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16th April 2006, 06:44 PM
Bahut sochta hai mera dil tumhare liye.........
bahut si batten keh kar bhi kuch unkaha sa reh jata hai.............. mere dil mein tumhare liye ek pyar ka sagar leherta hai........... fir bhi na jane yeh dil unchahaa sa sawaal kyu kar jata hai...... . puchata hai dil aksar kai sawaal......... kya mere pyar ka gehra sagar pyas bujha sakta hai tumhari.........? mera pyar kya tumhare angan mein bandh kar geet khushi ke ga sakta hai.......? chaaya rehta hai tumhare jehan par bhi mere pyar ka gehara kala badal........... per kya yeh mujh per baras sakata hai? kya yeh mujko bheego sakata hai........? aksar bebas se kar jate hain yeh sawaal mujko........... dil mein ek anjaani si chubhan de jate hain mujhko...... Fir na jane kye soch kar........ yeh dil khil sa jata hai................... jab kabhi tumhari dil ki laharo se uthata pyar ....... mere dil ki laharo se takara jata hai........ tumhara bas yahi ek pal ka pyar .......... jaise meri duniya hi badal jata hai...................... aur mere sare sawaalo ko jaise ek nayi raha dikha jata hai.... |
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17th April 2006, 06:01 PM
good
keep it up best of luck `·.¸(¨`·.·´¨) Keep (¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´ Smiling! `·.¸.·´ |
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wah -
17th April 2006, 08:35 PM
is site ko bahut suljhee huyee ek shayara mil gaye ehai wah bahut khoob kahtee ho tum
Anil kho gaye hain woh log ab un kee justzoo hai |
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18th April 2006, 09:15 AM
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Re: wah -
18th April 2006, 09:19 AM
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aapka yun hosala badana accha laga , abhi bahut kuch sikhana hai , aur accha likhna hai..........bas aap sab yun hi hosala badte rahe........ with love ranju |
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18th April 2006, 11:50 AM
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acha lagta hei aapko padna...sabse alag soch padne ko milti hei aapse aapki kaanch |
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22nd April 2006, 10:13 PM
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Aapki yeh peshkash sach mein lajawaab hai. ek-ek shabd asardaar hai. Dhanyavaad isse prakaashit karne ka. vipin aapka shubchintak 
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24th April 2006, 08:34 AM
shukriya , Vipin and Kanchan........
aap dono ne mere vicharo ko pasand kiya accha laga ...... yun hi saath dete rahe...... thanks........ with love ranju |
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27th April 2006, 12:20 PM
Fir na jane kye soch kar........
yeh dil khil sa jata hai................... jab kabhi tumhari dil ki laharo se uthata pyar ....... mere dil ki laharo se takara jata hai........ tumhara bas yahi ek pal ka pyar .......... jaise meri duniya hi badal jata hai...................... aur mere sare sawaalo ko jaise ek nayi raha dikha jata hai.... jane kaise ye shaandaar lines abhi tak nazron se ojhal rahi.....gajabki hai,kamal ki hai,bejod hai,dil hi nahi rooh tak chu gayi.....thanke mam hamhe ye padane ke liye |
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3rd May 2006, 08:58 AM
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with love ranju |
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3rd May 2006, 01:40 PM
hi ranju,
jin jajbato ko tumne yaha pesh kiya he ,sawal bhi uthaye he aur jawab bhi isme hi samil kar diye he,atyant sundar,jabse tumhe padha he ,meri kavita padne ke andaz badal gaye he. Fir na jane kya soch kar........ yeh dil khil sa jata hai................... jab kabhi tumhari dil ki laharo se uthata pyar ....... mere dil ki laharo se takara jata hai........ tumhara bas yahi ek pal ka pyar .......... jaise meri duniya hi badal jata hai...................... aur mere sare sawaalo ko jaise ek nayi raha dikha jata hai....  with loveilesh shah |
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3rd May 2006, 09:49 PM
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take care ranju |
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hello -
4th May 2006, 04:59 AM
Hello ranjna ji
bahote khoob likha hia tarife maie kya kahe base pade ke aisa laga jaise dil se nikla hia. bhoate khoob. nice work keep it up. mushkan |
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4th May 2006, 03:04 PM
nice one
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