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kaash samja jaate meri khata -
15th December 2005, 09:54 PM
Waqt is tarah hatho se sarakta raha
N apni khata jaan paayi or ..
N zindgi ko sawaar paayi
mujse koi umiid na rakh ab aye dil,
nazar to aati hu zinda mai..
par saans bhi aaj udhaar si lag rahi hai
raah mai bikhre huae the rishte
socha aanchal mai samet lu apne
par n jaane daaman mai yah kaisi
kaanto si chubhan chhu rahi hai
kya yahi meri khata hui ke
tumhe khushiya dene ki chah mai
n jaane kitne abhaav apna liye
or yahi abhaav dekh tumne kaha
ab patjhad si nazar aa rahi hu
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Re: kaash samja jaate meri khata -
15th December 2005, 10:00 PM
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Originally posted by meena chheda
Waqt is tarah hatho se sarakta raha
N apni khata jaan paayi or ..
N zindgi ko sawaar paayi
mujse koi umiid na rakh ab aye dil,
nazar to aati hu zinda mai..
par saans bhi aaj udhaar si lag rahi hai
raah mai bikhre huae the rishte
socha aanchal mai samet lu apne
par n jaane daaman mai yah kaisi
kaanto si chubhan chhu rahi hai
kya yahi meri khata hui ke
tumhe khushiya dene ki chah mai
n jaane kitne abhaav apna liye
or yahi abhaav dekh tumne kaha
ab patjhad si nazar aa rahi hu
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bahut hi acha likha hai MA
bhale rishte bikhar jaye,
bhale zindagi rut jaye,
humara saath na chodana,
bhale zindagi patjhad nazar aaye.....
meri har chahat se pehle ek chahat hogi
wo chahat hamesha tum hogi
ab to chahna hi reh gaya hai zindagi main
na jane yeh chahat kab puri hogi
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Re: kaash samja jaate meri khata -
15th December 2005, 10:40 PM
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Originally posted by meena chheda
Waqt is tarah hatho se sarakta raha
N apni khata jaan paayi or ..
N zindgi ko sawaar paayi
mujse koi umiid na rakh ab aye dil,
nazar to aati hu zinda mai..
par saans bhi aaj udhaar si lag rahi hai
raah mai bikhre huae the rishte
socha aanchal mai samet lu apne
par n jaane daaman mai yah kaisi
kaanto si chubhan chhu rahi hai
kya yahi meri khata hui ke
tumhe khushiya dene ki chah mai
n jaane kitne abhaav apna liye
or yahi abhaav dekh tumne kaha
ab patjhad si nazar aa rahi hu
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di....aapne bilkul mere dil ka haal likh diya hai......
padhke accha laga di magar dil-o-dimaag pe ek ajeeb si kaifiyat chaa gayi hai..... khair di aap aise likhke mehfil sajate raho....aapki faru.
"Roz Kii Taraah Aaj Bhii Taare
Subha Kii Gard MeiN Naa Kho JaayeiN
Aa ! Tere Gham MeiN Jaagtii AankheiN
Kam Se Kam Aik Raat So JaayeiN."
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Re: kaash samja jaate meri khata -
15th December 2005, 10:43 PM
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Originally posted by meena chheda
Waqt is tarah hatho se sarakta raha
N apni khata jaan paayi or ..
N zindgi ko sawaar paayi
mujse koi umiid na rakh ab aye dil,
nazar to aati hu zinda mai..
par saans bhi aaj udhaar si lag rahi hai
raah mai bikhre huae the rishte
socha aanchal mai samet lu apne
par n jaane daaman mai yah kaisi
kaanto si chubhan chhu rahi hai
kya yahi meri khata hui ke
tumhe khushiya dene ki chah mai
n jaane kitne abhaav apna liye
or yahi abhaav dekh tumne kaha
ab patjhad si nazar aa rahi hu
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jab yaad karte hai kisi ko
wo waqt suhana hota hai
uth jati hai kalam likhne ko
wo pyar deewana hota hai
kar deti hai haal-e-dil bayaan
wo kalaam shayraana hota hai
jab yaad karte hai kisi ko
wo waqt suhana hota hai...
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duniya mein kitna gam hai
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15th December 2005, 11:38 PM
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Waqt is tarah hatho se sarakta raha
N apni khata jaan paayi or ..
N zindgi ko sawaar paayi
mujse koi umiid na rakh ab aye dil,
nazar to aati hu zinda mai..
par saans bhi aaj udhaar si lag rahi hai
raah mai bikhre huae the rishte
socha aanchal mai samet lu apne
par n jaane daaman mai yah kaisi
kaanto si chubhan chhu rahi hai
kya yahi meri khata hui ke
tumhe khushiya dene ki chah mai
n jaane kitne abhaav apna liye
or yahi abhaav dekh tumne kaha
ab patjhad si nazar aa rahi hu
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Uss Bhulne Wale Ko..Bhulaa Bhii Nahiin Sakte..
Hum Aapni..Wafaa Yaaad..Dilaa Bhii Nahiin Sakte..Lata Jee**
*...Dear Meena, ab main aa to gayi houn lekin ye keya? Hmm, gane ki bol likh rahi houn...:
Terii Hansi Lage Aise Tuu Khil Jaaye Jaise..
Tu Jo Chale Rut Jhoume, Tere Paaon Phoul Choume
Tu Chaahat Ki Taqdeer..Main Ranjha Houn Tuu Meri Heer..
Ho o o o 0..Tu Sapnon Ki Tasveer..Kumar Sanu Jee**
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Na paas aa rahi hain..na dur jaa rahi hain..
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16th December 2005, 12:34 AM
meri majboori pe teri kadwahat thi..
mujhe laga meri mohbbat ki keemat thi...
mata kya kahuN ki ye dastoor e jahaN hai ,,... humeN mili to kya ranj kareN... bas aankheN band kar ke ro hi sakte hai
apka beta
KunaaL (Sifar).........
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16th December 2005, 08:32 AM
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bahut hi acha likha hai MA
bhale rishte bikhar jaye,
bhale zindagi rut jaye,
humara saath na chodana,
bhale zindagi patjhad nazar aaye.....
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16th December 2005, 08:39 AM
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di....aapne bilkul mere dil ka haal likh diya hai......
padhke accha laga di magar dil-o-dimaag pe ek ajeeb si kaifiyat chaa gayi hai..... khair di aap aise likhke mehfil sajate raho....aapki faru.
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meri faru,
tumhe yah rachna apni si lagi... yah jaana. aur baat ajeeb si kaifiyat ki.. n jaane yah kab aa kar chha jaati hai or fir kabhi aanshu ban sarakti hai to kabhi aankhe or bhi sooni kar jaati hai ...
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Re: kaash samja jaate meri khata -
16th December 2005, 08:44 AM
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Waqt is tarah hatho se sarakta raha
N apni khata jaan paayi or ..
N zindgi ko sawaar paayi
mujse koi umiid na rakh ab aye dil,
nazar to aati hu zinda mai..
par saans bhi aaj udhaar si lag rahi hai
raah mai bikhre huae the rishte
socha aanchal mai samet lu apne
par n jaane daaman mai yah kaisi
kaanto si chubhan chhu rahi hai
kya yahi meri khata hui ke
tumhe khushiya dene ki chah mai
n jaane kitne abhaav apna liye
or yahi abhaav dekh tumne kaha
ab patjhad si nazar aa rahi hu
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Coffee Mitr,
Patjhad bhi ek mausam hai
Kal phir sawan angdai legi
Isliye khush rahiye sada bus yehi hai dua..
Rohin
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hi -
16th December 2005, 09:11 AM
dear meena di
i agre with rohin
patjhad ek mausam hai
badal jayega !!
aur khushiyon ke pal layega
Priya
Akhihaan milaake chan'na paavi na Judayi Vey .......
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Jisnu Lagey, ohi'yo jaane, Kaun Jaane peer parayi!
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Re: kaash samja jaate meri khata -
16th December 2005, 09:31 AM
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Originally posted by meena chheda
Waqt is tarah hatho se sarakta raha
N apni khata jaan paayi or ..
N zindgi ko sawaar paayi
mujse koi umiid na rakh ab aye dil,
nazar to aati hu zinda mai..
par saans bhi aaj udhaar si lag rahi hai
raah mai bikhre huae the rishte
socha aanchal mai samet lu apne
par n jaane daaman mai yah kaisi
kaanto si chubhan chhu rahi hai
kya yahi meri khata hui ke
tumhe khushiya dene ki chah mai
n jaane kitne abhaav apna liye
or yahi abhaav dekh tumne kaha
ab patjhad si nazar aa rahi hu
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ohhhhhhhhhhh diiiiiii..... sachhi itni gehraayi hai isme.... godddd...... cheer sa diya hai is kavita ne.... agar is baat ko koi muh se bol de to saamne waale ke paas koi jawaab na ho.. itni tadap hai isme.... itne seedhe, saral shabdo.n me dil ki teees ko bayaa.n kar diya....
apna khayaal rakhna diii.... is tareh ki kavita padh kar thoda fikr hoti hai..
luv u
aapki pallo
Pallavi...
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16th December 2005, 11:08 AM
meena dost
apne dard ko is khoobsurti se bayaan kerti ho tum ke sab ko hi apna apna mehsoos hota hai.
her dardmand dil isey mehsoos kerta hai aur yeh sab aap ka kamal hai dost.
meri dua hai ke aap pat-jhar ke baad wali bahaar ko , sirsabz hota dekho aur mehsoos karo.
God bless you.
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Re: kaash samja jaate meri khata -
16th December 2005, 11:23 AM
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Originally posted by meena chheda
Waqt is tarah hatho se sarakta raha
N apni khata jaan paayi or ..
N zindgi ko sawaar paayi
mujse koi umiid na rakh ab aye dil,
nazar to aati hu zinda mai..
par saans bhi aaj udhaar si lag rahi hai
raah mai bikhre huae the rishte
socha aanchal mai samet lu apne
par n jaane daaman mai yah kaisi
kaanto si chubhan chhu rahi hai
kya yahi meri khata hui ke
tumhe khushiya dene ki chah mai
n jaane kitne abhaav apna liye
or yahi abhaav dekh tumne kaha
ab patjhad si nazar aa rahi hu
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Maa kyu hota hai aisa......? jawaab nahi hai... lekin kya usane kabhi nahi socha hoga ki mere jagah wo rehta to kya karta???
Anant se bhi aage... itni si khwahish hai :)
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16th December 2005, 02:32 PM
bas...shu kahu!
Abhavo ne apnavi lidha pachi pan..awu toh bane j che..
pan hamesha ni jem bhaav...ghanu badhu kahi gayo!!...
tc..di
komal
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Didi....
Accha likha hai aapne...par... shaayad yehi zindagi hai....
Kab sochaa thha milegaa humsafar "Shweta" jaisaa
Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai
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16th December 2005, 03:40 PM
MaaNgna meri fitrat na thi ...Ey Dil
Per na jaane kahaaN se ye ROG laga baitha....
Itna maaNga ... ke Bhagwaan bhi muskuraane laga mujhper
Or mai....Bina ibaadat kiye hi...uske dar se waapas aa gaya...
Ji Meena ji....aapki ye kavita parhi...to zehen me ye alfaaz aa hi gaye...
Koi hame tadpa nahi sakta...agar ham tadapna na chaaheiN to...or rahi baat patjhad ki...to yahi kahooNga..ke...
Patjhad hamaari maansikta me hai....ham khud ko patjhad mehsoos kareiNge to patjhad ban jaaeiNge...warna...sab bahaar hai.
ek sher or...
YooNto apne sheher me bhi...
Kami na thi kadardaanoN ki...
Ham to bas mukaddar aajmaane
Teri galiyoN me chale aaye...
Take care
Chaand
Sachh bolne ka hausla to, hum bhi rakhte haiN lekin
Anjaam sochkar, aksar khaamosh hi reh jaate haiN.
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Oh Dearest Meenajee!
Just Cant explain the pain, this thread has brought in my soul...... I have nothing but a commitment... A promis to land a hand on ur judgement day.... I promis to pray for your health / wealth and happiness .....
Dedicate these lines in your honor
ab jo laute ho itne salon mein, dhoop utri hui hei balon mein
Tum meri yaad ke samunder mein, tum meri ruh ke ujalon mein
Tumse aabad hei ye tanhai, tum hi roshan ho sab ujalon mein
Phool hi phool khil har shai, aaye jo tum khayalon mein
People like you make this world still livable.......
Take a very good care of yourself
Warm Regards
Truely Yours
Susheel
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इस भरे शहर में हम Dard-e-Sush, जो न पाया उसे भी खोते हैं!
lab pe muskaan ko liye ae dost, kandhon pe laash apni dhote hein
is bhare sheher me ham dard-e-sush, jo na paaya use bhi khote hein
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Re: Re: kaash samja jaate meri khata -
20th December 2005, 07:39 PM
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priy Shweta,
tumne muje padha .. samajna chaha... shukria
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20th December 2005, 07:40 PM
meri shimu,
haan mai tumhe samajti hu. tumhare geeto k liye bhi shukria.
tumhari meena
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meri majboori pe teri kadwahat thi..
mujhe laga meri mohbbat ki keemat thi...
mata kya kahuN ki ye dastoor e jahaN hai ,,... humeN mili to kya ranj kareN... bas aankheN band kar ke ro hi sakte hai
apka beta
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mere kunal,
hmmmmmm
mata
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20th December 2005, 07:44 PM
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Coffee Mitr,
Patjhad bhi ek mausam hai
Kal phir sawan angdai legi
Isliye khush rahiye sada bus yehi hai dua..
Rohin
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mere rohin,
haan yahi sahi...
tumhari coffee mitr
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20th December 2005, 07:45 PM
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dear meena di
i agre with rohin
patjhad ek mausam hai
badal jayega !!
aur khushiyon ke pal layega
Priya
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meri priya,
haan tumne sahi kaha...
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20th December 2005, 07:47 PM
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ohhhhhhhhhhh diiiiiii..... sachhi itni gehraayi hai isme.... godddd...... cheer sa diya hai is kavita ne.... agar is baat ko koi muh se bol de to saamne waale ke paas koi jawaab na ho.. itni tadap hai isme.... itne seedhe, saral shabdo.n me dil ki teees ko bayaa.n kar diya....
apna khayaal rakhna diii.... is tareh ki kavita padh kar thoda fikr hoti hai..
luv u
aapki pallo
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meri priy pallo,
di ki fiakr na karna .
shukria is rachna ko samajne k liye..
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meena dost
apne dard ko is khoobsurti se bayaan kerti ho tum ke sab ko hi apna apna mehsoos hota hai.
her dardmand dil isey mehsoos kerta hai aur yeh sab aap ka kamal hai dost.
meri dua hai ke aap pat-jhar ke baad wali bahaar ko , sirsabz hota dekho aur mehsoos karo.
God bless you.
musharrafhusain
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mere mushi dost,
aapki aabhari hu .. aap ki duwaa k kabil rahu yahi prathna
aapki dost meena
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Maa kyu hota hai aisa......? jawaab nahi hai... lekin kya usane kabhi nahi socha hoga ki mere jagah wo rehta to kya karta???
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gar yahi khayal oose bhi aata to yah rachna bhi n banti... or na hi tanaav aata rishte mai..
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20th December 2005, 07:51 PM
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bas...shu kahu!
Abhavo ne apnavi lidha pachi pan..awu toh bane j che..
pan hamesha ni jem bhaav...ghanu badhu kahi gayo!!...
tc..di
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mari priy komal,
abhaav ne apnava thi dard nathhi thhatu jetlu aene na samajwa thhi thaay chhae..
khair...
di
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Didi....
Accha likha hai aapne...par... shaayad yehi zindagi hai....
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pata nahi ... par shayed.......
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MaaNgna meri fitrat na thi ...Ey Dil
Per na jaane kahaaN se ye ROG laga baitha....
Itna maaNga ... ke Bhagwaan bhi muskuraane laga mujhper
Or mai....Bina ibaadat kiye hi...uske dar se waapas aa gaya...
Ji Meena ji....aapki ye kavita parhi...to zehen me ye alfaaz aa hi gaye...
Koi hame tadpa nahi sakta...agar ham tadapna na chaaheiN to...or rahi baat patjhad ki...to yahi kahooNga..ke...
Patjhad hamaari maansikta me hai....ham khud ko patjhad mehsoos kareiNge to patjhad ban jaaeiNge...warna...sab bahaar hai.
ek sher or...
YooNto apne sheher me bhi...
Kami na thi kadardaanoN ki...
Ham to bas mukaddar aajmaane
Teri galiyoN me chale aaye...
Take care
Chaand
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tumhe samajne ki chahat liye...
tumhari meena
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Re: kaash samja jaate meri khata -
20th December 2005, 07:54 PM
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Originally posted by meena chheda
Waqt is tarah hatho se sarakta raha
N apni khata jaan paayi or ..
N zindgi ko sawaar paayi
mujse koi umiid na rakh ab aye dil,
nazar to aati hu zinda mai..
par saans bhi aaj udhaar si lag rahi hai
raah mai bikhre huae the rishte
socha aanchal mai samet lu apne
par n jaane daaman mai yah kaisi
kaanto si chubhan chhu rahi hai
kya yahi meri khata hui ke
tumhe khushiya dene ki chah mai
n jaane kitne abhaav apna liye
or yahi abhaav dekh tumne kaha
ab patjhad si nazar aa rahi hu
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Meena Ji
Saadar Pranaam,
Aapka likha shabd paani ki oas ban roj ehsaas kara jaata hai. Aapko pranaam
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20th December 2005, 07:55 PM
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Originally posted by Dard-e-sush
Oh Dearest Meenajee!
Just Cant explain the pain, this thread has brought in my soul...... I have nothing but a commitment... A promis to land a hand on ur judgement day.... I promis to pray for your health / wealth and happiness .....
Dedicate these lines in your honor
ab jo laute ho itne salon mein, dhoop utri hui hei balon mein
Tum meri yaad ke samunder mein, tum meri ruh ke ujalon mein
Tumse aabad hei ye tanhai, tum hi roshan ho sab ujalon mein
Phool hi phool khil har shai, aaye jo tum khayalon mein
People like you make this world still livable.......
Take a very good care of yourself
Warm Regards
Truely Yours
Susheel
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mere Susheel,
tumahra shukria bhi adaa karu to kaise, shabdo ki kami hi rahegi tumhare jawaab k aage...... is kadar muje samajne k liye tumhari aabhari hu.
apna khayal rakhna
meena
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Re: Re: kaash samja jaate meri khata -
20th December 2005, 07:58 PM
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Originally posted by Vipinbox
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Meena Ji
Saadar Pranaam,
Aapka likha shabd paani ki oas ban roj ehsaas kara jaata hai. Aapko pranaam
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mere mitr vipin,
tumne jis tarah muje samja... oos k liye aabhari hu tumhari. yah baat humesha yaad rahegi...
tumhari meena
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20th December 2005, 09:03 PM
khushii to baaNt leta hoon din me
raat apane gum ko lekar kidhar jaaye,
roshanii me na rakho gum ko etna apane
ke khushi milay bhi to saaye me chup jaaye.
as you write more and more personal
it becomes more and more universal.
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20th December 2005, 09:08 PM
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Originally posted by paplupopat
khushii to baaNt leta hoon din me
raat apane gum ko lekar kidhar jaaye,
roshanii me na rakho gum ko etna apane
ke khushi milay bhi to saaye me chup jaaye.
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