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18th October 2003, 01:04 AM
Kavita ek Saagar..
Pata nahin hum galat hein ya phir sahi hein… Bhaavna meri ye hai ki kavita ki douniya ko ek khayaalon ka saagar maana ja sakta hai. Eissa saagar jisska kayi roup houa karta hai… Subhah ke suryaast ke samay wo nayi dulhan ki sindouri mang ke rang ko apna leta hai… Jab aakash par kaale baadal chaye rehte hai to saagar bhi kajrare rang main sama jata hai. Jab kabhi wahan par toufaan oubhar jata hai to ounke leher bhi bhayanak houa karte hein… Hum inke lakhon roup ko nahin pehchan paate. Kavita premi har tarah se iss ka anand lete hein… Hum main se kayi log eisse bhi houa karte hein jo in ke sahil par baithe baithe ounke lehron ko bare pyaar se nihaar kar man ko behla lete hein. Kayi eisse log bhi hein jo inke jal main outar kar swashakti ke anusaar teyrne main mazaa lete hein... Eisse hi kayi hein jinhein motiyon ki talaash hai inko paane ke liye we kya kouch nahin karte hein Jane kin gehraiyon tak ounhein outarna parta hai aur apne manchahe vastu ko apna liya karte hein... Aakhir main eisse bhi log hein jo inka izzat karte nahin iss main apne gandagi donon hanthon se pheinkte hein aur Kavita ke Saagar ke premiyon ka tirraskar karte hein. Humein inke kinaron ke ret ke saman miljul kar rehna hai Shayad isse se kavya ke leher hum par mehrbani reheinge... Amanush... Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai 
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18th October 2003, 02:05 AM
Dear Aman Jee, parha lekin sagar jeisa hi gehrai nazar ayi.
Do deen se soyi nehi toh aur keya nazar ayegi? Aur pareshan bhi thi aaj sunbha ke liye, meeting thi na! Toh ab hum fhir dubara parke fhir hi reply karenge. Jab humara dil kahe toh hum wapas ajayenge, got it? Shukriya. Aapna khayal rakhiyega. God bless. Waise kuch galat hein aur kuch sahi hein aap, itna hi kahungi!! Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche** *~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~** *Pure Love** |
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18th October 2003, 02:30 AM
i will say
simply beaustiful bohat khoob likha ha ap nae likhtay rhain kuch ziada mang lia keya hum ne,aa dostoo |
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18th October 2003, 10:25 PM
Dear Aman, mein kaha ke mein wapas ayungi toh lo mein agayi.
Mein nehi samjhu aisi koi gehrai nehi! Lekin hume yeh janke achha bhi laga aur .............hua ke aap nehi pehchan paye. Mein pehle hi samajh gayi thi lekin reply ish liye nehi kee ke shayed mein kuch jiyada kehjati ish liye. Aapko pata hein shayed ke mein kabhi kabhi kuch jiyada hi jazbati hojati hu. Aapne itni khubsurti se bayan kiya hein, jawab nehi! Mujhe bohot achha laga. Kuch likhrahi hu samajhne ki kowshish kijiyega. Kuch yu, Sagar se gehra hein Pyaar humara!! Aur kuch yu, Are deewano mujhe pehchano kaha se aya mein hu kaun!! Samjhe? Aur ha jo aapne dusre ke bare meh kaha woh bhi sahi kaha, shayed kuch jiyada hi kehdiya! Waise hume nehi pata tha ke aap itni gaur se dekhte ho. Aur jo aapka khayalat hein ushke bare meh, Hume kuch kehne ki zaroorat toh honi nehi chahiye thi magar fhir bhi, Bohot shukriya bari meherbani meri zindegi meh huzur aap aye kadam chhum lu yea aankhen bichadu karu keya yeh meri samajh meh na aye bohot shukriya! Karu pesh tumko nazrana dil ka ke banjaye koi afsana dilka Khuda jane aisi suhani ghari thi! Shukriya. Aapna khayal rakhiyega. God bless you. Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche** *~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~** *Pure Love** |
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To Anas... |
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To Anas... -
20th October 2003, 12:24 AM
Hi Anas,
Tons of thanks for your kind comments... Amanush...  Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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Shimul ke liye... |
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20th October 2003, 12:28 AM
Hi dost,
my Mama hamesha kehti hai ki"Samajhdaron ke liye bas ek ishaara hi kaafi hai."Aap ka kya khayal hai?Is my Mama right...? Aman...(no more ush?)I like it...  Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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Hello -
20th October 2003, 04:59 AM
Hello Amanush
Hi you get lots of respect and love here and lots of people likes your poems. They give you nice name Aman too but i will always call you anamush. Hi your all 4 poems are so nice a good. asusuall. abe to ttarife kaieliye labze bhi nahi hia mare pass base yeh hi kahenge ki likhteraho hum intezare karte hai. takecare. Mushkan(soni) |
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To Muskaan... |
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To Muskaan... -
20th October 2003, 05:27 PM
Hi Soni...,
Keissi ho?Itne din kahan thi?I missed you...Kab nayi kavita likh rahi ho?I am waiting... Aur han!naam main kya rakha hai?Kante ko agar phool kahogi,to kanta kanta hi rahega...hai na? Waiting for your mail... friendly toumhara Amanush...(as always) Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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21st October 2003, 12:28 AM
Dear Aman, tumhe aur keya kahu? Yes, our Mama is always right.
Keya khayal hein tumhara? You like it & I love it. Aapna khayal rakhna. God bless. Pyaar ka pooja karte toh hein kayi logone, Pyaar ki gehraiyo meh bhi kabhi utar kar dekho!! Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche** *~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~** *Pure Love** |
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14th November 2014, 12:11 AM
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Danny bhaiya .....khoobsurat ehsaas, Accha lag aapki purani poetry ko padna. Regards .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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22nd November 2014, 06:20 PM
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Apna khayaal theek se rakhaa karna,ok...? Aashirvaad ke saath Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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