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girtay pathoN ko khizaN maiN ghor se dekha karo |
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girtay pathoN ko khizaN maiN ghor se dekha karo -
14th December 2008, 07:26 PM
girtay pathoN ko khizaaN maiN ghor se dekha karo inki halat dekh ker muj ko zara socha karo maiN ke barsoN se tumharay pyar ka maqrooz hooN aa mujay nilaam kerdo ya koi soda karo har kisi ki aaNkh namm hoti hai muj ko dekh ker sab ye kehtay haiN mujay itni muhabbat na karo din bhi guzray, maah guzray, saal guzray kya karooN jaan hi dedooN sanam esay nahi rootha karo ajnabi rastoN pe chalna tho nahi asaaN magar meray ghar ka raasta gar yaad hai aya karo dharkanaiN meri sono tum door apnay shehr maiN maiN tumhaiN dil maiN pukarooN aur tum samja karo theergi pheli nahi auR aachalay ho dard-e-shab tum tho mehmaaN khaas ho kuch der se aya karo dhoop ki shiddat se maiN tho jal gya abr-e-karam aa ke meri dasht per bhi tum kabhi barsa karo dar ba dar jab tokaraiN ihsan kha li haiN tho ab uskay sajday maiN giro auR ro parho, itna karo! |
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16th December 2008, 11:52 AM
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aaj aapki yeh khoobsurat Ghazal nazae nawaaz huii, waah! kyaa khuub Ghazal hai..yuu.n to puuri Ghazal hame pasand aaii par khaas taur par ye quoted sher behad pasand aaye.. yuu.n hi likhte rahe.n.. oooparwala aap ko aur hunarmand kare, yeh duaa hai....... ek khuubsuurat Ghazal ke liye meri aur se daad aur mubaaraqbaad! Mayank |
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16th December 2008, 09:47 PM
ihasan bhai !
kaise haiN aap ? bhai kamaal ka likhte haiN aap , maiN teesRii martaba paRh raha hunga aapko aur yaQeen maaniye maiN kaafee waQt se aapke kisi kalaam ka intezaar kar raha tha ! jis masoomiyat ke saath aap apne ashaaroN se pesh aate haiN vo mujhe kya har dil azeez honii chaahiye ! janaab maiN bahut der takk issi kashmaksh meiN phaNsa raha ki kin ashaar ko aam o khaas kiya jaaye par ye kaam mere liye bahut mushkil saabit hua aur har sher mujhe pehle paRhe sher se khas laga ! aap bahut achha likhte haiN ... ummeed karta huN ki iss zurf meiN kamii naa aane paayegii ! daad tah e dil se hai , Qabool farmaaeiN ... apnaa khyaal rakheiN ! |
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20th January 2009, 01:41 AM
wah, bahut hi aalaa darze ki ghazal hai, bas dil khush ho gaya padh ke, aapke darkhwast rahegi ki aap aage bhi yuNhi likhte raheN, taaki hum aisi ahchi ghazal se aaage bhi roo-ba-roo hote raheN, bas duaa rahegi aapge aap aur behtar likhte raheN...!!
Aapka Ghayal...!! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ http://alfaaz-e-taish.blogspot.in/ Ishq hota tha, ishq karte haiN, Vo zamana tha, ye zamana hai... ----Taish ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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