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zindagi lagrahi hai... -
9th February 2004, 05:19 AM
zingadi lagrahi hai jaisay ek khaawb
jab se paaya hai unka yeh saath ankhoin me khushiyan chalakti hain jab hota hai meray haathoin me unka yeh haath zunera  live...love...die |
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9th February 2004, 03:47 PM
Wah bohot khub. Dilse shukriya kabool kijiyega. Khuda kare aise hi ho.......Duwao ke sath izazat chahungi. Baas yunhi likhte rahiyega. Aaye ho meri zindegi meh tum bahar banke mere dil meh yunhi rahna tum Pyaar Pyaar banke aaye ho meri zindegi meh.......gane ki bol thi, aaj aise hi yeh gana bohot achha lagraha hein. Take care. God bless you.
Keep smilling....... Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche** *~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~** *Pure Love** |
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hm -
10th February 2004, 12:51 AM
ufff if i say tht i liked ur poetry u ll b happy but im not gonna say tht i wana say tht ucan write much more better then this try 2 write u can writee mucch more better i dont say i didnt liked ur shairee i liked it but i now u can improve .... soo byee tc
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10th February 2004, 02:56 AM
hi zunera ji well damn that was too good its really nice keep it up n take care tata babye khudahafiz
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hi shimul -
10th February 2004, 02:58 AM
lein app ka ek baar phir se thanx.. bhohut khishi huwi jaan ke tat u liked my poem..bye tc
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hi aftab |
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hi aftab -
10th February 2004, 03:00 AM
i am glad u liked my shayri and as far as improvements every other shayri is a improvement from the last one i write so all i can say is i'll try better nxt time..thanx for likeing my shayri and also thanx for replying..oh ya and also for your advise.lolz bye tc
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