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Love तुम्हे देख कर किसी और की याद - 18th October 2009, 04:30 PM

तुम्हे देख कर
किसी और की याद आती है,
इस तरह से
तुम्हारी चाहत
और भी बढ जाती है,
हर अदा, हर बात
मे खूबसूरती
ऐसे झलक जाती है
न जाने कब तेरी याद आ जाती है,
और अपनी खुश्बू से
महका जाती है,
ज़िन्दगी रोज़ संवर जाती है
तेरे चेहरे पर
मेरी मुस्कान से भरा प्यार.
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तेरी यादो बसा है
मेरा प्यार,
तेरी सासो मे बसा है
मेरा प्यार,
तेरी हर बात और दर्द मे
बसा है
मेरा प्यार,
और
आज ही रुठ कर गया है
मेरा प्यार
एक पल मे खो गया
कैसा ऐतबार
कैसा प्यार.



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18th October 2009, 05:02 PM

तुम्हे देख कर
किसी और की याद आती है,
इस तरह से
तुम्हारी चाहत
और भी बढ जाती है,

kya
baat
hai
nidaan
sahab

jo
mere
samj
me
aaya
vo
mai
batata
hu

ek
misaal
deni
hogi
mujhe
meri
baat
ap
tak
pahuchane
ke
liye

ap
phir
bataiyega
ke
mai
sahi
samja
ya
galat...........


jaise
ke.......................

ap
apki
mehbooba
ko
dekhte
hai
isliye
apko
bipasha
basu
yaad
aa
jati
hai??
aur
phir
bipasha
basu
ko
dekhkar
apko
apki
mehbooba
jyada
acchi
lagti
hai??

kya
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hai??

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18th October 2009, 05:14 PM

Nidaan sahab....

Aapki shayari nirali soch ki hai, kabhi kabhi samajh ke samjhna mushkil ho jata hai ke aap yehi kehna chaha rahe hai yaa kuch aur... Mere hisab se Zidd sahab ne jo tafsira kiya hai aapki shayari ka bahut sahiN kiya hia coz main bhi us sher ko yehi soch mein dkha hai....

Zidd sahab aapne tafsira to behad shin kiya but yeh.......... Ek ek word mein KyuN kiya May be aap shayad Nidaan sahab ko ek aur sandesh dena chah rahe hia ke agar woh unki shayari ek ek word mein alag alag likhe to unki post aur bhi lambi ho jayengi KahiN aap ka yeh matlab to nahi...


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18th October 2009, 05:20 PM

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Nidaan sahab....

Aapki shayari nirali soch ki hai, kabhi kabhi samajh ke samjhna mushkil ho jata hai ke aap yehi kehna chaha rahe hai yaa kuch aur... Mere hisab se Zidd sahab ne jo tafsira kiya hai aapki shayari ka bahut sahiN kiya hia coz main bhi us sher ko yehi soch mein dkha hai....

Zidd sahab aapne tafsira to behad shin kiya but yeh.......... Ek ek word mein KyuN kiya May be aap shayad Nidaan sahab ko ek aur sandesh dena chah rahe hia ke agar woh unki shayari ek ek word mein alag alag likhe to unki post aur bhi lambi ho jayengi KahiN aap ka yeh matlab to nahi...
bhai khwaish sahab...........

katghare me sabutan rakh diya hai mera dil
mai khud apne khilaf islemaal hua

aisa zulm na karo bhai............

khamoshiyon me sadaa dhundte ho........mar ke aaina dhundte ho............jal ke dhuaa dhundte ho................mere jawabon me kya dhundte ho???

   
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18th October 2009, 05:27 PM

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bhai khwaish sahab...........

katghare me sabutan rakh diya hai mera dil
mai khud apne khilaf islemaal hua

aisa zulm na karo bhai............

khamoshiyon me sadaa dhundte ho........mar ke aaina dhundte ho............jal ke dhuaa dhundte ho................mere jawabon me kya dhundte ho???
Aaji Zid sahab aab bhi kamal hai
Lag raha hai aaj bismil halal hai

Ek simple si misal deta huN......... Aap mere liye khaas shaks ho aur khaas InsaaN ke Blank msg ka bhi log matlab nikal dete hai... aab aapne to itna bada matlab saaf taur per bayan kiya hai jo hum to samjh hi sakte hia itne to samart hai hum....


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kisi ki yaad - 19th October 2009, 02:50 AM

teri yaad jab jab aati hai
hai zalim hume bahut tadpaati hia
log kehte hai hu esharaabi
pr vo nahi jaante ki teri yaad ka nasha hi hai kaafi
teri yaad raato ko neend uda jaati hai
hayeee ye dilkasha ada hume pagal bana jaati hai
teri yaad jab jab aati ahi ye jalim hume
pal pal tadpaati hai.....
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