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pichalee sardee kee akhree sham - 17th January 2006, 10:05 PM
Is sardee ke pahlee subah ko
purana kot pahna
hath main a agaya tumharee tooti choori ka hissa
yad ane laga us waqt mujhe purana kissa
jis waqt coat kee jeb main mere hath the
tum ko yad aya
pichali sardee ki akhree sham ko
tum mere sath the
aur mere jab main jab dono ke hath the
tumhree chooree chhoot gayee thee
meree jeb jo khalee thee barson
us main ek dault chhoot gayee thee
tumhe yaad aya?
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Re: pichalee sardee kee akhree sham - 18th January 2006, 11:10 AM
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Is sardee ke pahlee subah ko
purana kot pahna
hath main a agaya tumharee tooti choori ka hissa
yad ane laga us waqt mujhe purana kissa
jis waqt coat kee jeb main mere hath the
tum ko yad aya
pichali sardee ki akhree sham ko
tum mere sath the
aur mere jab main jab dono ke hath the
tumhree chooree chhoot gayee thee
meree jeb jo khalee thee barson
us main ek dault chhoot gayee thee
tumhe yaad aya?
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Navard-e-ishq mein kya hua kya bataye hum
kabhi humne yu khud ko harata naa dekha


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24th January 2006, 07:06 AM
Anil ji,

pichhle dinon ki yaadein aur aap ka dard bayaan karta hai yeh kalam, bahut badhiya likha hai. TC
   
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pichlee sardee - 24th January 2006, 07:10 AM
pichee sardee ka jo ahsas is sardee tak chala aya tha us par ko mere sath siggaj aue devangi dono ne mahoos kiya shukriya devangi ye woh kavitayaen haion jo dard main sukoon ko talash kartee hain tum bhee dard ko jeet jayo na achha lagega
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Re: pichalee sardee kee akhree sham - 26th February 2006, 10:27 PM
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Is sardee ke pahlee subah ko
purana kot pahna
hath main a agaya tumharee tooti choori ka hissa
yad ane laga us waqt mujhe purana kissa
jis waqt coat kee jeb main mere hath the
tum ko yad aya
pichali sardee ki akhree sham ko
tum mere sath the
aur mere jab main jab dono ke hath the
tumhree chooree chhoot gayee thee
meree jeb jo khalee thee barson
us main ek dault chhoot gayee thee
tumhe yaad aya?
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wah Bhai Wah !
achha likha hai , mast coat,soot-boot pehan ke ,
mai aap ke dil ke jazbaat samaj gaya , aap ye kehna chate ho ki (tadpaye tarsaye re , ye dilhi ki sardee , pyaar tera , ye dekhi ki sardee )

seriously this is something different , just the feelings ...................

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27th February 2006, 08:49 AM
well done bro bahut acchi hai abhi aapki tareef karu to kaise ye soch main doob raha hu sab tareke se tareef kar li bas abhi apne aap ko aapke sharno me dal diya hai bas is se aage kuch nahi hai mere paas

meri har chahat se pehle ek chahat hogi
wo chahat hamesha tum hogi
ab to chahna hi reh gaya hai zindagi main
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khozii - 27th February 2006, 12:30 PM
shukriya khozii par khayal se dekho dil se dekho suit boot imp nahee hai is kavita main imp hai woh 5tootee chooree ka hissa us par nazar nahe gayee?
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mehul - 27th February 2006, 12:31 PM
tum achha bhee likh do to main us main ahzaron tareefen parh ,eta hoon kamee bhee batyogee to achha lagega thanks
apana khayal rakhna
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4th April 2006, 10:53 PM
tum mere sath the
aur mere jab main jab dono ke hath the
tumhree chooree chhoot gayee thee
meree jeb jo khalee thee barson
us main ek dault chhoot gayee thee
tumhe yaad aya?


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shukriya - 6th April 2006, 01:27 AM
shukriya ranju kavita ko parhne ke liye aur bahut bahut shukria dil se mahsoos karne ke liye
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6th April 2006, 08:37 AM
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Is sardee ke pahlee subah ko
purana kot pahna
hath main a agaya tumharee tooti choori ka hissa
yad ane laga us waqt mujhe purana kissa
jis waqt coat kee jeb main mere hath the
tum ko yad aya
pichali sardee ki akhree sham ko
tum mere sath the
aur mere jab main jab dono ke hath the
tumhree chooree chhoot gayee thee
meree jeb jo khalee thee barson
us main ek dault chhoot gayee thee
tumhe yaad aya?
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wah anil ji, ek coat se itni saari yaadein juri cool yaar! the coat must be great!! woh coat aap mujhe ek din ke liye doge????????? plz???????? at least main bhi to dekhu us coat mein special kya hai!! waise ek aur baat-agar "apki tum" ki koi cheez apke coat mein chhoot gayi thi, to use lauta dena chahiye tha, yeh kyu pucha ki use yaad hai ki nahi? bichari ko nahi yaad hoga to!! uska to samaan ka vaat lag gaya na!!

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shukriya - 6th April 2006, 07:45 PM
shukriya adarsh jo kuch bhee kaha achha laga parhee rahana mujhe
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aapne shukriya to kiya lekin yeh nahi bataya ki aap coat doge ki nahi???
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Wah Anil - 8th April 2006, 09:45 AM
Wah Anil !
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Kiya Khayal hai. maza aa gaya. Likhne ka andaaz nirala hai.i like it
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8th April 2006, 10:08 AM
jane kaha choot gaya saath tumhara
abhi to thama tha haath tumhara
chlne ki koshish mai chhote kyu l
gati tez thi ki yaa halat ne mara
aaj yaaden hai to inhi mai ji lete hain
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shukriya - 9th April 2006, 12:58 AM
vikram shukriya mujhe parhne ke liye aur sarhane ke liye kabhee kabhee aya karo meree shayree par achha lagata hai
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