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Love Lamhe - 7th June 2003, 09:31 PM
BIN TERE HAR LAMAHA UDAS HO GAYAA HAI,
MERA DIL TERE DIL KE PAAS HO GAYAA HAI.
JO HO RAHA THA VOH DIWAANAGI THI,
ISKA MUJHE EHSAAS HO GAYA HAI.
PALAKON MEIN AB TERI NAMI HAI,
BIN TERE JINAA KUCHH BHI NAHI HAI,
YAADON MEIN AB TERI CHAANDANI HAI.

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"It takes a minute to have a crush on someone, an hour to like someone, a day to love someone, but it takes a lifetime to forget someone..."

Isn't that true??? ;-)
   
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7th June 2003, 10:29 PM
Rimjhim ji ..

Achha likha hai magar kuch ferbadal kariye to yakinana ye lines nihayti khobsoorat ghajal me tabdeel ho jayengi ..

BIN TERE HAR LAMAHA UDAS HO GAYAA HAI,
MERA DIL TERE DIL KE PAAS HO GAYAA HAI.
JO HO RAHA THA VOH DIWAANAGI THI,
ISKA MUJHE EHSAAS HO GAYA HAI.

yahan tak to bahut achha hai iske baad thodi si lay bigadi si lagti hai Qalam ki .. see agar is tarah kiya jaye to kaisa rahega ..

Had E nigah se tu door chala gaya lekin
PalkooN me teri nami ka ehtaram ho gaya hai

Bin tere jina kuch bhi nahi Lekin ..
YadooN se dil mera abaad ho gaya hai


Maine socha shayad ek dost ane dost ki creation ko thoda sa aur khobsoat bana de .. agar koi bhool chok ho gayi ho to muaaf kijiyega ..

ab najar daali jaye poori ghajal par ..

BIN TERE HAR LAMAHA UDAS HO GAYAA HAI,
MERA DIL TERE DIL KE PAAS HO GAYAA HAI.

JO HO RAHA THA VOH DIWAANAGI THI,
ISKA MUJHE EHSAAS HO GAYA HAI.

Had E nigah se tu door chala gaya lekin
PalkooN me teri nami ka ehtaram ho gaya hai

Bin tere jina kuch bhi nahi Lekin ..
YadooN se dil mera abaad ho gaya hai

Aisa to nahi ki maine ek khoobsorat ghajal ka kabada kar diya ho
agar aisa hua to kam se kam muaafi ke kabil chor dijiyega ..

take care ..

andaaz
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Hi - 7th June 2003, 10:51 PM
Khitiz ji chaliye yeh maine maan liya ki maine kuch khobosoorat lines likhi lekin oose aur khobosoorat banane ke liye shukriyaa bhi kam parega. Aur waise aapne yeh soch bhi kaise liya ki agar apa kuch sahi bataenge mujeh to mujhe bura lagega, kya abhi tak aap rimjhim ko samajh nahi paaye hain kya??? I am not a mysterious girl, am i???

Jawaab dijiye. Waise apane bahaut acacha likha aur yaken maaniye really enjoyed reading it after you added couple of lines, saath dene ka shukriyaa .

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8th June 2003, 03:11 PM
Shukriya rimjhim ji ..
bada sukoon mila dil ko , ki maine koi gadbad nahi kari ..

And i trust u tabhi to aapki nuzm ko apni milkiyat samjh kar jaise man kiya vaise badal diya ..

Aur main ye haQ aapko bhi deta huN jab bhi aapko lage ki meri koi bhi creations kisi aur tarike se aur khoobsorat ban sakti hai ..
to aap behichak usme dakhal daal sakti hain ..

Chaliye milte hain fir ..
Take Care

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