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22nd January 2008, 07:51 PM
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Zamane mai tu mujhe bhale bewafa bana de;
Magar tere aks ne to tujhe hi bewafa kaha hai.
Bhula doon apne dard ko tere liye,mumkin nahi
Gum se ye rishta mera purana raha hai
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Mai barbaad hone ka afsos kyun karoon;
Tumhi se tha aabad tumhi barbaad kar gaye.
Tumse seekh k pehchaan liya tha sabko,
Afsos tumhi ko pehchanne mai galti kar gaye.
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bahut khub.......hum aap ko kya keh kar pukaare...plz apna naam zaroor bataye..............
har khamoshi ka matlab inkaar nahi hota,
har nakamyabi ka matlab haar nahi hota,
kya hua agar hum aap ko paa na sake,
sirf paane ka matlab pyaar nahi hota...................
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa ,
ko’ii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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22nd January 2008, 11:36 PM
[quote=LAMHA;267090]bahut khub.......hum aap ko kya keh kar pukaare...plz apna naam zaroor bataye..............
har khamoshi ka matlab inkaar nahi hota,
har nakamyabi ka matlab haar nahi hota,
kya hua agar hum aap ko paa na sake,
sirf paane ka matlab pyaar nahi hota...................[/qMera
Mera Naam hi mujhse bewafa ho gaya
Tha mera, par dusre k hoton pe reh gaya
Wafa to nibhayi sirf dard ne mujhse,
Kal bhi mera tha aaj bhi mera hi reh gaya
Aansu unke hisse k, apni aankhon se bahate chale gaye,
Kaate unki rahon k, apne hathon se hatate chale gaye
Khuda ne to likh bhi de thi jeet meri kismat mai,
Ek hum the, unhe jeetne k liye sab kuch harte chale gaye.
"Seher"
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23rd January 2008, 12:06 AM
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bahut khub.......hum aap ko kya keh kar pukaare...plz apna naam zaroor bataye..............
har khamoshi ka matlab inkaar nahi hota,
har nakamyabi ka matlab haar nahi hota,
kya hua agar hum aap ko paa na sake,
sirf paane ka matlab pyaar nahi hota...................[/qMera
Mera Naam hi mujhse bewafa ho gaya
Tha mera, par dusre k hoton pe reh gaya
Wafa to nibhayi sirf dard ne mujhse,
Kal bhi mera tha aaj bhi mera hi reh gaya
Aansu unke hisse k, apni aankhon se bahate chale gaye,
Kaate unki rahon k, apne hathon se hatate chale gaye
Khuda ne to likh bhi de thi jeet meri kismat mai,
Ek hum the, unhe jeetne k liye sab kuch harte chale gaye.
"Seher"
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wah dost bahut achha hai
bhigti aankho se na jane kitne aansu tapatke rahe
wo aansu na jane kis ki saja dete rahe
hame wo bhul gaye aur kisi ke ho gaye
ek hum badnaseeb hai unhe yaad karte rahe
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23rd January 2008, 12:09 AM
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bahut khub KRENIL.................
unse roz milne ko jee chahta hai,
kuch sunne sunane ko jee chahta hai,
tha kisi ke manane ka andaaz aisa ,
ki aaj fir ruth jane ko jee chahta hai................
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wah lamha kya baat hai
socha tha is kadar unko bhul jayenge
dekhkar bhi andekha kar jayenge
par jab jab samne aaya unka chahera
socha is baar dekh le agli baar bhul jayenge
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23rd January 2008, 01:24 AM
Bahut Acha Likha Hai Aapne Bilkul Haale Dil Bayan Kar Diya Hai Tute Dil Ka
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23rd January 2008, 03:50 PM
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wah lamha kya baat hai
socha tha is kadar unko bhul jayenge
dekhkar bhi andekha kar jayenge
par jab jab samne aaya unka chahera
socha is baar dekh le agli baar bhul jayenge
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Zakhm dene ka andaz kuch aisa HAI
zakhm dekar puchte hai ab haal kaisa hai
dil me basa lo kisi ko dil se
fir dekho pyar ke ehshash kaisa hai
AankheN khuleeN to jaag uTheeN hasrateN tamaam Uss ko bhi kho diyaa jissay paya thaa khwaab mein
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23rd January 2008, 09:39 PM
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Zakhm dene ka andaz kuch aisa HAI
zakhm dekar puchte hai ab haal kaisa hai
dil me basa lo kisi ko dil se
fir dekho pyar ke ehshash kaisa hai
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wah dost kya khub likha hai
kal sham ko mere cell pe phone aaya tha
maine uthaya to koi kuch nahi bol raha tha
phir jab maine mahesus kiya tab pata chala
ki mere bina wo bhi tanha aah bhar raha tha
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23rd January 2008, 10:33 PM
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wah dost kya khub likha hai
kal sham ko mere cell pe phone aaya tha
maine uthaya to koi kuch nahi bol raha tha
phir jab maine mahesus kiya tab pata chala
ki mere bina wo bhi tanha aah bhar raha tha
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har baat batana jaruri nahi hota hai
samajkar bhi samajana jaruri nahi hota hai
hum jaante hai tum use kitna pyaar karte ho
per dil me base huye logo ki baat karna jaruri nahi hota hai
AankheN khuleeN to jaag uTheeN hasrateN tamaam Uss ko bhi kho diyaa jissay paya thaa khwaab mein
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23rd January 2008, 11:06 PM
Mera Naam hi mujhse bewafa ho gaya
Tha mera, par dusre k hoton pe reh gaya
Wafa to nibhayi sirf dard ne mujhse,
Kal bhi mera tha aaj bhi mera hi reh gaya
Aansu unke hisse k, apni aankhon se bahate chale gaye,
Kaate unki rahon k, apne hathon se hatate chale gaye
Khuda ne to likh bhi de thi jeet meri kismat mai,
Ek hum the, unhe jeetne k liye sab kuch harte chale gaye.
"Seher"
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bahut khub SEHER...................
jab raat hogi to chand bhi duhai dega,
khawabo me unka chehra dikhai dega,
ye mohabbat hai,zara soch ke karna,
ek aansoo bhi gira to sunai dega............
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa ,
ko’ii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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23rd January 2008, 11:07 PM
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har baat batana jaruri nahi hota hai
samajkar bhi samajana jaruri nahi hota hai
hum jaante hai tum use kitna pyaar karte ho
per dil me base huye logo ki baat karna jaruri nahi hota hai
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wah dost kya khub likha hai yaar
hum par apni khushi barbad mat karna
hamare liye khuda se fariyad mat karna
aaj chaho to ji bhar kar dekh lo
hum na honge to hame yaad mat karna
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23rd January 2008, 11:10 PM
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wah dost bahut achha hai
bhigti aankho se na jane kitne aansu tapatke rahe
wo aansu na jane kis ki saja dete rahe
hame wo bhul gaye aur kisi ke ho gaye
ek hum badnaseeb hai unhe yaad karte rahe
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wah lamha kya baat hai
socha tha is kadar unko bhul jayenge
dekhkar bhi andekha kar jayenge
par jab jab samne aaya unka chahera
socha is baar dekh le agli baar bhul jayenge
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bahut acha likha hai KRENIL..................
manzile bhi uski thi,raasta bhi uska tha,
ek main hi akeli thi, kaafila bhi uska tha,
saath saath chalne ki soch bhi uski thi,
fir raasta badalne ka faisla bhi uska tha,
aaj kyo akeli hai tu?,ye dil sawaal karta hai,
log to uske the, kya khuda bhi uska tha???????????
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa ,
ko’ii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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23rd January 2008, 11:15 PM
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bahut acha likha hai KRENIL..................
manzile bhi uski thi,raasta bhi uska tha,
ek main hi akeli thi, kaafila bhi uska tha,
saath saath chalne ki soch bhi uski thi,
fir raasta badalne ka faisla bhi uska tha,
aaj kyo akeli hai tu?,ye dil sawaal karta hai,
log to uske the, kya khuda bhi uska tha???????????
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wah lamha kya baat hai
hum apni wafao ka sila kisse mangte
wo khud hi bewafa the phir wafa kisse mangte
khud hi to ki thi humne apne rab se bagawat
phir hum jo dua mangte to kisse mangte
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23rd January 2008, 11:16 PM
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har baat batana jaruri nahi hota hai
samajkar bhi samajana jaruri nahi hota hai
hum jaante hai tum use kitna pyaar karte ho
per dil me base huye logo ki baat karna jaruri nahi hota hai
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bahut khub DINESH..............
wo ruthe is kadar ki manaya na gaya,
dur itne ho gaye ki pass bulaya na gaya,
dil to dil tha ,samundar ka saahil nahi,
likh diya jo naam to fir mitaya na gaya.............
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa ,
ko’ii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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23rd January 2008, 11:21 PM
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wah dost kya khub likha hai yaar
hum par apni khushi barbad mat karna
hamare liye khuda se fariyad mat karna
aaj chaho to ji bhar kar dekh lo
hum na honge to hame yaad mat karna
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aisa dobara kabhi mat kehna.....samje?????????
kabhi zindagi se hum gila karke roye,
kabhi maut ki hum dua karke roye,
ajab silsila hai namaz-e-mohabbat ka,
kabhi adaa karke roye,kabhi kazaa karke roye...
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa ,
ko’ii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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23rd January 2008, 11:23 PM
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wah lamha kya baat hai
hum apni wafao ka sila kisse mangte
wo khud hi bewafa the phir wafa kisse mangte
khud hi to ki thi humne apne rab se bagawat
phir hum jo dua mangte to kisse mangte
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bahut khub KRENIL..............
inhi pattharon pe chal ke aa sako to aao,
hamare ghar ke raaste koi kehkasha nahi.....(NM)
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa ,
ko’ii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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23rd January 2008, 11:26 PM
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aisa dobara kabhi mat kehna.....samje?????????
kabhi zindagi se hum gila karke roye,
kabhi maut ki hum dua karke roye,
ajab silsila hai namaz-e-mohabbat ka,
kabhi adaa karke roye,kabhi kazaa karke roye...
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are lamha kya baat hai ok dubara nahi likhenge
har baar dil se ye paigam aaye
juban kholu to tera hi naam aaye
tum hi kyu achhe lage is dil ko kya malum
jab ki nazro ke aage haseen tamam aaye
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23rd January 2008, 11:30 PM
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bahut khub KRENIL..............
inhi pattharon pe chal ke aa sako to aao,
hamare ghar ke raaste koi kehkasha nahi.....(NM)
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very good lamha
jiski mahobat me karar bahut hai
uska milna dushwar bahut hai
jo mere hatho ki lakeero me nahi
mujhe apni jaan se pyaar bahut hai
jisko mere dil ka rasta bhi malum nahi
dhadkano ko phir bhi uska intezaar bahut hai
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24th January 2008, 02:16 PM
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bahut khub DINESH..............
wo ruthe is kadar ki manaya na gaya,
dur itne ho gaye ki pass bulaya na gaya,
dil to dil tha ,samundar ka saahil nahi,
likh diya jo naam to fir mitaya na gaya.............
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ek baar jo dil se likh diya wo kese mit sakta hai
is pyar bhari duniya se kese koi dur jaa sakta hai
hum nahi ana chahte the apke bitch
anjane me galati ho gayi humse ho sakta hai
AankheN khuleeN to jaag uTheeN hasrateN tamaam Uss ko bhi kho diyaa jissay paya thaa khwaab mein
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24th January 2008, 10:41 PM
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ek baar jo dil se likh diya wo kese mit sakta hai
is pyar bhari duniya se kese koi dur jaa sakta hai
hum nahi ana chahte the apke bitch
anjane me galati ho gayi humse ho sakta hai
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are yaar dinesh kya kahe rahe ho tum main achhi tarah janta hu aage se aisa nahi kahena ok
bahut thak chuka hu ab sona chahta hu
is zindagi ko main khona chahta hu
ye khuda bulale mujko apne pass
main sirf tere sahare rona chahta hu
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24th January 2008, 11:08 PM
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are yaar dinesh kya kahe rahe ho tum main achhi tarah janta hu aage se aisa nahi kahena ok
bahut thak chuka hu ab sona chahta hu
is zindagi ko main khona chahta hu
ye khuda bulale mujko apne pass
main sirf tere sahare rona chahta hu
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KRENIL..........tumhara ye sher muje bilkul pasand nahi aaya....ye tum jaante ho ki kyo pasand nahi aaya...
mehfil me to kabhi hume yaad karoge,
tanhai me to kabhi fariyaad karoge,
hum sa na mila tha aur na milega,
kabhi to apni kismat pe naaz karoge..........
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa ,
ko’ii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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24th January 2008, 11:13 PM
wah lamha kya baat hai
bada armaan tha tere sang jeevan bitane ka
shikwa hai bas tere khamosh rahe jane ka
deewangi isse badhkar bhi kya hogi ki
aaj bhi intezaar hai tere aane ka
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24th January 2008, 11:16 PM
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wah lamha kya baat hai
bada armaan tha tere sang jeevan bitane ka
shikwa hai bas tere khamosh rahe jane ka
deewangi isse badhkar bhi kya hogi ki
aaj bhi intezaar hai tere aane ka
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bahut bahut bahut khub...........KRENIL....
hume apne dil me basaye rakhna,
hamari yadon ke chirag jalaye rakhna,
bahut lamba hai safar zindagi ka,
ek hissa hume bhi banaye rakhna...........
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa ,
ko’ii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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24th January 2008, 11:20 PM
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bahut bahut bahut khub...........KRENIL....
hume apne dil me basaye rakhna,
hamari yadon ke chirag jalaye rakhna,
bahut lamba hai safar zindagi ka,
ek hissa hume bhi banaye rakhna...........
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wah lamha bahut achha hai
yaad aate ho tum jab koi hum se baat nahi karta
yaad aate ho tum jab koi hame nahi samajta
yaad aate ho tum jab koi hamara saath nahi deta
aur hamesha yaad aaoge tum kyunki dil ko dil se koi juda nahi kar sakta
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24th January 2008, 11:23 PM
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wah lamha bahut achha hai
yaad aate ho tum jab koi hum se baat nahi karta
yaad aate ho tum jab koi hame nahi samajta
yaad aate ho tum jab koi hamara saath nahi deta
aur hamesha yaad aaoge tum kyunki dil ko dil se koi juda nahi kar sakta
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nice one.......dear
ek naam kya likha tera saahil ki reth par,
fir umra bhar hawaa se meri dushmani rahi...(NM)
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa ,
ko’ii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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nice one.......dear
ek naam kya likha tera saahil ki reth par,
fir umra bhar hawaa se meri dushmani rahi...(NM)
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wah kya baat hai
samandar ki ret par naam kabhi likhte nahi
ret par likhe naam kabhi tikte nahi
aap kahete ho hum patthar dil hai par
patthar pe likhe naam kabhi mitte nahi
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25th January 2008, 11:29 AM
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are yaar dinesh kya kahe rahe ho tum main achhi tarah janta hu aage se aisa nahi kahena ok
bahut thak chuka hu ab sona chahta hu
is zindagi ko main khona chahta hu
ye khuda bulale mujko apne pass
main sirf tere sahare rona chahta hu
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dosti me kab hai rona kab hai sona koi nahi janta hai
pyar me kab hai dard kab hai khushi koi nahi janta hai
mohbbat kab hoti hai aur kaha hoti hai koi nahi janta hai
ishq sab karte hai per use samajna koi nahi janta hai
marna sabko hai per mot kab aaye koi nahi janta hai
AankheN khuleeN to jaag uTheeN hasrateN tamaam Uss ko bhi kho diyaa jissay paya thaa khwaab mein
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25th January 2008, 11:42 AM
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wah kya baat hai
samandar ki ret par naam kabhi likhte nahi
ret par likhe naam kabhi tikte nahi
aap kahete ho hum patthar dil hai par
patthar pe likhe naam kabhi mitte nahi
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samandar ki ret ab kaha bachi hai jo us per naam likh paata
jab kabhi naam likha hi nahi to kese tik paata
har koi yahi kehta hai ke hum patthar dil hai
per dil se nikla pyar patthar ko bhi pigal jata hai
AankheN khuleeN to jaag uTheeN hasrateN tamaam Uss ko bhi kho diyaa jissay paya thaa khwaab mein
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25th January 2008, 12:43 PM
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thanx ALBELI,
thanx u so much .....aap ko ye idea acha laga......yu hi dosti barkaraar rakhiyega............
aap ki dost,
LAMHA..............
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wah lamha bahot khub likha he, me to aapka deewana ho gaya, mer e taraf se bhi ye suniye
usne jo mera sath na diya,
shayad uski bhi koi majburi rahi hogi. bewafaa to vo ho nahi sakti,
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25th January 2008, 12:45 PM
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thanx ALBELI,
thanx u so much .....aap ko ye idea acha laga......yu hi dosti barkaraar rakhiyega............
aap ki dost,
LAMHA..............
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wah lamha bahot khub likha he, me to aapka deewana ho gaya, mer e taraf se bhi ye suniye
usne jo mera sath na diya,
shayad uski bhi koi majburi rahi hogi. bewafaa to vo ho nahi sakti,
shayad meri mahhobbat hi adhuri rahi hogi.
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25th January 2008, 08:06 PM
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wah lamha bahot khub likha he, me to aapka deewana ho gaya, mer e taraf se bhi ye suniye
usne jo mera sath na diya,
shayad uski bhi koi majburi rahi hogi. bewafaa to vo ho nahi sakti,
shayad meri mahhobbat hi adhuri rahi hogi.
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bahut khub MIT...........
wo mile humse kahani bankar,
dil me rahe pyaar ki nishani bankar,
hum jinhe jagah dete hai aankho ke andar,
wo aksar nikal jate hai paani bankar...............
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa ,
ko’ii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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25th January 2008, 11:29 PM
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samandar ki ret ab kaha bachi hai jo us per naam likh paata
jab kabhi naam likha hi nahi to kese tik paata
har koi yahi kehta hai ke hum patthar dil hai
per dil se nikla pyar patthar ko bhi pigal jata hai
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wah dost kya khub likha hai
baha is aankh se ashko ka ek dariya hai
kisi ne dil pe tasalli ka haath rakha hai
hamari aag se kundan na ban saka sona
par hamari aah se ek patthar to pigla hai
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25th January 2008, 11:34 PM
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wah dost kya khub likha hai
baha is aankh se ashko ka ek dariya hai
kisi ne dil pe tasalli ka haath rakha hai
hamari aag se kundan na ban saka sona
par hamari aah se ek patthar to pigla hai
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wah wah wah bahot khub likha hain krenil ji aap ne aab yeh suno
zindagi bhi humse mazak kar gai
dil main jaga kar pyar tanhai bhar gai
socha hum unke aur woh hamare hogaye
par is hakikat ko bhi woh ek past kar gai
Kitne mare kitne aabhi rahoo.N me hai Kuch aa.Nsoo baki nigahoo.N me hai
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25th January 2008, 11:37 PM
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wah wah wah bahot khub likha hain krenil ji aap ne aab yeh suno
zindagi bhi humse mazak kar gai
dil main jaga kar pyar tanhai bhar gai
socha hum unke aur woh hamare hogaye
par is hakikat ko bhi woh ek past kar gai
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wah dost sach me apne dil ki baat kahe di tumne
main sochu to khuda ko dhundh lu
isiliye main sochta hi nahi
ajab rashma hai ye tumhare shaher ka
jane walo ko koi rokta hi nahi
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25th January 2008, 11:45 PM
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wah dost sach me apne dil ki baat kahe di tumne
main sochu to khuda ko dhundh lu
isiliye main sochta hi nahi
ajab rashma hai ye tumhare shaher ka
jane walo ko koi rokta hi nahi
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lakh roka unko karodo minnate karke
par woh hume marne ko chood gaye
le gay woh humare dil ke karar ko aapne sath
aur humare liye bus kuch mithe pal chod gaye
Kitne mare kitne aabhi rahoo.N me hai Kuch aa.Nsoo baki nigahoo.N me hai
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lakh roka unko karodo minnate karke
par woh hume marne ko chood gaye
le gay woh humare dil ke karar ko aapne sath
aur humare liye bus kuch mithe pal chod gaye
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wah dost bahut khub
dukho ko zel jana aa gaya
hame bhi muskurana aa gaya
sulagte the kabhi chup chap khud me
magar ab jagmagana aa gaya
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[qunvery niceote=LAMHA;240360] DOSTON,
kehte hai khushi bantne se badhati hai,aur DARD bantne se kam ho jata hai.........hum chahte hai ki is jahan mai har ek insaan khush rahe.......aur is ke liye hum ek dusre ka dard bant le............hum apne doston ke liye itna to zaroor kar sakte hai........hai na?............
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25th January 2008, 11:54 PM
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wah dost bahut khub
dukho ko zel jana aa gaya
hame bhi muskurana aa gaya
sulagte the kabhi chup chap khud me
magar ab jagmagana aa gaya
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bahot khub
chup rehkar gum pi gaya
zindagi unjke naam kar gaya
dunga aapni bali aapne pyar ke khatir
choti kar zindagi yaaro main kuda kaz hogaya
Kitne mare kitne aabhi rahoo.N me hai Kuch aa.Nsoo baki nigahoo.N me hai
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25th January 2008, 11:54 PM
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wah dost bahut khub
dukho ko zel jana aa gaya
hame bhi muskurana aa gaya
sulagte the kabhi chup chap khud me
magar ab jagmagana aa gaya
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bahut khub likha hai aap dono ne NIHAR & KRENIL.....
majbooriyan batorkar sare jahan ki,
jab kuch na ban saka , mera dil bana diya..(NM)
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa ,
ko’ii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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26th January 2008, 12:16 AM
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bahut khub likha hai aap dono ne NIHAR & KRENIL.....
majbooriyan batorkar sare jahan ki,
jab kuch na ban saka , mera dil bana diya..(NM)
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tu ful hai gulab ka aur
main aashiq hu tere shabab ka
teri tasveer mere dil me hai
kya fayda phir tere naqab ka
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26th January 2008, 01:42 AM
Aaj tera naqab hat jayet o accha hai,
Aaj raaz ye khul jaye to accha hai,
bura mai kum hoon ya tere ilzaam jada hai,
Aaj ye beet pata chal jaye to accha hai.
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