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1st August 2010, 04:56 PM
badlon ne jhoom ke kaha
lo savan aa gya
kaali ghataen ga uthi
aaha ye savan aa gya
kusum munh utha ke bole
parwar digar shukria
rim jim fuharain barsengi
vada karain ye badrian
mitti ki sondhi khushbu se
mahak uthegi ye dhra
her saans me jashan 2
her ang me nasha 2
kaise khushi se naach uthi hain
baalkon ki tollian
hain ye aaj kitni mitthi
panchion ki bollian
hasrton ne karwatain li
man bhi gunguna utha
ab ke savan jam ke varse
vishwash rang la utha
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1st August 2010, 07:18 PM
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Originally Posted by Rashmi sharma
badlon ne jhoom ke kaha
lo savan aa gya
kaali ghataen ga uthi
aaha ye savan aa gya
kusum munh utha ke bole
parwar digar shukria
rim jim fuharain barsengi
vada karain ye badrian
mitti ki sondhi khushbu se
mahak uthegi ye dhra
her saans me jashan 2
her ang me nasha 2
kaise khushi se naach uthi hain
baalkon ki tollian
hain ye aaj kitni mitthi
panchion ki bollian
hasrton ne karwatain li
man bhi gunguna utha
ab ke savan jam ke varse
vishwash rang la utha
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bahut khoob rashmi ji.................
'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali
Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho
Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi....
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6th August 2010, 02:48 PM
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bahut khoob rashmi ji.................
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shukria vikram ji'''''',,,,,,,''''''''''',,,,,,,,,,
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6th August 2010, 08:18 PM
reshmi very well said keep it up
pawan(shayari)
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7th August 2010, 01:08 PM
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reshmi very well said keep it up
pawan(shayari)
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Pawan ji shukria aapne meri rachna ko samaya diya.plz do not mind my name is rashmi not reshmi. regards. once again thankyou for the compliment
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7th August 2010, 02:13 PM
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Originally Posted by Rashmi sharma
badlon ne jhoom ke kaha
lo savan aa gya
kaali ghataen ga uthi
aaha ye savan aa gya
kusum munh utha ke bole
parwar digar shukria
rim jim fuharain barsengi
vada karain ye badrian
mitti ki sondhi khushbu se
mahak uthegi ye dhra
her saans me jashan 2
her ang me nasha 2
kaise khushi se naach uthi hain
baalkon ki tollian
hain ye aaj kitni mitthi
panchion ki bollian
hasrton ne karwatain li
man bhi gunguna utha
ab ke savan jam ke varse
vishwash rang la utha
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Aapki rachna ke ehsaas bahut khoobsurat lage mujhe...dil se daad !
duaaon ke saath...
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
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7th August 2010, 03:16 PM
kamaal ki sajeev rachna hai. kavita ko padhte hue apke dwara racha gaya sara mahoul apne ird gird ghoomta mahsoos hota hai. vatt kadh ditte rss. bhai bahut khus hua.
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8th August 2010, 09:51 PM
shukria big b aapko savan ki rimjim ne or koyal ki madhur aavaz ne khush kiya
per ab lagta hai ke kheer pudhon ki kami reh gai
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11th August 2010, 01:27 PM
Good post. Thanks for sharing............
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11th August 2010, 05:19 PM
wow...............bahut khoob.
Rashmi jiii, aaj aapki kavita padkar bahut anand aaya, ek to bahar barish ho rahi hai, rim-jim gire sawan aur opper se aapki kavita.....bahut bahut bahuttttttttt khoobsurat mahol bana aapki kavita padne ka....good work.
aapki dost
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11th August 2010, 05:23 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Rashmi sharma
badlon ne jhoom ke kaha
lo savan aa gya
kaali ghataen ga uthi
aaha ye savan aa gya
kusum munh utha ke bole
parwar digar shukria
rim jim fuharain barsengi
vada karain ye badrian
mitti ki sondhi khushbu se
mahak uthegi ye dhra
her saans me jashan 2
her ang me nasha 2
kaise khushi se naach uthi hain
baalkon ki tollian
hain ye aaj kitni mitthi
panchion ki bollian
hasrton ne karwatain li
man bhi gunguna utha
ab ke savan jam ke varse
vishwash rang la utha
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rashmi jee
radhe radhe
jab bahar baarish ho rahi ho tab isko padhne me aur jyada anand aata hai aur is samay khoob tej baarish ho rahi hai
bahut achha lag raha hai sawan me sawan ke baare me padhna
aiise hi likhti rahen
duaon ke saath
Aapka Apna Ishk
'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है
इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है
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13th August 2010, 10:20 PM
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Aapki rachna ke ehsaas bahut khoobsurat lage mujhe...dil se daad !
duaaon ke saath...
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shukria naresh ji aapne meri rachna ko samya diya.thanks once again
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13th August 2010, 10:28 PM
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wow...............bahut khoob.
Rashmi jiii, aaj aapki kavita padkar bahut anand aaya, ek to bahar barish ho rahi hai, rim-jim gire sawan aur opper se aapki kavita.....bahut bahut bahuttttttttt khoobsurat mahol bana aapki kavita padne ka....good work.
aapki dost
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shukria sunita ji ye meri saari hi rachnaaye bahut purani hai ab to waqat hi bahut kum mil pata hai. shayri.com ki aisi lat lag gai hai ,ki thoda samaya milta hai idher daudhti hoon . naya kaam to "bachpan" ya fir "ajj di maa" hai"
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15th August 2010, 11:27 PM
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rashmi jee
radhe radhe
jab bahar baarish ho rahi ho tab isko padhne me aur jyada anand aata hai aur is samay khoob tej baarish ho rahi hai
bahut achha lag raha hai sawan me sawan ke baare me padhna
aiise hi likhti rahen
duaon ke saath
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shukria rajinder ji , meri ye rachna aapkeliye sawan ki rimjim fuharen leke aai .vehad shukargujar hoon ji
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20th August 2010, 08:36 PM
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Good post. Thanks for sharing............
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thankyou pali ji, thanks very much
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