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Love Maa - 11th July 2014, 01:10 PM

Meri Maa ye kahti hain
Meri Maa vo kahti hain,
Har baat par bas yahi baat meri thi,
Jab main college me padti thi.
Usko na sata,Isko mat maar,
Tum kuch nahi jante mere yaar.
Meri maa ye kahti hain,
Meri maa vo kahti hain.
Maa ki har baat thi yaad mujhe,
Pyara tha maa ka sath mujhe.
College chchoota, ghar bhi chchoota,
Maa bhi phir mujhse door huyi.
Kar diya paraya ek pal me,
Milne ko bhi majboor huyi.
Bas yaad aati hain baatein maa ki ,
Pyari pyari aankhein maa ki.
Hath mujhe sahlate huye,
Kabhi sar to kabhi pair dabate huye.
Ab bhi is duniya me jeene ko,
Dard e gam peene ko ,
Maa tera sahara chahiye mujhe,
Achcha bura batane ko
Phir ek baar to dantiye mujhe...
   
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12th July 2014, 12:46 PM

Waah!!!! Bahaut hi khoobsurat ehsaasaat se saji nazm .... pyaar sneh shraddha karuna sabhi bhaav bahaut sundar hain is meiN..bahaut si daad Madhu ji


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12th July 2014, 02:15 PM

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Meri Maa ye kahti hain
Meri Maa vo kahti hain,
Har baat par bas yahi baat meri thi,
Jab main college me padti thi.
Usko na sata,Isko mat maar,
Tum kuch nahi jante mere yaar.
Meri maa ye kahti hain,
Meri maa vo kahti hain.
Maa ki har baat thi yaad mujhe,
Pyara tha maa ka sath mujhe.
College chchoota, ghar bhi chchoota,
Maa bhi phir mujhse door huyi.
Kar diya paraya ek pal me,
Milne ko bhi majboor huyi.
Bas yaad aati hain baatein maa ki ,
Pyari pyari aankhein maa ki.
Hath mujhe sahlate huye,
Kabhi sar to kabhi pair dabate huye.
Ab bhi is duniya me jeene ko,
Dard e gam peene ko ,
Maa tera sahara chahiye mujhe,
Achcha bura batane ko
Phir ek baar to dantiye mujhe...

Good one Madhu ji. ..........................




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12th July 2014, 03:34 PM

maa aisi hee hoti hai madhu ji..............bahut hee sundar ehsaas hain aapke....



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13th July 2014, 11:25 AM

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14th July 2014, 12:44 PM

bahot hi khubsurat ehsaaso.n se bharii ees rachna pe dhero.n daad, Madhuji.....



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15th July 2014, 09:34 AM

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Meri Maa ye kahti hain
Meri Maa vo kahti hain,
Har baat par bas yahi baat meri thi,
Jab main college me padti thi.
Usko na sata,Isko mat maar,
Tum kuch nahi jante mere yaar.
Meri maa ye kahti hain,
Meri maa vo kahti hain.
Maa ki har baat thi yaad mujhe,
Pyara tha maa ka sath mujhe.
College chchoota, ghar bhi chchoota,
Maa bhi phir mujhse door huyi.
Kar diya paraya ek pal me,
Milne ko bhi majboor huyi.
Bas yaad aati hain baatein maa ki ,
Pyari pyari aankhein maa ki.
Hath mujhe sahlate huye,
Kabhi sar to kabhi pair dabate huye.
Ab bhi is duniya me jeene ko,
Dard e gam peene ko ,
Maa tera sahara chahiye mujhe,
Achcha bura batane ko
Phir ek baar to dantiye mujhe...

Maan ke mamatva par ek sunder nazm..........bahut bahut daad wasool paaiyega........
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15th July 2014, 01:45 PM

Hath mujhe sahlate huye,
Kabhi sar to kabhi pair dabate huye.
Ab bhi is duniya me jeene ko,
Dard e gam peene ko ,
Maa tera sahara chahiye mujhe,
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Ab bhi is duniya me jeene ko,
Dard e gam peene ko ,
Maa tera sahara chahiye mujhe,
Achcha bura batane ko
Phir ek baar to dantiye mujhe...


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Waah!!!! Bahaut hi khoobsurat ehsaasaat se saji nazm .... pyaar sneh shraddha karuna sabhi bhaav bahaut sundar hain is meiN..bahaut si daad Madhu ji
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Meri Maa ye kahti hain
Meri Maa vo kahti hain,
Har baat par bas yahi baat meri thi,
Jab main college me padti thi.
Usko na sata,Isko mat maar,
Tum kuch nahi jante mere yaar.
Meri maa ye kahti hain,
Meri maa vo kahti hain.
Maa ki har baat thi yaad mujhe,
Pyara tha maa ka sath mujhe.
College chchoota, ghar bhi chchoota,
Maa bhi phir mujhse door huyi.
Kar diya paraya ek pal me,
Milne ko bhi majboor huyi.
Bas yaad aati hain baatein maa ki ,
Pyari pyari aankhein maa ki.
Hath mujhe sahlate huye,
Kabhi sar to kabhi pair dabate huye.
Ab bhi is duniya me jeene ko,
Dard e gam peene ko ,
Maa tera sahara chahiye mujhe,
Achcha bura batane ko
Phir ek baar to dantiye mujhe...


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bahut achha laga padhkar shakhsiyat ka pata chalta hai aap bhi dil ki baat likhti :-)


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Doston...
Mothers day par..maa par likhi ye nazm yaad aa gayi....
kitne hee bade ho jayein ham par maa ka pyaar vo apnapan kabhi nahi bhulaya ja sakta......



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Maa hindi hai maa o duniya valiyo.....

aap ki nazm per ke ek gane ki line yaad aa gayi , bahut ache ehsaas ..

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