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Hadd-e-Nigah Takk - 21st July 2006, 10:33 AM
Kaanch ke tukdon ki tarah harsoo Bikharti hoon main
Saaz nahin hai koi Tanhai mein kahin Khanakti hoon main

Ankhon mein Sawal kitne Honthon pe Shikwe bikhre
Par tujhse Gila karne mein Hichakti hoon main

Beet gaye wo Pal par Guzre nahin abb takk
Unn Lamhon mein abb bhi kahin Bhatakti hoon main

Ankhon mein Sawan liye door takk Sehra mein
Teri Chahat ki Aahon mein Sisakti hoon main

Ghum se badhkar Khushi nahin koi jahan mein
Teri Yadon ke Darakht-e-Dard se Lipat_ti hoon main

Teri Rahon ki taraf Kadam lena abb Mumkin nahin
Khinchti Sanson ke Dayre mein Simat_ti hoon main

Hadd-e-Nigah takk yahan paani hi paani hai “Wafa”
Dariya-e-Ashq mein doobkar phir Nikalti hoon main

Aaina mujhse meri pehli si surat maange
   
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Re: Hadd-e-Nigah Takk - 21st July 2006, 11:17 AM
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Kaanch ke tukdon ki tarah harsoo Bikharti hoon main
Saaz nahin hai koi Tanhai mein kahin Khanakti hoon main

Ankhon mein Sawal kitne Honthon pe Shikwe bikhre
Par tujhse Gila karne mein Hichakti hoon main

Beet gaye wo Pal par Guzre nahin abb takk
Unn Lamhon mein abb bhi kahin Bhatakti hoon main

Ankhon mein Sawan liye door takk Sehra mein
Teri Chahat ki Aahon mein Sisakti hoon main

Ghum se badhkar Khushi nahin koi jahan mein
Teri Yadon ke Darakht-e-Dard se Lipat_ti hoon main

Teri Rahon ki taraf Kadam lena abb Mumkin nahin
Khinchti Sanson ke Dayre mein Simat_ti hoon main

Hadd-e-Nigah takk yahan paani hi paani hai “Wafa”
Dariya-e-Ashq mein doobkar phir Nikalti hoon main
waffa ji appki post paddi bahut acchi laggi aur kuch share to dil ko bheetar tak chu gaye.

Ghum se badhkar Khushi nahin koi jahan mein
Teri Yadon ke Darakht-e-Dard se Lipat_ti hoon main

Teri Rahon ki taraf Kadam lena abb Mumkin nahin
Khinchti Sanson ke Dayre mein Simat_ti hoon main

Hadd-e-Nigah takk yahan paani hi paani hai “Wafa”
Dariya-e-Ashq mein doobkar phir Nikalti hoon main"

dil ke khamosh koney tak dastak de ayye yeh share

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Re: Hadd-e-Nigah Takk - 21st July 2006, 11:34 AM
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Originally posted by ek_wafa
Kaanch ke tukdon ki tarah harsoo Bikharti hoon main
Saaz nahin hai koi Tanhai mein kahin Khanakti hoon main

Ankhon mein Sawal kitne Honthon pe Shikwe bikhre
Par tujhse Gila karne mein Hichakti hoon main

Beet gaye wo Pal par Guzre nahin abb takk
Unn Lamhon mein abb bhi kahin Bhatakti hoon main

Ankhon mein Sawan liye door takk Sehra mein
Teri Chahat ki Aahon mein Sisakti hoon main

Ghum se badhkar Khushi nahin koi jahan mein
Teri Yadon ke Darakht-e-Dard se Lipat_ti hoon main

Teri Rahon ki taraf Kadam lena abb Mumkin nahin
Khinchti Sanson ke Dayre mein Simat_ti hoon main

Hadd-e-Nigah takk yahan paani hi paani hai “Wafa”
Dariya-e-Ashq mein doobkar phir Nikalti hoon main

hi wafaa ji aap ko yahaa dekhe hue barso ho gaye the,aap vaapis aayi yaha apne naye kalam ke saath ye bahut hi khushi ki baat hai,hamesha ki tarah aap ke haatho ka jaadu barkaraar hai ,yunhi mahfil ko sajati raho ,mai yahi ummid karta hu ke aap yaha aati rahengi taaaki hame aap ke aur khoobsurat kalam padhane ko mile

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Re: Hadd-e-Nigah Takk - 21st July 2006, 05:22 PM
Hadd-e-Nigah takk yahan paani hi paani hai “Wafa”
Dariya-e-Ashq mein doobkar phir Nikalti hoon main

KYA BAAT HAI.....
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jazbaaton ke saagar mein na jane kis gehraai mein aap utri hongi aise moti jaise sheron ko chun_ne ke liye...har shero laajawaab hai.. meri daad kubool kijiye...aate rahiye...likhte rhaiye/....apna khayal rkahiye
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21st July 2006, 05:48 PM
wafa ji,
bahut din baad aapka kalaam padhne milaa aur yakeen jaaniye hhar ek sher dil ko choo gaya.bade gehra jazbaat chupe se lagte hai aapke har kalaam mai.yeh ashaar to behad pasand aaye.

Ankhon mein Sawan liye door takk Sehra mein
Teri Chahat ki Aahon mein Sisakti hoon main

Ghum se badhkar Khushi nahin koi jahan mein
Teri Yadon ke Darakht-e-Dard se Lipat_ti hoon main

daad kabool kijiye.

yun bin bulaaye milne chala aata hai,
gham ko mujh se yeh unsiyat kaisi??

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22nd July 2006, 02:14 PM
mujhe mere kalaam ko itni izzat bakshne ka bahut bahut shukriya

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hi - 22nd July 2006, 03:26 PM
nice work...
acha laga parh kar
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hadd-e-nigah takk - 22nd July 2006, 09:08 PM
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aaj pahali baar aapki post meine padi hai. bahot achhi lagi.......

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23rd July 2006, 11:12 AM
Namaskar Wafa ji

Kayi din baad aapki rachna dekhi....bahut khoobsurat hay yeh rachna.....

Kaanch ke tukdon ki tarah harsoo Bikharti hoon main
Saaz nahin hai koi Tanhai mein kahin Khanakti hoon main

These lines I liked the best....kuch kehne ka mann ho raha hay

Tuutney se pehle Kaanch mein Tasveer dekh lo
Khanakti Chuudiyon mein Jeeven ka aks dekh lo

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24th July 2006, 11:02 AM
aap sabhi ka bahut bahut shukriya.....
...mere kalaam ko apna waqt diya..aur isse pasandkiya....bahut bahut shukriya

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TANHAI - 24th July 2006, 06:51 PM
TANHAI SE NAHI MEHFIL SE DARTE HAIN,
GERON SA NAHI APNO DE DARTE HAIN,
YUUN TO BAHUT KUCH KHOYA HAIN IS DIL NE,
LEKIN UNHE KHONE SE HAR PAL DARTE HAIN.

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