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13th August 2010, 10:37 PM
dosti ek aisa jajwa
her rishte me samaya
dost naam usika
jisne her pal saath nibhaya
rishton me jab aaye dosti
her rishta khil jata
paak dosti mil jaaye jisko
jiwan safal ho jaata
saare sapne sach ho jayen
ek dost ki hai ye dua
jiwan upvan rahe mehkata
is se badh kar kahain bhi kya
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13th August 2010, 11:58 PM
ajkal aise utrta hai Dosti ka nasha
jaise utrta hai subah ko posti ka nasha
AApki aankh bahut khatarnaak hai............
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Meri muflisi pe na hans ke wo , tera taaj sar se giraa na de
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16th August 2010, 02:46 PM
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ajkal aise utrta hai Dosti ka nasha
jaise utrta hai subah ko posti ka nasha
jiska nasha hi utar jaye na vh dost hai or na hi post
AApki aankh bahut khatarnaak hai............
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aur ye aankh meri maa ki hai usiki aankhey itni sunder thi
samaje big b?
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18th August 2010, 03:22 PM
Dear Rashmi Sharma Ji! Adab!
Aik khoobsurat tehreer paRhkar bahut achchha laga. Daad qubul kijiye.
(Waquif Ansari)
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dosti ek aisa jajwa
her rishte me samaya
dost naam usika
jisne her pal saath nibhaya
rishton me jab aaye dosti
her rishta khil jata
paak dosti mil jaaye jisko
jiwan safal ho jaata
saare sapne sach ho jayen
ek dost ki hai ye dua
jiwan upvan rahe mehkata
is se badh kar kahain bhi kya
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18th August 2010, 04:12 PM
rashmi ji tussi great ho ji,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
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Wohi rizq deta jahaan ko , wohi zaat sab se azeem hai
Meri muflisi pe na hans ke wo , tera taaj sar se giraa na de
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19th August 2010, 01:30 AM
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dosti ek aisa jajwa
her rishte me samaya
dost naam usika
jisne her pal saath nibhaya
rishton me jab aaye dosti
her rishta khil jata
paak dosti mil jaaye jisko
jiwan safal ho jaata
saare sapne sach ho jayen
ek dost ki hai ye dua
jiwan upvan rahe mehkata
is se badh kar kahain bhi kya
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Rashmi ji, nice poem! achchha laga parh kar.
Thank you.
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19th August 2010, 04:25 AM
masha allh bahuth khoob......... so nice ji......
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20th August 2010, 08:23 PM
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Dear Rashmi Sharma Ji! Adab!
Aik khoobsurat tehreer paRhkar bahut achchha laga. Daad qubul kijiye.
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Waquif Ansari ji, aapne meri rachna ko samaya diya, pada, aur saraha bahut2 shukargujar hoon ji
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Rashmi ji, nice poem! achchha laga parh kar.
Thank you.
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shukria maan ji aise hi housla badhate rahen
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masha allh bahuth khoob......... so nice ji......
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shukria sadiq ji, housla afjaai ke liye
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27th August 2010, 11:31 PM
nice one dear friend...............
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thankyou very much ji................
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3rd September 2010, 06:33 PM
dosti jazba hy mhbt ka
ehsas hy zindagi ka
aarzu hy umr bhar ki
or khel hy wafaaon ka
js mn jeet hy sachai ki
or haar?
is mn hy hi nhi
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6th September 2010, 10:40 PM
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dosti jazba hy mhbt ka
ehsas hy zindagi ka
aarzu hy umr bhar ki
or khel hy wafaaon ka
js mn jeet hy sachai ki
or haar?
is mn hy hi nhi
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syeda ji bahut bahut shukria ji
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