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30th July 2016, 02:32 PM
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vah madhu ji oomda beher oar sher
jald likhne ki koshish krti hum mai bhi
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Bilkul saba ji...hame intzaar rahega aapka....
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30th July 2016, 02:36 PM
Behr
1212/1212/1212/1212
Na chahtein na rahtein na dil me phir sukoon hai
Hai lutf e zindagi bhi kam agar nahi junoon hai
1st sher
Tujhe batau bhi toh kya be-taab dil ki keyfiyat
Na aaye neend raato ko ye ishq ka fusoon hai (MUJAHID)
2nd sher
Hai mushkilon ki andhiyaan yakeen dagmaga raha
Khuda ka naam dil me rakh vahi tera sutoon hai(madhu)
Sutoon=pillar
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
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8th August 2016, 04:05 PM
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Behr
1212/1212/1212/1212
Na chahtein na rahtein na dil me phir sukoon hai
Hai lutf e zindagi bhi kam agar nahi junoon hai
1st sher
Tujhe batau bhi toh kya be-taab dil ki keyfiyat
Na aaye neend raato ko ye ishq ka fusoon hai (MUJAHID)
2nd sher
Hai mushkilon ki andhiyaan yakeen dagmaga raha
Khuda ka naam dil me rakh vahi tera sutoon hai(madhu)
Sutoon=pillar
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doston mahfil ruk gayi hai...aap sab se request hai ki aage sher pesh karein aur ghazal ko mukammal karne me madad karein....
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
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17th August 2016, 12:14 PM
Is ghazal ke naseeb me anjaam nahi hai shayad..
Mujahid sahab aapse request hai aap ek nayi behr dekar nayi ghazal ka agaaz karein.
Jisse ruki huyi mahfil me rawani aaye..
Shukriya..
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
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17th August 2016, 05:53 PM
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Is ghazal ke naseeb me anjaam nahi hai shayad..
Mujahid sahab aapse request hai aap ek nayi behr dekar nayi ghazal ka agaaz karein.
Jisse ruki huyi mahfil me rawani aaye..
Shukriya..
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Chaliye madhu ji ki farmaish pe ek nayi behr ke saath hazir hu
Umeed hai iss ghazal ko sahi anjaam tak hum sab mil ke pohchayenge
Lijiye pesh-e-khidmat hai
BEHR-E-MUJTAS:
Behr-e-mujtas musamman makhboon mahzuuf/makhboon maqsuur, makhboon mahzuuf musakkin, makhboon maqsuur musakkin
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Mufa'ilun, Fa'ila'tun, Mufa'ilun, Fa'i'lun/Fa'i'laan/Fe'lun/Fe'laan
مفاعِلن، فَعِلاتُن، مفاعِلن، فَعِلن(فَعِلان) فعلن(فعلان
مفاعِلن، فَعِلاتُن، مفاعِلن، فَعِلن(فَعِلان) فعلن(فعلان
1212, 1122, 1212, 112/22
1212, 1122, 1212, 112/22
Ehem nikaat= Fa'i'lun mai "i" mutahrik hai
Fa'i'laan mai "n" saakin hai
Fe'laan mai "n" saakin hai
Matla:
Dilo ke faasley ab hone bhi lagey hai daraaz
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19th August 2016, 03:18 PM
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Chaliye madhu ji ki farmaish pe ek nayi behr ke saath hazir hu
Umeed hai iss ghazal ko sahi anjaam tak hum sab mil ke pohchayenge
Lijiye pesh-e-khidmat hai
BEHR-E-MUJTAS:
Behr-e-mujtas musamman makhboon mahzuuf/makhboon maqsuur, makhboon mahzuuf musakkin, makhboon maqsuur musakkin
Mufa'ilun, Fa'ila'tun, Mufa'ilun, Fa'i'lun/Fa'i'laan/Fe'lun/Fe'laan
Mufa'ilun, Fa'ila'tun, Mufa'ilun, Fa'i'lun/Fa'i'laan/Fe'lun/Fe'laan
مفاعِلن، فَعِلاتُن، مفاعِلن، فَعِلن(فَعِلان) فعلن(فعلان
مفاعِلن، فَعِلاتُن، مفاعِلن، فَعِلن(فَعِلان) فعلن(فعلان
1212, 1122, 1212, 112/22
1212, 1122, 1212, 112/22
Ehem nikaat= Fa'i'lun mai "i" mutahrik hai
Fa'i'laan mai "n" saakin hai
Fe'laan mai "n" saakin hai
Matla:
Dilo ke faasley ab hone bhi lagey hai daraaz
Kahi se aa raha hai dil ko hijr ki aawaaz (MUJAHID)
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Shukriya mujahid ji...
Sabhi doston se guzarish hai agla sher pesh karein...
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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21st August 2016, 10:58 PM
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Chaliye madhu ji ki farmaish pe ek nayi behr ke saath hazir hu
Umeed hai iss ghazal ko sahi anjaam tak hum sab mil ke pohchayenge
Lijiye pesh-e-khidmat hai
BEHR-E-MUJTAS:
Behr-e-mujtas musamman makhboon mahzuuf/makhboon maqsuur, makhboon mahzuuf musakkin, makhboon maqsuur musakkin
Mufa'ilun, Fa'ila'tun, Mufa'ilun, Fa'i'lun/Fa'i'laan/Fe'lun/Fe'laan
Mufa'ilun, Fa'ila'tun, Mufa'ilun, Fa'i'lun/Fa'i'laan/Fe'lun/Fe'laan
مفاعِلن، فَعِلاتُن، مفاعِلن، فَعِلن(فَعِلان) فعلن(فعلان
مفاعِلن، فَعِلاتُن، مفاعِلن، فَعِلن(فَعِلان) فعلن(فعلان
1212, 1122, 1212, 112/22
1212, 1122, 1212, 112/22
Ehem nikaat= Fa'i'lun mai "i" mutahrik hai
Fa'i'laan mai "n" saakin hai
Fe'laan mai "n" saakin hai
Matla:
Dilo ke faasley ab hone bhi lagey hai daraaz
Kahi se aa raha hai dil ko hijr ki aawaaz (MUJAHID)
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umdaa aaghaaz mere bhai, apni maaloomat ke liye poocha raha hoon misra-e-sani mein kahi se aa raha hai hoga ya kahi se aa rahi hoga?
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क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ
रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है
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21st August 2016, 11:52 PM
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umdaa aaghaaz mere bhai, apni maaloomat ke liye poocha raha hoon misra-e-sani mein kahi se aa raha hai hoga ya kahi se aa rahi hoga?
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Shukriya mast sahab daad deney ke liye
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Shukriya aap ki tajveez ke liye
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26th August 2016, 09:58 PM
mujahid saheb aasan si beher ar asaar dia karen hamkoh itni mushkil beher samjh nahi aati :conf used:
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Chaliye madhu ji ki farmaish pe ek nayi behr ke saath hazir hu
Umeed hai iss ghazal ko sahi anjaam tak hum sab mil ke pohchayenge
Lijiye pesh-e-khidmat hai
BEHR-E-MUJTAS:
Behr-e-mujtas musamman makhboon mahzuuf/makhboon maqsuur, makhboon mahzuuf musakkin, makhboon maqsuur musakkin
Mufa'ilun, Fa'ila'tun, Mufa'ilun, Fa'i'lun/Fa'i'laan/Fe'lun/Fe'laan
Mufa'ilun, Fa'ila'tun, Mufa'ilun, Fa'i'lun/Fa'i'laan/Fe'lun/Fe'laan
مفاعِلن، فَعِلاتُن، مفاعِلن، فَعِلن(فَعِلان) فعلن(فعلان
مفاعِلن، فَعِلاتُن، مفاعِلن، فَعِلن(فَعِلان) فعلن(فعلان
1212, 1122, 1212, 112/22
1212, 1122, 1212, 112/22
Ehem nikaat= Fa'i'lun mai "i" mutahrik hai
Fa'i'laan mai "n" saakin hai
Fe'laan mai "n" saakin hai
Matla:
Dilo ke faasley ab hone bhi lagey hai daraaz
Kahi se aa raha hai dil ko hijr ki aawaaz (MUJAHID)
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27th August 2016, 09:49 AM
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Mohtarma saba ji
Aap behr ki istilaahi naam se bilkul confused mat hoiye
Mai jab bhi koi nayi ghazal pesh karta hu koshish karta har baar alag behr ka istamaal karu
Ye bohat maqbool behr hai jiss mai kaafi mashoor ghazle likhe hai shaurao ne
Misaal ke taur par
1) Har ik baat pe kehte ho tum ke tu kya hai
Tumhi kaho ke ye andaaz-e-guftgu kya hai (MIRZA GHALIB)
2) Gulo mai rang bharey baad-e-nau-bahaar chaley
Chaley bhi aao ke gulshan ka karobaar chaley (FAIZ AHMED FAIZ)
3) Kabhi kabhi mere dil mai khayaal aata hai (SAHIR LUDHIANVI)
Aap arkaan aur uss ke vazn pe hi dhyaan dijiye
Aap jaise ba-kamaal shaiera zaroor achha likh sakenge
Maine iss liye urdu aur roman mai dono mai arkaan likh diye sab ki aasaani ke liye
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29th August 2016, 12:40 PM
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Chaliye madhu ji ki farmaish pe ek nayi behr ke saath hazir hu
Umeed hai iss ghazal ko sahi anjaam tak hum sab mil ke pohchayenge
Lijiye pesh-e-khidmat hai
BEHR-E-MUJTAS:
Behr-e-mujtas musamman makhboon mahzuuf/makhboon maqsuur, makhboon mahzuuf musakkin, makhboon maqsuur musakkin
Mufa'ilun, Fa'ila'tun, Mufa'ilun, Fa'i'lun/Fa'i'laan/Fe'lun/Fe'laan
Mufa'ilun, Fa'ila'tun, Mufa'ilun, Fa'i'lun/Fa'i'laan/Fe'lun/Fe'laan
مفاعِلن، فَعِلاتُن، مفاعِلن، فَعِلن(فَعِلان) فعلن(فعلان
مفاعِلن، فَعِلاتُن، مفاعِلن، فَعِلن(فَعِلان) فعلن(فعلان
1212, 1122, 1212, 112/22
1212, 1122, 1212, 112/22
Ehem nikaat= Fa'i'lun mai "i" mutahrik hai
Fa'i'laan mai "n" saakin hai
Fe'laan mai "n" saakin hai
Matla:
Dilo ke faasley ab hone bhi lagey hai daraaz
Kahi se aa rahi hai dil ko hijr ki aawaaz (MUJAHID)
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Na jane kya hoga anjaam is kahani ka
Sitam se dard se hee jiska ho raha aaghaaz... (madhu)
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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29th August 2016, 02:05 PM
shukkria mujahid sahib
buhet achey sey aap ney samjhaya hey
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Mohtarma saba ji
Aap behr ki istilaahi naam se bilkul confused mat hoiye
Mai jab bhi koi nayi ghazal pesh karta hu koshish karta har baar alag behr ka istamaal karu
Ye bohat maqbool behr hai jiss mai kaafi mashoor ghazle likhe hai shaurao ne
Misaal ke taur par
1) Har ik baat pe kehte ho tum ke tu kya hai
Tumhi kaho ke ye andaaz-e-guftgu kya hai (MIRZA GHALIB)
2) Gulo mai rang bharey baad-e-nau-bahaar chaley
Chaley bhi aao ke gulshan ka karobaar chaley (FAIZ AHMED FAIZ)
3) Kabhi kabhi mere dil mai khayaal aata hai (SAHIR LUDHIANVI)
Aap arkaan aur uss ke vazn pe hi dhyaan dijiye
Aap jaise ba-kamaal shaiera zaroor achha likh sakenge
Maine iss liye urdu aur roman mai dono mai arkaan likh diye sab ki aasaani ke liye
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29th August 2016, 02:30 PM
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Na jane kya hoga anjaam is kahani ka
Sitam se dard se hee jiska ho raha aaghaaz... (madhu)
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Behtareen sher hua hai madhu ji
Waah waah waah waah
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30th August 2016, 06:57 AM
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Behtareen sher hua hai madhu ji
Waah waah waah waah
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Bahut shukriya janaab....aate rahiye...
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
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1st September 2016, 12:51 PM
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Na jane kya hoga anjaam is kahani ka
Sitam se dard se hee jiska ho raha aaghaaz... (madhu)
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2nd sher
ZameeN pe kitney parindey girey falak se yu
Ye dekh kar na raha mujh mai hasrat-e-parvaaz (MUJAHID)
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26th September 2016, 06:04 PM
Dosto ghazal be-kas padh gayi hai
Moazziz khavateen aur hazraat se guzarish hai kashti ko sahil tak pohchaye
Kya ishaara karey ye hawaaiye
Gaur se sun zara tu sadaaiye
Khushk pattey bhi kehte bohat kuch
Shabnami phool jo keh na paaiye
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26th September 2016, 06:05 PM
Dosto ghazal be-kas padh gayi hai
Moazziz khavateen aur hazraat se guzarish hai kashti ko sahil tak pohchaye
Kya ishaara karey ye hawaaiye
Gaur se sun zara tu sadaaiye
Khushk pattey bhi kehte bohat kuch
Shabnami phool jo keh na paaiye
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6th October 2016, 03:58 PM
mahfil eghazal aagey barahiyen mujahid sahib .....
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6th October 2016, 06:46 PM
Aakhri sher toh maine hi kaha saba ji
Aap koi sher arz karey agla sher mai pesh karta hu
Kya ishaara karey ye hawaaiye
Gaur se sun zara tu sadaaiye
Khushk pattey bhi kehte bohat kuch
Shabnami phool jo keh na paaiye
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8th October 2016, 09:36 PM
aap beher aor sheir dein taakey silsila aagey barhaya jaye
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Aadaab mohtaram khavateen aur hazraat
Shayad guzishta behr thoda mushkil laga bohat se logo ko aisa mujhe ehsaas hua
Chaliye ek bohat hi maqbool behr ke saath mehfil ka phir se aaghaaz kiya jaaye
Pesh-e-khidmat ek naya behr
Behr-e-mutaqaarib musammam salim
فعولن فعولن فعولن فعولن
فعولن فعولن فعولن فعولن
Fa'uu'lun Fa'uu'lun Fa'uu'lun Fa'uu'lun
Fa'uu'lun Fa'uu'lun Fa'uu'lun Fa'uu'lun
122 122 122 122
122 122 122 122
Matla:
Kami na rahey darmiyaaN ab hamarey
Chalo ab mita dey giley shikwe saarey (MUJAHID)
Kya ishaara karey ye hawaaiye
Gaur se sun zara tu sadaaiye
Khushk pattey bhi kehte bohat kuch
Shabnami phool jo keh na paaiye
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8th October 2016, 10:44 PM
buhet achi beher aor sheir bhi buhet achaa hey mujahid sahib
Kami na rahey darmiyaaN ab hamarey
Chalo ab mita dey giley shikwe saarey (MUJAHID)
chaley aayo key raah tuktey sitaarey
binaa chand key hain adhurey nazaare
sabaa
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Aadaab mohtaram khavateen aur hazraat
Shayad guzishta behr thoda mushkil laga bohat se logo ko aisa mujhe ehsaas hua
Chaliye ek bohat hi maqbool behr ke saath mehfil ka phir se aaghaaz kiya jaaye
Pesh-e-khidmat ek naya behr
Behr-e-mutaqaarib musammam salim
فعولن فعولن فعولن فعولن
فعولن فعولن فعولن فعولن
Fa'uu'lun Fa'uu'lun Fa'uu'lun Fa'uu'lun
Fa'uu'lun Fa'uu'lun Fa'uu'lun Fa'uu'lun
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122 122 122 122
Matla:
Kami na rahey darmiyaaN ab hamarey
Chalo ab mita dey giley shikwe saarey (MUJAHID)
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Bahot khoobsoorat behar aur sher mujahid sahab shukriya apka.....
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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Kami na rahey darmiyaaN ab hamarey
Chalo ab mita dey giley shikwe saarey (MUJAHID)
chaley aayo key raah tuktey sitaarey
binaa chand key hain adhurey nazaare
sabaa
Ana ki jagah ho na ab ulfato.n me
Milei.n jitne pal, chahto.n me guzarei.n.(madhu)
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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11th October 2016, 08:49 AM
Bohat hi khoobsurat sher madhu ji aur saba sahiba
Baaqi membraan se pur-khuloos guzarish hai iss ghazal ko kamyaab banaiye aur sahi anjaam tak pohchaye
Kya ishaara karey ye hawaaiye
Gaur se sun zara tu sadaaiye
Khushk pattey bhi kehte bohat kuch
Shabnami phool jo keh na paaiye
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Bohat hi khoobsurat sher madhu ji aur saba sahiba
Baaqi membraan se pur-khuloos guzarish hai iss ghazal ko kamyaab banaiye aur sahi anjaam tak pohchaye
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Shukriya mujahid sahab.......................
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
madhu..
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11th October 2016, 03:18 PM
madhu ji buhet acha sher likha hey aap ney
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Originally Posted by Madhu 14
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Kami na rahey darmiyaaN ab hamarey
Chalo ab mita dey giley shikwe saarey (MUJAHID)
chaley aayo key raah tuktey sitaarey
binaa chand key hain adhurey nazaare
sabaa
Ana ki jagah ho na ab ulfato.n me
Milei.n jitne pal, chahto.n me guzarei.n.(madhu)
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11th October 2016, 03:50 PM
buhet shukria madhu ji aap bhi likhen intezar rahey ga apkey sheir ka
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13th October 2016, 08:20 AM
3rd sher
Na kar tu mere yaado ko yu hi gharat
Mai zinda hu inn yaado ke hi saharey (MUJAHID)
Kya ishaara karey ye hawaaiye
Gaur se sun zara tu sadaaiye
Khushk pattey bhi kehte bohat kuch
Shabnami phool jo keh na paaiye
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13th October 2016, 08:22 AM
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Kami na rahey darmiyaaN ab hamarey
Chalo ab mita dey giley shikwe saarey (MUJAHID)
chaley aayo key raah tuktey sitaarey
binaa chand key hain adhurey nazaare (SABA)
Ana ki jagah ho na ab ulfato.n me
Milei.n jitne pal, chahto.n me guzarei.n.(MADHU)
Na kar tu mere yaado ko yu hi gharat
Mai zinda hu inn yaado ke hi saharey (MUJAHID)
Kya ishaara karey ye hawaaiye
Gaur se sun zara tu sadaaiye
Khushk pattey bhi kehte bohat kuch
Shabnami phool jo keh na paaiye
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13th October 2016, 01:54 PM
mai tanha rahu gee terey saath main bhi
na mil paaye gai ab sitarey hamarey
sabaa
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17th October 2016, 07:24 AM
Bahot khoob dosto.n..agli koshish pesh hai..
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Matla
Kami na rahey darmiyaaN ab hamarey
Chalo ab mita dey giley shikwe saarey (MUJAHID)
1st sher
chaley aayo key raah tuktey sitaarey
binaa chand key hain adhurey nazaare (SABA)
2nd sher
Ana ki jagah ho na ab ulfato.n me
Milei.n jitne pal, chahto.n me guzarei.n.(MADHU)
3rd sher
Na kar tu mere yaado ko yu hi gharat
Mai zinda hu inn yaado ke hi saharey (MUJAHID)
4th sher
mai tanha rahu gee terey saath main bhi
na mil paaye gai ab sitarey hamarey
(sabaa)
5th sher..
Nahi sath jo ham to mayoos har shai
Chalo sath mil ke chaman ye nikharei.n(madhu)
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
madhu..
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