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My Boss & I (cool poem plz just read it)
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Thumbs up My Boss & I (cool poem plz just read it) - 29th January 2005, 10:49 AM

My Boss & I
when i take long time
i'm slow

when my boss takes long time
he is thorough

when i dont do it
i'm lazy

when my boss dosent do it
he is busy

when i do something without being told
i'm trying to be smart

when my boss does the same
that is initiative


when i please my boss
i am apple polishing

when my boss pleases his boss
he is co-operating

when i do something good
he never remembers

when i do something wrong
he never forgets


main aur meri tanhayee..............

I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying

jootha hi sahi,
kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta.......
«´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`»
(¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸)

log dil ko dard samajhte hai,
ham dard ko dil samajhte hai.....

hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe,
ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe
{nt mine}
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Gr8! - 29th January 2005, 11:25 AM

Quote:
Originally posted by dard_thesorrow
My Boss & I
when i take long time
i'm slow

when my boss takes long time
he is thorough

when i dont do it
i'm lazy

when my boss dosent do it
he is busy

when i do something without being told
i'm trying to be smart

when my boss does the same
that is initiative


when i please my boss
i am apple polishing

when my boss pleases his boss
he is co-operating

when i do something good
he never remembers

when i do something wrong
he never forgets

Great Work Jubin....

wht ever u hav written is so true abt the Boss...
The same thing happens to everyone of us...
Really innovative way of writing......Really great work buddy.

Keep up the good work!

bye
take care..
Have a wonderful time....


~ Dosti Dil se ~
: : Dost har lamha saath tumhare hai hum : :
Listen to your mind...but follow your heart.
"Anyone who believes sunshine brings happiness has never danced in the rain."
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29th January 2005, 11:28 AM

thank u yash sahab

thanks for the appreciation
i just started with observations
and didn't know it would end up in a poem
aur ye to socha hi nahi tha ki koi reply dega

thank a lot yash sahab


main aur meri tanhayee..............

I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying

jootha hi sahi,
kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta.......
«´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`»
(¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸)

log dil ko dard samajhte hai,
ham dard ko dil samajhte hai.....

hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe,
ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe
{nt mine}
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30th January 2005, 02:44 AM

Cool !!

Keep sharing with us !!
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30th January 2005, 02:48 AM

Badhiya hai dost mere.

Kya baat hai Boss ne tumhe sataya to nahi hai na jyaada

LOL

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30th January 2005, 10:18 AM

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Cool !!

Keep sharing with us !!
thank u abhishek


main aur meri tanhayee..............

I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying

jootha hi sahi,
kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta.......
«´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`»
(¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸)

log dil ko dard samajhte hai,
ham dard ko dil samajhte hai.....

hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe,
ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe
{nt mine}
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30th January 2005, 10:21 AM

Quote:
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Badhiya hai dost mere.

Kya baat hai Boss ne tumhe sataya to nahi hai na jyaada

LOL

Thanks
Rohin
rohin sahab hum boss kaise sata sakta hai
hum to abhi 18 saal ke hain aur abhi to padhai chalu hai

aur 3 saal baad i'll be an MBA and i myself will be a boss in my dads company

thanks dude for appreciating my work


main aur meri tanhayee..............

I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying

jootha hi sahi,
kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta.......
«´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`»
(¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸)

log dil ko dard samajhte hai,
ham dard ko dil samajhte hai.....

hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe,
ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe
{nt mine}
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