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kaash samja jaate meri khata - 15th December 2005, 09:54 PM

Waqt is tarah hatho se sarakta raha
N apni khata jaan paayi or ..
N zindgi ko sawaar paayi
mujse koi umiid na rakh ab aye dil,
nazar to aati hu zinda mai..
par saans bhi aaj udhaar si lag rahi hai
raah mai bikhre huae the rishte
socha aanchal mai samet lu apne
par n jaane daaman mai yah kaisi
kaanto si chubhan chhu rahi hai
kya yahi meri khata hui ke
tumhe khushiya dene ki chah mai
n jaane kitne abhaav apna liye
or yahi abhaav dekh tumne kaha
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Re: kaash samja jaate meri khata - 15th December 2005, 10:00 PM

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Waqt is tarah hatho se sarakta raha
N apni khata jaan paayi or ..
N zindgi ko sawaar paayi
mujse koi umiid na rakh ab aye dil,
nazar to aati hu zinda mai..
par saans bhi aaj udhaar si lag rahi hai
raah mai bikhre huae the rishte
socha aanchal mai samet lu apne
par n jaane daaman mai yah kaisi
kaanto si chubhan chhu rahi hai
kya yahi meri khata hui ke
tumhe khushiya dene ki chah mai
n jaane kitne abhaav apna liye
or yahi abhaav dekh tumne kaha
ab patjhad si nazar aa rahi hu
bahut hi acha likha hai MA

bhale rishte bikhar jaye,
bhale zindagi rut jaye,
humara saath na chodana,
bhale zindagi patjhad nazar aaye.....


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Re: kaash samja jaate meri khata - 15th December 2005, 10:40 PM

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Waqt is tarah hatho se sarakta raha
N apni khata jaan paayi or ..
N zindgi ko sawaar paayi
mujse koi umiid na rakh ab aye dil,
nazar to aati hu zinda mai..
par saans bhi aaj udhaar si lag rahi hai
raah mai bikhre huae the rishte
socha aanchal mai samet lu apne
par n jaane daaman mai yah kaisi
kaanto si chubhan chhu rahi hai
kya yahi meri khata hui ke
tumhe khushiya dene ki chah mai
n jaane kitne abhaav apna liye
or yahi abhaav dekh tumne kaha
ab patjhad si nazar aa rahi hu
di....aapne bilkul mere dil ka haal likh diya hai......
padhke accha laga di magar dil-o-dimaag pe ek ajeeb si kaifiyat chaa gayi hai..... khair di aap aise likhke mehfil sajate raho....aapki faru.


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Subha Kii Gard MeiN Naa Kho JaayeiN
Aa ! Tere Gham MeiN Jaagtii AankheiN
Kam Se Kam Aik Raat So JaayeiN."


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Re: kaash samja jaate meri khata - 15th December 2005, 10:43 PM

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Waqt is tarah hatho se sarakta raha
N apni khata jaan paayi or ..
N zindgi ko sawaar paayi
mujse koi umiid na rakh ab aye dil,
nazar to aati hu zinda mai..
par saans bhi aaj udhaar si lag rahi hai
raah mai bikhre huae the rishte
socha aanchal mai samet lu apne
par n jaane daaman mai yah kaisi
kaanto si chubhan chhu rahi hai
kya yahi meri khata hui ke
tumhe khushiya dene ki chah mai
n jaane kitne abhaav apna liye
or yahi abhaav dekh tumne kaha
ab patjhad si nazar aa rahi hu




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jab yaad karte hai kisi ko
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Keya Kahoun Aapko...yehii :) @};- Hugs :)** - 15th December 2005, 11:38 PM

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Waqt is tarah hatho se sarakta raha
N apni khata jaan paayi or ..
N zindgi ko sawaar paayi
mujse koi umiid na rakh ab aye dil,
nazar to aati hu zinda mai..
par saans bhi aaj udhaar si lag rahi hai
raah mai bikhre huae the rishte
socha aanchal mai samet lu apne
par n jaane daaman mai yah kaisi
kaanto si chubhan chhu rahi hai
kya yahi meri khata hui ke
tumhe khushiya dene ki chah mai
n jaane kitne abhaav apna liye
or yahi abhaav dekh tumne kaha
ab patjhad si nazar aa rahi hu
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16th December 2005, 12:34 AM

meri majboori pe teri kadwahat thi..
mujhe laga meri mohbbat ki keemat thi...


mata kya kahuN ki ye dastoor e jahaN hai ,,... humeN mili to kya ranj kareN... bas aankheN band kar ke ro hi sakte hai



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Re: Re: kaash samja jaate meri khata - 16th December 2005, 08:32 AM

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bahut hi acha likha hai MA

bhale rishte bikhar jaye,
bhale zindagi rut jaye,
humara saath na chodana,
bhale zindagi patjhad nazar aaye.....

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Re: Re: kaash samja jaate meri khata - 16th December 2005, 08:39 AM

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di....aapne bilkul mere dil ka haal likh diya hai......
padhke accha laga di magar dil-o-dimaag pe ek ajeeb si kaifiyat chaa gayi hai..... khair di aap aise likhke mehfil sajate raho....aapki faru.
meri faru,

tumhe yah rachna apni si lagi... yah jaana. aur baat ajeeb si kaifiyat ki.. n jaane yah kab aa kar chha jaati hai or fir kabhi aanshu ban sarakti hai to kabhi aankhe or bhi sooni kar jaati hai ...

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Re: kaash samja jaate meri khata - 16th December 2005, 08:44 AM

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Waqt is tarah hatho se sarakta raha
N apni khata jaan paayi or ..
N zindgi ko sawaar paayi
mujse koi umiid na rakh ab aye dil,
nazar to aati hu zinda mai..
par saans bhi aaj udhaar si lag rahi hai
raah mai bikhre huae the rishte
socha aanchal mai samet lu apne
par n jaane daaman mai yah kaisi
kaanto si chubhan chhu rahi hai
kya yahi meri khata hui ke
tumhe khushiya dene ki chah mai
n jaane kitne abhaav apna liye
or yahi abhaav dekh tumne kaha
ab patjhad si nazar aa rahi hu
Coffee Mitr,

Patjhad bhi ek mausam hai
Kal phir sawan angdai legi

Isliye khush rahiye sada bus yehi hai dua..
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hi - 16th December 2005, 09:11 AM

dear meena di
i agre with rohin
patjhad ek mausam hai
badal jayega !!
aur khushiyon ke pal layega

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Re: kaash samja jaate meri khata - 16th December 2005, 09:31 AM

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Waqt is tarah hatho se sarakta raha
N apni khata jaan paayi or ..
N zindgi ko sawaar paayi
mujse koi umiid na rakh ab aye dil,
nazar to aati hu zinda mai..
par saans bhi aaj udhaar si lag rahi hai
raah mai bikhre huae the rishte
socha aanchal mai samet lu apne
par n jaane daaman mai yah kaisi
kaanto si chubhan chhu rahi hai
kya yahi meri khata hui ke
tumhe khushiya dene ki chah mai
n jaane kitne abhaav apna liye
or yahi abhaav dekh tumne kaha
ab patjhad si nazar aa rahi hu
ohhhhhhhhhhh diiiiiii..... sachhi itni gehraayi hai isme.... godddd...... cheer sa diya hai is kavita ne.... agar is baat ko koi muh se bol de to saamne waale ke paas koi jawaab na ho.. itni tadap hai isme.... itne seedhe, saral shabdo.n me dil ki teees ko bayaa.n kar diya....
apna khayaal rakhna diii.... is tareh ki kavita padh kar thoda fikr hoti hai..
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16th December 2005, 11:08 AM

meena dost

apne dard ko is khoobsurti se bayaan kerti ho tum ke sab ko hi apna apna mehsoos hota hai.
her dardmand dil isey mehsoos kerta hai aur yeh sab aap ka kamal hai dost.

meri dua hai ke aap pat-jhar ke baad wali bahaar ko , sirsabz hota dekho aur mehsoos karo.

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Re: kaash samja jaate meri khata - 16th December 2005, 11:23 AM

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Waqt is tarah hatho se sarakta raha
N apni khata jaan paayi or ..
N zindgi ko sawaar paayi
mujse koi umiid na rakh ab aye dil,
nazar to aati hu zinda mai..
par saans bhi aaj udhaar si lag rahi hai
raah mai bikhre huae the rishte
socha aanchal mai samet lu apne
par n jaane daaman mai yah kaisi
kaanto si chubhan chhu rahi hai
kya yahi meri khata hui ke
tumhe khushiya dene ki chah mai
n jaane kitne abhaav apna liye
or yahi abhaav dekh tumne kaha
ab patjhad si nazar aa rahi hu

Maa kyu hota hai aisa......? jawaab nahi hai... lekin kya usane kabhi nahi socha hoga ki mere jagah wo rehta to kya karta???



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hi - 16th December 2005, 02:32 PM

bas...shu kahu!
Abhavo ne apnavi lidha pachi pan..awu toh bane j che..

pan hamesha ni jem bhaav...ghanu badhu kahi gayo!!...

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16th December 2005, 02:40 PM

Didi....

Accha likha hai aapne...par... shaayad yehi zindagi hai....


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16th December 2005, 03:40 PM

MaaNgna meri fitrat na thi ...Ey Dil
Per na jaane kahaaN se ye ROG laga baitha....
Itna maaNga ... ke Bhagwaan bhi muskuraane laga mujhper
Or mai....Bina ibaadat kiye hi...uske dar se waapas aa gaya...

Ji Meena ji....aapki ye kavita parhi...to zehen me ye alfaaz aa hi gaye...

Koi hame tadpa nahi sakta...agar ham tadapna na chaaheiN to...or rahi baat patjhad ki...to yahi kahooNga..ke...

Patjhad hamaari maansikta me hai....ham khud ko patjhad mehsoos kareiNge to patjhad ban jaaeiNge...warna...sab bahaar hai.

ek sher or...

YooNto apne sheher me bhi...
Kami na thi kadardaanoN ki...
Ham to bas mukaddar aajmaane
Teri galiyoN me chale aaye...


Take care

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16th December 2005, 04:01 PM

Oh Dearest Meenajee!

Just Cant explain the pain, this thread has brought in my soul...... I have nothing but a commitment... A promis to land a hand on ur judgement day.... I promis to pray for your health / wealth and happiness .....

Dedicate these lines in your honor

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Tum meri yaad ke samunder mein, tum meri ruh ke ujalon mein

Tumse aabad hei ye tanhai, tum hi roshan ho sab ujalon mein
Phool hi phool khil har shai, aaye jo tum khayalon mein

People like you make this world still livable.......

Take a very good care of yourself
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Re: Keya Kahoun Aapko...yehii :) @};- Hugs :)** - 20th December 2005, 07:40 PM

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Hain Dard Magar Kis Ko..Baataaye..Ke Kahaan Hain..
Ye Zakhm-e-Muhabbat Hain..Dikhhaa Bhii Nahiin Sakte..
Uss Bhulne Wale Ko..Bhulaa Bhii Nahiin Sakte..
Hum Aapni..Wafaa Yaaad..Dilaa Bhii Nahiin Sakte..Lata Jee**

*...Dear Meena, ab main aa to gayi houn lekin ye keya? Hmm, gane ki bol likh rahi houn...:
Terii Hansi Lage Aise Tuu Khil Jaaye Jaise..
Tu Jo Chale Rut Jhoume, Tere Paaon Phoul Choume
Tu Chaahat Ki Taqdeer..Main Ranjha Houn Tuu Meri Heer..
Ho o o o 0..Tu Sapnon Ki Tasveer..Kumar Sanu Jee**

Ab Jo Ghazal Dil ke bohot hii kareeb hain usski thodi si lines:
Ye meri zindegi ki..sab se hasin ghadi hain..
Nazron ke samne wo..chhoup kar kahin khadi hain..
Na paas aa rahi hain..na dur jaa rahi hain..
Shayaad meri Muhabbat -2 Mujhko bulaa rahi hain..Talat Aziz Jee**

Ek aur ho jaaye:
Dilbar..Teri Khaatir..Main Chaand Chhod Kar Aaya Houn..
Dene..Nazraana..Main Aapne Pyaar Ko Laya Houn..
Aasmaan Se Aaya Faishta..Pyaar Ka Sabak..Seekhlane..
Dil Mein Hain Tasveer Yaar Ki..Laya Houn Woh Dikhlane..
Kahon..Pyaar Hain Tumse..
Ho Jaana..Kahon..Pyaar Hain Tumse..Mohd. Rafi Jee**

Meraa Pyaaar Tere..Jeevan Ke Sang Rahega..
Meri Aankhon Mein..Teraa Hii Rang Rahegaaa..
Sang Rahegaaa..Meraa Pyaaar..Mehdi Hassan Jee **

I hope You will understand...I just can't reply as i used to...! Dil Ki Gehraaion Ki Gehraaion Se Dher Dher Dher Saare Phoul **
Duwaaon ke saath ijaazat...**Take Care...**@};-God bless You.


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meri majboori pe teri kadwahat thi..
mujhe laga meri mohbbat ki keemat thi...


mata kya kahuN ki ye dastoor e jahaN hai ,,... humeN mili to kya ranj kareN... bas aankheN band kar ke ro hi sakte hai



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Re: Re: kaash samja jaate meri khata - 20th December 2005, 07:44 PM

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Coffee Mitr,

Patjhad bhi ek mausam hai
Kal phir sawan angdai legi

Isliye khush rahiye sada bus yehi hai dua..
Rohin

mere rohin,

haan yahi sahi...

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Re: hi - 20th December 2005, 07:45 PM

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dear meena di
i agre with rohin
patjhad ek mausam hai
badal jayega !!
aur khushiyon ke pal layega

Priya

meri priya,

haan tumne sahi kaha...

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Re: Re: kaash samja jaate meri khata - 20th December 2005, 07:47 PM

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ohhhhhhhhhhh diiiiiii..... sachhi itni gehraayi hai isme.... godddd...... cheer sa diya hai is kavita ne.... agar is baat ko koi muh se bol de to saamne waale ke paas koi jawaab na ho.. itni tadap hai isme.... itne seedhe, saral shabdo.n me dil ki teees ko bayaa.n kar diya....
apna khayaal rakhna diii.... is tareh ki kavita padh kar thoda fikr hoti hai..
luv u
aapki pallo
meri priy pallo,

di ki fiakr na karna .

shukria is rachna ko samajne k liye..

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meena dost

apne dard ko is khoobsurti se bayaan kerti ho tum ke sab ko hi apna apna mehsoos hota hai.
her dardmand dil isey mehsoos kerta hai aur yeh sab aap ka kamal hai dost.

meri dua hai ke aap pat-jhar ke baad wali bahaar ko , sirsabz hota dekho aur mehsoos karo.

God bless you.

musharrafhusain
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aapki aabhari hu .. aap ki duwaa k kabil rahu yahi prathna

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Re: Re: kaash samja jaate meri khata - 20th December 2005, 07:50 PM

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Maa kyu hota hai aisa......? jawaab nahi hai... lekin kya usane kabhi nahi socha hoga ki mere jagah wo rehta to kya karta???


meri priy garima,

gar yahi khayal oose bhi aata to yah rachna bhi n banti... or na hi tanaav aata rishte mai..

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Re: hi - 20th December 2005, 07:51 PM

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bas...shu kahu!
Abhavo ne apnavi lidha pachi pan..awu toh bane j che..

pan hamesha ni jem bhaav...ghanu badhu kahi gayo!!...

tc..di
komal

mari priy komal,

abhaav ne apnava thi dard nathhi thhatu jetlu aene na samajwa thhi thaay chhae..
khair...

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Didi....

Accha likha hai aapne...par... shaayad yehi zindagi hai....

mere pulkit,

pata nahi ... par shayed.......

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MaaNgna meri fitrat na thi ...Ey Dil
Per na jaane kahaaN se ye ROG laga baitha....
Itna maaNga ... ke Bhagwaan bhi muskuraane laga mujhper
Or mai....Bina ibaadat kiye hi...uske dar se waapas aa gaya...

Ji Meena ji....aapki ye kavita parhi...to zehen me ye alfaaz aa hi gaye...

Koi hame tadpa nahi sakta...agar ham tadapna na chaaheiN to...or rahi baat patjhad ki...to yahi kahooNga..ke...

Patjhad hamaari maansikta me hai....ham khud ko patjhad mehsoos kareiNge to patjhad ban jaaeiNge...warna...sab bahaar hai.

ek sher or...

YooNto apne sheher me bhi...
Kami na thi kadardaanoN ki...
Ham to bas mukaddar aajmaane
Teri galiyoN me chale aaye...


Take care

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Re: kaash samja jaate meri khata - 20th December 2005, 07:54 PM

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Waqt is tarah hatho se sarakta raha
N apni khata jaan paayi or ..
N zindgi ko sawaar paayi
mujse koi umiid na rakh ab aye dil,
nazar to aati hu zinda mai..
par saans bhi aaj udhaar si lag rahi hai
raah mai bikhre huae the rishte
socha aanchal mai samet lu apne
par n jaane daaman mai yah kaisi
kaanto si chubhan chhu rahi hai
kya yahi meri khata hui ke
tumhe khushiya dene ki chah mai
n jaane kitne abhaav apna liye
or yahi abhaav dekh tumne kaha
ab patjhad si nazar aa rahi hu
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Aapka likha shabd paani ki oas ban roj ehsaas kara jaata hai. Aapko pranaam


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Oh Dearest Meenajee!

Just Cant explain the pain, this thread has brought in my soul...... I have nothing but a commitment... A promis to land a hand on ur judgement day.... I promis to pray for your health / wealth and happiness .....

Dedicate these lines in your honor

ab jo laute ho itne salon mein, dhoop utri hui hei balon mein
Tum meri yaad ke samunder mein, tum meri ruh ke ujalon mein

Tumse aabad hei ye tanhai, tum hi roshan ho sab ujalon mein
Phool hi phool khil har shai, aaye jo tum khayalon mein

People like you make this world still livable.......

Take a very good care of yourself
Warm Regards
Truely Yours
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tumahra shukria bhi adaa karu to kaise, shabdo ki kami hi rahegi tumhare jawaab k aage...... is kadar muje samajne k liye tumhari aabhari hu.
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Saadar Pranaam,
Aapka likha shabd paani ki oas ban roj ehsaas kara jaata hai. Aapko pranaam

mere mitr vipin,

tumne jis tarah muje samja... oos k liye aabhari hu tumhari. yah baat humesha yaad rahegi...

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khushii to baaNt leta hoon din me

raat apane gum ko lekar kidhar jaaye,

roshanii me na rakho gum ko etna apane

ke khushi milay bhi to saaye me chup jaaye.


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it becomes more and more universal.
   
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khushii to baaNt leta hoon din me

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roshanii me na rakho gum ko etna apane

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