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Aah mein unki asar hota hai - 9th April 2015, 08:17 PM
Bad.dua mein meiN bhi dua sa asar hota hai,
Dene wale ki neeyat mein kasar hota hai.

Phool tau sajaye the unki mayyat pe,
Rang gehra bhi tab beassar hota hai,

Log yuN hi kyon tanz kasa karte haiN,
Sun.ne wale ka thora sabar hota hai.

Ghum ko chupane ke liye munh phera,
jane kaise zamane ko khabar hota hai.

Dil ko pathar bana liya pee ker aansu,
Phir bhi dil mein dard tau magar hota hai.

Jitna bhi bar bar muskura lun mejfil mein,
Surkh chehra mera sab ki nazar hota hai





khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar ,
Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar.
   
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10th April 2015, 03:13 AM
Sanjay bhai

Namaste

Ghazal ke ehsaas mujhe bejhad pasand aayen...dil se daad..khush rahiye

Duaaon ke saath ijaazat

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10th April 2015, 11:25 AM
Bahut khoob ehsaas sanjay jee.....


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आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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11th April 2015, 10:45 PM
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Sanjay bhai

Namaste

Ghazal ke ehsaas mujhe bejhad pasand aayen...dil se daad..khush rahiye

Duaaon ke saath ijaazat

Aapka

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Dhaval bhau Shukriya aapka jo tavajo dee apne meri ghazal ko.

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Bahut khoob ehsaas sanjay jee.....
Madhu ji aap ki kya baat hai ..aap itna samay deti hain aur sab ko perti hain.

Tahe dil se shukriya aapka ..

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12th April 2015, 09:00 AM
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Bad.dua mein meiN bhi dua sa asar hota hai,
Dene wale ki neeyat mein kasar hota hai.

Phool tau sajaye the unki mayyat pe,
Rang gehra bhi tab beassar hota hai,

Log yuN hi kyon tanz kasa karte haiN,
Sun.ne wale ka thora sabar hota hai.

Ghum ko chupane ke liye munh phera,
jane kaise zamane ko khabar hota hai.

Dil ko pathar bana liya pee ker aansu,
Phir bhi dil mein dard tau magar hota hai.

Jitna bhi bar bar muskura lun mejfil mein,
Surkh chehra mera sab ki nazar hota hai


waaahhh janaab waahhh kyaa kahne.... beintehaan khoobsurat kalaam likhaa hai aapne..... bahot hi zyaada pasand aayaa mujhe personally aapkaa ye kalaam....

ek do baaten dhyaan rakhne waalii hain, ke sahi jagah pe sahii lafz, gender ke hisaab se istemaal kiye jaaen, like hotaa hai fit hogaa ya hotii hai... dekh lijiyegaa ek baar.....

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13th April 2015, 03:06 AM
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Bad.dua mein meiN bhi dua sa asar hota hai,
Dene wale ki neeyat mein kasar hota hai.

Phool tau sajaye the unki mayyat pe,
Rang gehra bhi tab beassar hota hai,

Log yuN hi kyon tanz kasa karte haiN,
Sun.ne wale ka thora sabar hota hai.

Ghum ko chupane ke liye munh phera,
jane kaise zamane ko khabar hota hai.

Dil ko pathar bana liya pee ker aansu,
Phir bhi dil mein dard tau magar hota hai.

Jitna bhi bar bar muskura lun mejfil mein,
Surkh chehra mera sab ki nazar hota hai
Bahut khoob Sanjay ji, umdaa ehsaas rahe aapki is peshkash mein.

Log yuN hi kyon tanz kasa karte haiN,
Sun.ne wale ka thora sabar hota hai.


Yeh sher aah nikaal le gaya dil se, daad qubool farmiYeGaa


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13th April 2015, 05:30 PM
Log yuN hi kyon tanz kasa karte haiN,
Sun.ne wale ka thora sabar hota hai.

Ghum ko chupane ke liye munh phera,
jane kaise zamane ko khabar hota hai.

Jitna bhi bar bar muskura lun mejfil mein,
Surkh chehra mera sab ki nazar hota hai

Sanjay jee...

Dard ka aik bada sa libaada ohhday ... aap ki yeh pur-soz kaawish jigar ky aar paa ho gayii...

kia kahooN... aah per waah bhi nahi kar sakta...
bas khush rahiye .. salamat rahiye... likhte rahiye

*hSn* : parStaar

tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
   
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13th April 2015, 09:45 PM
Sanjay jee...very nice...liked it....


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waaahhh janaab waahhh kyaa kahne.... beintehaan khoobsurat kalaam likhaa hai aapne..... bahot hi zyaada pasand aayaa mujhe personally aapkaa ye kalaam....

ek do baaten dhyaan rakhne waalii hain, ke sahi jagah pe sahii lafz, gender ke hisaab se istemaal kiye jaaen, like hotaa hai fit hogaa ya hotii hai... dekh lijiyegaa ek baar.....

shukriyaaa

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Bahut khoob Sanjay ji, umdaa ehsaas rahe aapki is peshkash mein.

Log yuN hi kyon tanz kasa karte haiN,
Sun.ne wale ka thora sabar hota hai.


Yeh sher aah nikaal le gaya dil se, daad qubool farmiYeGaa
Mast bhai aap ka pyar aur hausala wazaee ke liye dil se shukriya ..


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