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16th April 2007, 10:15 AM
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AA!TERE ASHKON KO APNI AANKHON MAI UTAARDUN, TERI ZINDAGI KO APNI KHUSHIYON SE SAWAANRDUN, -akelijaan 2nd sher kabhi kah na sake tu mujhe bewaffa, aa tujpe main aapni zindgi baar dun.... -sunita virender  .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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16th April 2007, 10:32 AM
1st sher
AA!TERE ASHKON KO APNI AANKHON MAI UTAARDUN, TERI ZINDAGI KO APNI KHUSHIYON SE SAWAANRDUN, -akelijaan 2nd sher kabhi kah na sake tu mujhe bewaffa, aa tujpe main aapni zindgi baar dun.... -sunita virender 3rd sher na samjh khud ko tanha is jahaaN meN, tere liye sarii ziNdagii meri nisaar duN.. -dhaval- |
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16th April 2007, 10:38 AM
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4th sher na rahe koi gila tujhe mujh se kabhi, teri chahat ka tujhe aisaa uphaar dun, --akelijaan gham ko mujh se yeh unsiyat kaisi?? --akelijaan-- |
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16th April 2007, 10:48 AM
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na rahe koi gila tujhe mujh se kabhi, teri chahat ka tujhe aisaa uphaar dun, --akelijaan bhut khub sara ji is behtreen gazal ko shuru karne ke mubarakbaad...... 5th share aa tujhe baahon mein bhar ke pyaar du.N apne khoon-e-jigar se teri hasti nikhaar du.N..... 'veer' ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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16th April 2007, 11:00 AM
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kyu baithey ho tum yu khafa khafa, aa tujhe aapni bahon ke haar dun..... -sunita virender .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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20th April 2007, 04:51 PM
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kyu baithey ho tum yu khafa khafa, aa tujhe aapni bahon ke haar dun..... -sunita virender 7th sher jale khud khuda, humare riste se aah tujhe main itna pyaar dun Life is filled with goodbyes, a million goodbyes, and it hurts every time....and every time my heart dies a little... Darkness falls on me like rain... just one drop at a time....  |
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21st April 2007, 10:44 AM
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aaye na kabhi aansu teri aanko mein, pyar aapne se teri zindgi sanwaar dun.... -sunita virender lijiye ji yeh gazal jaha puri ho gaye...ab naye shuruyaat kijiye. .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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22nd April 2007, 12:01 PM
Ek nayi ghazal shuroo karein?
1st sher gam-e-gardish-e-veeranaa-e-jigar dekh rahe hain apni chahaton ka asar didaa-e-tar dekh rahe hain --paras gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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22nd April 2007, 06:21 PM
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gam-e-gardish-e-veeranaa-e-jigar dekh rahe hain apni chahaton ka asar didaa-e-tar dekh rahe hain --paras 2nd sher gar maan lete baat rafeeqon ki to acha hota, aaj gustaakhi ka apni hum hashr dekh rahe hain, ---akelijaan gham ko mujh se yeh unsiyat kaisi?? --akelijaan-- |
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22nd April 2007, 11:25 PM
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gam-e-gardish-e-veeranaa-e-jigar dekh rahe hain apni chahaton ka asar didaa-e-tar dekh rahe hain --paras 2nd sher gar maan lete baat rafeeqon ki to acha hota, aaj gustaakhi ka apni hum hashr dekh rahe hain, --akelijaan 3rd sher naam jo mera pukare koi yaisa kahin nahi hai phir bhi na jane kyun ham idhar udhar dekh rahe hai शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे |
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23rd April 2007, 01:28 PM
1st sher
gam-e-gardish-e-veeranaa-e-jigar dekh rahe hain apni chahaton ka asar didaa-e-tar dekh rahe hain --paras 2nd sher gar maan lete baat rafeeqon ki to acha hota, aaj gustaakhi ka apni hum hashr dekh rahe hain, --akelijaan 3rd sher naam jo mera pukare koi yaisa kahin nahi hai phir bhi na jane kyun ham idhar udhar dekh rahe hai 4th sher' hum ho gaye qatl kabke hame maloom hii na chala unkii qatil nigaho.n ka ba-hunar dekh rahe hai.n, dilip  " Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya |
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23rd April 2007, 01:41 PM
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accha kiya jo humne kar diya zahir raj-e-dil aapna, aaj unpar aapni mohabat ka asar dekh rahe hai.n, -sunita virender .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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23rd April 2007, 03:11 PM
1st sher
gam-e-gardish-e-veeranaa-e-jigar dekh rahe hain apni chahaton ka asar didaa-e-tar dekh rahe hain --paras 2nd sher gar maan lete baat rafeeqon ki to acha hota, aaj gustaakhi ka apni hum hashr dekh rahe hain, --akelijaan 3rd sher naam jo mera pukare koi yaisa kahin nahi hai phir bhi na jane kyun ham idhar udhar dekh rahe hai 4th sher' hum ho gaye qatl kabke hame maloom hii na chala unkii qatil nigaho.n ka ba-hunar dekh rahe hai.n, dilip 5th sher accha kiya jo humne kar diya zahir raj-e-dil aapna, aaj unpar aapni mohabat ka asar dekh rahe hai.n, -sunita virender jamane bhar se hamne tujhe bacha bacha rakha phir bhi kyun tujhpe jamanne ka asar dekh rahe hai --sakhi शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे |
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23rd April 2007, 03:36 PM
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laakh kaho zamane se, nahi pyar tumey humse, phir kyu hume chuupa ke nazar dekh rahey hai.n, -sunita virender .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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1st August 2007, 01:13 PM
8th Sher:
kii thii duaaeN jinhone mere KhuSHhaal aaShiyaane kii, aaj wahi log meraa jaltaa huaa Ghar deKh rahe haiN ~ Dhaval |
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17th September 2007, 03:24 PM
Ek nayi Ghazal ke aghaaz ke saath mehfil mein waapsi kar raha hoon.....
Kripya Kafiye aur Beher ka dhyan rakhiyega........... 1st Sher..... Aankhon mein gham, zubaan pe dua baar baar hai aata nahi wo jiska mujhe intzaar hai. Take care to get what you like, Or you will be forced to like what you get. |
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12th August 2008, 01:48 PM
Ek zamana huaa is threat per koii reply nahi aaya.....
behad acchi jagah hai ye yahan shayrii aasani se seekhi ja sakti hai.... agar sath dene ko taiyaar ho.n to ise aage badaya jaye........ " Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya |
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13th August 2008, 02:12 PM
maaaf kijiyega guymnam sahab...
aapke pehle sher ko thoda sa badal rahi hu.... -gumnam 1st Sher..... Aankhon mein gham, zubaan pe dua baar baar hai aata nahi wo shakhs, jiska mujhe intzaar hai. 2nd sher.... har aahat uske aane ki ummeed jagati hai, har dadkan kehti hai, mujhe usse pyaar hai... -nisha par itnaa to huaa, kuchh log pahchaane gaye... |
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shukriya nisha thread ko aage badane ke liye -
13th August 2008, 06:48 PM
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dil main ek ummiid deedaare yaar kii bankii hai kisii mod per ho mulaqat dil bekarar hai...... -Dilip " Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya |
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humko to un phoolon ke kaanto se pyaar hai.... Take care to get what you like, Or you will be forced to like what you get. |
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14th August 2008, 11:10 AM
1st Sher.....
Aankhon mein gham, zubaan pe dua baar baar hai aata nahi wo shakhs, jiska mujhe intzaar hai. 2nd sher.... har aahat uske aane ki ummeed jagati hai, har dadkan kehti hai, mujhe usse pyaar hai... -nisha 3rd sher---- dil main ek ummiid deedaare yaar kii bankii hai kisii mod per ho mulaqat dil bekarar hai...... [dilip jee] 4th Sher Hogi Kisi ko Aarzu phoolon se milne ki humko to un phoolon ke kaanto se pyaar hai... [gumnaam bhai] |
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14th August 2008, 11:58 AM
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ab mujhe bas kuch sukoon ki darkaar hai शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे |
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15th August 2008, 06:34 PM
1st Sher.....
Aankhon mein gham, zubaan pe dua baar baar hai aata nahi wo shakhs, jiska mujhe intzaar hai. 2nd sher.... har aahat uske aane ki ummeed jagati hai, har dadkan kehti hai, mujhe usse pyaar hai... -nisha 3rd sher---- dil main ek ummiid deedaare yaar kii bankii hai kisii mod per ho mulaqat dil bekarar hai...... [dilip jee] 4th Sher Hogi Kisi ko Aarzu phoolon se milne ki humko to un phoolon ke kaanto se pyaar hai... [gumnaam bhai] 5th Sher: koi baat nahi agar gum mile hai jindagi se ab mujhe bas kuch sukoon ki darkaar hai [sakhi] 6th sher: dil ka mausam sang mausam ke badalta nahii.n abhii tu na aaye to hai patjhadh jo tu aaye bahaar hai! [Mayank] |
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15th August 2008, 07:38 PM
1st Sher.....
Aankhon mein gham, zubaan pe dua baar baar hai aata nahi wo shakhs, jiska mujhe intzaar hai. 2nd sher.... har aahat uske aane ki ummeed jagati hai, har dadkan kehti hai, mujhe usse pyaar hai... -nisha 3rd sher---- dil main ek ummiid deedaare yaar kii bankii hai kisii mod per ho mulaqat dil bekarar hai...... [dilip ] 4th Sher Hogi Kisi ko Aarzu phoolon se milne ki humko to un phoolon ke kaanto se pyaar hai... [gumnaam bhai] 5th Sher: koi baat nahi agar gum mile hai jindagi se ab mujhe bas kuch sukoon ki darkaar hai [sakhi] 6th sher: dil ka mausam sang mausam ke badalta nahii.n abhii tu na aaye to hai patjhadh jo tu aaye bahaar hai! [Mayank ji] 7th sher Aaj bhale hii jindgii ke safar me tu mere sath nahi tu hi hai merii hamsafar dil ko ye aitbaar hai!........... ( Dilip ) " Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya |
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19th August 2008, 09:46 PM
1st Sher.....
Aankhon mein gham, zubaan pe dua baar baar hai aata nahi wo shakhs, jiska mujhe intzaar hai. 2nd sher.... har aahat uske aane ki ummeed jagati hai, har dadkan kehti hai, mujhe usse pyaar hai... -nisha 3rd sher---- dil main ek ummiid deedaare yaar kii bankii hai kisii mod per ho mulaqat dil bekarar hai...... [dilip ] 4th Sher Hogi Kisi ko Aarzu phoolon se milne ki humko to un phoolon ke kaanto se pyaar hai... [gumnaam bhai] 5th Sher: koi baat nahi agar gum mile hai jindagi se ab mujhe bas kuch sukoon ki darkaar hai [sakhi] 6th sher: dil ka mausam sang mausam ke badalta nahii.n abhii tu na aaye to hai patjhadh jo tu aaye bahaar hai! [Mayank ji] 7th sher Aaj bhale hii jindgii ke safar me tu mere sath nahi tu hi hai merii hamsafar dil ko ye aitbaar hai!........... ( Dilip ) 8th sher Chaha to tha ki apne pyaar ka hak tujhse maang lu.. bas ye soch ruk gae ki wo pyaar nahin vyapaar hai....... par itnaa to huaa, kuchh log pahchaane gaye... |
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5th September 2008, 01:51 PM
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leejiye, yeh Ghazal to muqammal huaa, haalaaki saal bhar lag gaye isay puura hote hote  ab ek nayii Ghazal ki shuruaat karte hai.n.. par ummed hai yeh Ghazal jald hi muqammal ho yahaa.n, to matla likh raha huu.n..Hame dil se apane bhulaane lage hai.n qayaamat ke din paas aane lage hai.n [Mayank] |
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5th September 2008, 02:10 PM
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jinhe bhoolne meiN zamane lage haiN -sunita virender .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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5th September 2008, 02:55 PM
Hame dil se apane bhulaane lage hai.n
qayaamat ke din paas aane lage hai.n [Mayank] aaj phir dil pe woh dastak de rahe haiN jinhe bhoolne meiN zamane lage haiN -sunita virender kahi par wafa hai aur kahi bewafaai dil ko kaise kaise aajmaane lage hain Garima |
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7th September 2008, 07:45 PM
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aap ko yeh sher badalna paDegaa.. kyu.n kii yeh sher janaab khumaar Barabankwii, jin ki zameen par ham ne kheti kii hai, un ke sher se kaafi milta hai.. un ka likha huaa kuchh aise hai.... vahii phir mujhe yaad aane lage hai.n jinhe.n bhulaane me.n zamaane lage hai.n [khumaar] -Mayank |
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11th September 2008, 01:53 PM
1)Hame dil se apane bhulaane lage hai.n
qayaamat ke din paas aane lage hai.n [Mayank] 2) kahi par wafa hai aur kahi bewafaai dil ko kaise kaise aajmaane lage hain [Garima] |
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12th September 2008, 04:52 PM
1)Hame dil se apane bhulaane lage hai.n
qayaamat ke din paas aane lage hai.n [Mayank] 2) kahi par wafa hai aur kahi bewafaai dil ko kaise kaise aajmaane lage hain [Garima] 3rd sher Jab se khula ye raaz ki rah na payenge unke bin jaane kaise kaise wo hame ab satane lage hain Dilip " Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya |
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Location: dil mein khud ke..aisa nahi kisi ko mera pata nahi hai mujhe dhundhne ki had tak koi dhundhta nahi hai..un
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13th September 2008, 12:36 AM
1)Hame dil se apane bhulaane lage hai.n
qayaamat ke din paas aane lage hai.n [Mayank] 2) kahi par wafa hai aur kahi bewafaai dil ko kaise kaise aajmaane lage hain [Garima] 3rd sher Jab se khula ye raaz ki rah na payenge unke bin jaane kaise kaise wo hame ab satane lage hain Dilip 4th sher badley hai mausam jaise kai rang apne woh rang badlke hamko dikhane lage hai शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे |
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Aapki dost
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20th October 2008, 02:53 PM
)Hame dil se apane bhulaane lage hai.n
qayaamat ke din paas aane lage hai.n [Mayank] 2) kahi par wafa hai aur kahi bewafaai dil ko kaise kaise aajmaane lage hain [Garima] 3rd sher Jab se khula ye raaz ki rah na payenge unke bin jaane kaise kaise wo hame ab satane lage hain Dilip 4th sher badley hai mausam jaise kai rang apne woh rang badlke hamko dikhane lage hai 5th sher dil ki is basti ko karke wo veeran, zaalim, apne kwabo.n ki duniya sajaane lage hain zainy |
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20th October 2008, 08:14 PM
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hame dekhkar muskurane lage hain Fezan . . Koi Aisa Kamaal Ho Jaye Zindigi Be-Misaal Ho Jaye
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18th November 2008, 08:37 AM
Hame dil se apane bhulaane lage hai.n
qayaamat ke din paas aane lage hai.n [Mayank] 2) kahin par wafa hai kahin bewafaai dilo ko wo yun aazmaane lage hain [Garima] 3rd sher khula jab se hum reh na payenge un bin hame kaise kaise satane lage hain Dilip 4th sher kai rang jaise badalta hai mausam woh rang hamko apne dikhane lage hai SAKHI 5th sher meri dil ki is basti ko veeran karke , woh kwabon ki duniya sajaane lage hain zaini 6th sher wo naraz the par idhar kuch dino se hame dekhkar muskurane lage hain Fezan 7th sher Sadaa saath rehne ke waade kiye the, wo waade hi dil se bhulaana lage hai.n. zainy |
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20th November 2008, 03:11 PM
Hame dil se apane bhulaane lage hai.n
qayaamat ke din paas aane lage hai.n [Mayank] 2) kahin par wafa hai kahin bewafaai dilo ko wo yun aazmaane lage hain [Garima] 3rd sher khula jab se hum reh na payenge un bin hame kaise kaise satane lage hain Dilip 4th sher kai rang jaise badalta hai mausam woh rang hamko apne dikhane lage hai SAKHI 5th sher meri dil ki is basti ko veeran karke , woh kwabon ki duniya sajaane lage hain zaini 6th sher wo naraz the par idhar kuch dino se hame dekhkar muskurane lage hain Fezan 7th sher Sadaa saath rehne ke waade kiye the, wo waade hi dil se bhulaana lage hai.n. zainy 8th sher rom rom dubba hai jiski mohabat mein wahi aaj humko aazmaa.Ne lage haiN -sunita virender .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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20th November 2008, 09:13 PM
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Sitare jo din mei.n kahi.n kho gaye the Woh phir raat mei.n jagmagane lage hai Fezan . . Koi Aisa Kamaal Ho Jaye Zindigi Be-Misaal Ho Jaye
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22nd November 2008, 06:12 PM
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maQtaa kahne kii hamaaQat kar raha huN ! zaraa sii hawaa chal paRii to " KSHITIZ " ab jaraahat puraane sataane lage haiN ... ! ( jaraahat - wound ) umeed karta huN gustaakhii muaaf kii jaayegii ! |
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22nd November 2008, 07:14 PM
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10 shero.n me.n apni yah Ghazal muqammal huii hai.. yuu.n to sabhi sher achchhe hai.n par sher no. 5. 6 aur 10 jyada achche lage.. I will add reps to all participant later.. & will start new Ghazal by tomorrow.thank u all for participation. Mayank |
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23rd November 2008, 04:18 PM
dosto,
kyun na ek nayii Ghazal ki shuruaat kee jaaye! matla Ahmad faraz jee ki Ghazal se hai..... terii baate.n hii sunaane aaye dost bhii dil hii dukhaane aaye Radeef: aaye , qaafiye: sunaane, dukhaane...isitarah se, manaane, bahaane. dikhaane, bataane, uthaane , bulaane thikaane etc etc ka istemaal ho sakta hai... behr me.n likhne waale dost behr me.n likh sakte hai.n is ka behr hai : 2122/1122/22 1) terii baate.n hii sunaane aaye dost bhii dil hii dukhaane aaye [ahmad faraz] |
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