16 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by ghayal_shayar
bazm ke sare aashiqon ko is nacheez aashiq ka salaam,

Ishq ki anjaan galiyon me aaj phir is nacheez aashiq ne shirkat ki hai.ek aur bahut puraana kalaam aap sab ke nazar kar raha hoon bas isi umeed ke saath ki ye kalaam bhi aap sabhi ko bhaayega.

har dard ki hoti alag jubaani,har palak pe baithi ek alag kahaani,koi to bataye mujhe,kyun wo kisi aur ki deewani,kyun jo ishq behta aankhon se meri,use ye jug kehta paani,wahi dard se bhara raha bachpan,aur wahi rahi khaufnak jawaani,tu aaj sunlo is ghayal ki kahani,uske un ashkon ki jubaani...........

Maanta hun ki zindagi bhi tadpati hai,
Par mohabbat to jeena sikhati hai,
Zindagi mohabbat nahi ho sakti kabhi,
Par mohabbat zindagi ban jaati hai.

Mohabbat ek jaanlewa aadat hai,
Jisme hoti shikwa-shikayat hai,
Par aashiqon k liye to,
Yahi unka khuda aur yahi ibadat hai.
Wo mohabbat hi to hai yaar,
Jo jeevan ko haseen banati hai.
Zindagi mohabbat nahi ho sakti kabhi,
Par mohabbat zindagi ban jaati hai.

Mohabbat hi saathi aur tanhaai hai,
Yahi hoti hansi aur yahi rulaai hai,
Isi me hote kasme wade saare,
Aur isi me hoti bewafai hai.
Wo mohabbat hi hoti hai,
Jab aankhon me koi samati hai.
Zindagi mohabbat nahi ho sakti kabhi,
Par mohabbat zindagi ban jaati hai.

Mohabbat me sab majboor hote hain,
Kabhi paas to kabhi door hote hain,
Par job hi ho jaye samaa,
Wo ishq ke nashe me choor hote hain.
Jab yaaden zannat ban jaati hain,
To wo mohabbat kehlati hai,
Zindagi mohabbat nahi ho sakti kabhi,
Par mohabbat zindagi ban jaati hai.

Jab koi bediyon ko payal kar jaati hai,
Har jhalak uski,kayal kar jati hai.
Jab hota uska mehfil me aana,
Uski har ada hume bas“ghayal”kar jati hai.
Wo mohabbat ki daastan hai ki,
Har saans me kisi ki khusboo aati hai,
Zindagi mohabbat nahi ho sakti kabhi,
Par mohabbat zindagi ban jaati hai.

Maanta hun ki zindagi bhi tadpati hai,
Par mohabbat to jeena sikhati hai,
Zindagi mohabbat nahi ho sakti kabhi,
Par mohabbat zindagi ban jaati hai.

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Taish

Quote:

Originally posted by ISHIQA AGGARWAL
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sunita thakur · **Re: *~* Mohabbat Zindagi Ban Jati Hai *~* -** 18th September 2006, 10:10 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by ghayal_shayar
bazm ke sare aashiqon ko is nacheez aashiq ka salaam,

Ishq ki anjaan galiyon me aaj phir is nacheez aashiq ne shirkat ki hai.ek aur bahut puraana kalaam aap sab ke nazar kar raha hoon bas isi umeed ke saath ki ye kalaam bhi aap sabhi ko bhaayega.

har dard ki hoti alag jubaani,har palak pe baithi ek alag kahaani,koi to bataye mujhe,kyun wo kisi aur ki deewani,kyun jo ishq behta aankhon se meri,use ye jug kehta paani,wahi dard se bhara raha bachpan,aur wahi rahi khaufnak jawaani,tu aaj sunlo is ghayal ki kahani,uske un ashkon ki jubaani...........

Maanta hun ki zindagi bhi tadpati hai,
Par mohabbat to jeena sikhati hai,
Zindagi mohabbat nahi ho sakti kabhi,
Par mohabbat zindagi ban jaati hai.

Mohabbat ek jaanlewa aadat hai,
Jisme hoti shikwa-shikayat hai,
Par aashiqon k liye to,
Yahi unka khuda aur yahi ibadat hai.
Wo mohabbat hi to hai yaar,
Jo jeevan ko haseen banati hai.
Zindagi mohabbat nahi ho sakti kabhi,
Par mohabbat zindagi ban jaati hai.

Mohabbat hi saathi aur tanhaai hai,
Yahi hoti hansi aur yahi rulaai hai,
Isi me hote kasme wade saare,
Aur isi me hoti bewafai hai.
Wo mohabbat hi hoti hai,
Jab aankhon me koi samati hai.
Zindagi mohabbat nahi ho sakti kabhi,
Par mohabbat zindagi ban jaati hai.

Mohabbat me sab majboor hote hain,
Kabhi paas to kabhi door hote hain,
Par job hi ho jaye samaa,
Wo ishq ke nashe me choor hote hain.
Jab yaaden zannat ban jaati hain,
To wo mohabbat kehlati hai,
Zindagi mohabbat nahi ho sakti kabhi,
Par mohabbat zindagi ban jaati hai.

Jab koi bediyon ko payal kar jaati hai,
Har jhalak uski,kayal kar jati hai.
Jab hota uska mehfil me aana,
Uski har ada hume bas“ghayal”kar jati hai.
Wo mohabbat ki daastan hai ki,
Har saans me kisi ki khusboo aati hai,
Zindagi mohabbat nahi ho sakti kabhi,
Par mohabbat zindagi ban jaati hai.

Maanta hun ki zindagi bhi tadpati hai,
Par mohabbat to jeena sikhati hai,
Zindagi mohabbat nahi ho sakti kabhi,
Par mohabbat zindagi ban jaati hai.

lucky ji namaskar.....!

aaj aapko phele baar shayri-e-ishq par pad rahi hu, koi khaas baat lagti hai. kyuki aaj tak aapko shayri-e-dard par hi janna hai. vaise aapne jo likha hai bahut umda likha hai, aur ek ek ashiaar dil ko chu gaya. vaise to main bhi yehi chahti hu ki shayri-e-dard ki bajaye sabhi shayri-e-ishq par hi gungunaaye, i m joking dont take it seriously.

bahut badiya likha hai, dil se mubarakbaad kabool kijiye.

appki dost

Taish

Quote:

Originally posted by sunita virender
lucky ji namaskar.....!

aaj aapko phele baar shayri-e-ishq par pad rahi hu, koi khaas baat lagti hai. kyuki aaj tak aapko shayri-e-dard par hi janna hai. vaise aapne jo likha hai bahut umda likha hai, aur ek ek ashiaar dil ko chu gaya. vaise to main bhi yehi chahti hu ki shayri-e-dard ki bajaye sabhi shayri-e-ishq par hi gungunaaye, i m joking dont take it seriously.

bahut badiya likha hai, dil se mubarakbaad kabool kijiye.

appki dost

sunita ji shukriya is kalaam ko pasand karne ke liye.waise humne ishq pe v kaafi likha hai.haan aaj kal kam ho gaya hai ishq pe likhna.kyunki ab ishq se humara vaasta hi nahi raha hai.ishq se chiddh si hone lagi hai.par dil ki gehraaiyon pe jab ehshaash hiloren maarne lagen to likh lete hain is mehfil me v.bas guzarish yahi rahegi ki aap aage v hume yunhi padhti rahen.

zainy · 29th January 2010, 02:39 PM

Bohat khoobsurat ehsaas hain lucky jii..................

sajid_ghayel · 4th February 2010, 07:20 PM

Zindagi mohabbat nahi ho sakti kabhi,
Par mohabbat zindagi ban jaati hai.

Bohat bohat khoobsurat Geet likha hain aapne Ghayal Saheb......dad kabool kare.

Taish · 12th June 2010, 03:22 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by sajid_ghayel

Zindagi mohabbat nahi ho sakti kabhi,
Par mohabbat zindagi ban jaati hai.

Bohat bohat khoobsurat Geet likha hain aapne Ghayal Saheb......dad kabool kare.

aapki dad humare sar aankhoN pe sajid bhai maafi chahuNga ki itni der se javaab diya par kya kareN waqt ki mashroofiyaton ne kabhi khud ke shaukoN ko bhula sa diya hai, par bas umeed karuNga ki aap saath bana rahega...!!

aapka GHAYAL...!!