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tumse baate do-char hain........ -
17th August 2010, 11:45 PM
vo mehfooz thi mere dil ke aashiyane me...
aaj akhbaar phada to pata chala ghar bik rahe hain baazaro main vo daarate the hume ishq ke imtihano se.... unhe pata na tha hum imthihano se nahi natijo se darte hain vo kehte the tujh sa koi saathi nahi hume hi pata naa tha saath saathi ka nahi sikko ka bhala hain vo aate the satrangi armaano ki saugat leke hume saugaat main indradhanush ke rang nahi gehre kaale jkahm mile vo jab bhi milte the nazre jukha lete the hamari nazre jhuk jaati hai unki roosvaiyo ko yaad karke Aur yeh kaisa fareb hain yeh kaisi zindagi aaj bhi milti hain to kehti hain tumse baate do-char hain Aandhiya Gam Ki Chalegi To Sawar Jaoonga Me Mai To Dariya Hu Samoondar Me Utar Jaaonga Me Mujhe Suli Pe Chadane Ki Jaroorat Kya Hai Logo Mere Haato Se Kalam Cheen Lo Yuhi Mar Jaoonga Me (When i received You in my heart everything changed for me) |
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18th August 2010, 04:36 PM
[QUOTE=amit7600;406395]vo mehfooz thi mere dil ke aashiyane me...
aaj akhbaar phada to pata chala ghar bik rahe hain baazaro main vo daarate the hume ishq ke imtihano se.... unhe pata na tha hum imthihano se nahi natijo se darte hain vo kehte the tujh sa koi saathi nahi hume hi pata naa tha saath saathi ka nahi sikko ka bhala hain vo aate the satrangi armaano ki saugat leke hume saugaat main indradhanush ke rang nahi gehre kaale jkahm mile vo jab bhi milte the nazre jukha lete the hamari nazre jhuk jaati hai unki roosvaiyo ko yaad karke Aur wah amit saheb kya khub likha ahsas ko saral sabdo me piroya hai dil ko choo gaya yah ahsas vo jab bhi milte the nazre jukha lete the hamari nazre jhuk jaati hai unki roosvaiyo ko yaad karke Aur daad hajir hai apaki didi shakun didi |
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18th August 2010, 09:18 PM
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kaise haiN aap...? aapke ye lafz mere dil ke aNdar tak uttar gaye haiN, bahut sehaj shabdoN meiN dil ki dastaaN saamne rakhi hai aapne...achha laga padh kar... daad haazir hai, qubuul kijiyega... aapka... Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi.... vikramjethi@gmail.com |
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18th August 2010, 09:20 PM
very good ....... kamaal ka ehsaas .... deergh ayu ho vatas
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19th August 2010, 11:49 PM
meri kavita se ek rishta bana....kavita likhne ka maqsad poora hua didi....
aapko jo bhi pasand aaya uske liye koti koti dhnyavad.... duao me yaad rakhe..... shbba khair.... Aandhiya Gam Ki Chalegi To Sawar Jaoonga Me Mai To Dariya Hu Samoondar Me Utar Jaaonga Me Mujhe Suli Pe Chadane Ki Jaroorat Kya Hai Logo Mere Haato Se Kalam Cheen Lo Yuhi Mar Jaoonga Me (When i received You in my heart everything changed for me) |
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19th August 2010, 11:51 PM
bhai....
mere kuch bhi likhe hue ko jabtak aapka sahara nahi milta.....vo aanath hi rehti hain.... aapko pasand aayi.....mera likhna safal hua..... duao mae yaad rakhe... ishwar aapke saath hain aapka Aandhiya Gam Ki Chalegi To Sawar Jaoonga Me Mai To Dariya Hu Samoondar Me Utar Jaaonga Me Mujhe Suli Pe Chadane Ki Jaroorat Kya Hai Logo Mere Haato Se Kalam Cheen Lo Yuhi Mar Jaoonga Me (When i received You in my heart everything changed for me) |
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19th August 2010, 11:57 PM
praveen saheb....
aapne haziri de di.....aur kya chayiye....soch hi raha tha kab aap darshan denge baaki jo bhi hain....mujhe kabool hain.....vaise kabhi kabhi kuch duae ekdum ulta asar deti hain .....khair dhyaan rakhe apna....  rab rakha Aandhiya Gam Ki Chalegi To Sawar Jaoonga Me Mai To Dariya Hu Samoondar Me Utar Jaaonga Me Mujhe Suli Pe Chadane Ki Jaroorat Kya Hai Logo Mere Haato Se Kalam Cheen Lo Yuhi Mar Jaoonga Me (When i received You in my heart everything changed for me) |
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20th August 2010, 02:43 AM
maasha allha bahuth khoob ji..........
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20th August 2010, 03:29 AM
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Very Nice Poetry ........ Amit Ji ! vo mehfooz thi mere dil ke aashiyane me... aaj akhbaar phada to pata chala ghar bik rahe hain baazaro main In Khaas PanktiyoN Ke Liye ..... Dil Se Daad ... !  YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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21st August 2010, 07:46 PM
sadiq saheb
aapka dhnyavad....aape aaye.....aur mere shabdo ko apnaya mujhe khusi hain.... dhnyavad Aandhiya Gam Ki Chalegi To Sawar Jaoonga Me Mai To Dariya Hu Samoondar Me Utar Jaaonga Me Mujhe Suli Pe Chadane Ki Jaroorat Kya Hai Logo Mere Haato Se Kalam Cheen Lo Yuhi Mar Jaoonga Me (When i received You in my heart everything changed for me) |
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21st August 2010, 07:48 PM
Dhanyvad nareshji,
aapki daad amrit ka kaam karti hain hamesha...... shubhkamnao sahit Aandhiya Gam Ki Chalegi To Sawar Jaoonga Me Mai To Dariya Hu Samoondar Me Utar Jaaonga Me Mujhe Suli Pe Chadane Ki Jaroorat Kya Hai Logo Mere Haato Se Kalam Cheen Lo Yuhi Mar Jaoonga Me (When i received You in my heart everything changed for me) |
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