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Thumbs down Lamha ki jhooti shayri - 5th December 2009, 09:05 PM

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Main mohabbat hun,
Dhadkano me basti hun
Khayalon me sajti hun
Kabhi baadal ban amber se,

kabhi jaam ban paimano se chalakti hun!

Ruh ka milap hun
sharm hun, lihaaf hun
kabhi deh ki agan hun
to kabhi jism ka milan hun main!

Haan main mohobbat hun….
Mohobbat hun main….!!



doston.....apni raay zaroor dijiyega.......
Ji rayei si bhi nawazenge pehle neeche nazar daliye

lamha ji bohat dukh hota hi jab koi kisi ki chori ki hui
shayri pe apna naam likh de or aapne shayri pariwar ke
sadasye hoke yeh harkat ki hi har baar nazar andaz kiya
gaya apko phir bhi apne chori karna nahi ****a
apko wah wah hi chahiyeh to khud me likhne ka shokh paida
kijiyeh nakei doosro ko likhe ka apna naam de

dosto ye pehli bar nahi hi 10% shayri rehti hi inki baqi sab copy paste
or modify ki hui kahi bhi search marei easily mil jayegi

dosto lamha ki likhi yeh shayri inke likhne se 2 saal pehle
hi likh di gayi (amazing)

http://justju.18.forumer.com/index.php?showtopic=15908

Prove app ke saamne hai dono ke dates compare ker le jaae to acha hi

Abha ne Lamha ki feelings ko unke soochne se 2 saal pehle hi
likh diya hehehhehehe.

shayri pariwar plz in chezo pe dhyan de shukriya.

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9th December 2009, 02:34 AM

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Ji rayei si bhi nawazenge pehle neeche nazar daliye

lamha ji bohat dukh hota hi jab koi kisi ki chori ki hui
shayri pe apna naam likh de or aapne shayri pariwar ke
sadasye hoke yeh harkat ki hi har baar nazar andaz kiya
gaya apko phir bhi apne chori karna nahi ****a
apko wah wah hi chahiyeh to khud me likhne ka shokh paida
kijiyeh nakei doosro ko likhe ka apna naam de

dosto ye pehli bar nahi hi 10% shayri rehti hi inki baqi sab copy paste
or modify ki hui kahi bhi search marei easily mil jayegi

dosto lamha ki likhi yeh shayri inke likhne se 2 saal pehle
hi likh di gayi (amazing)

http://justju.18.forumer.com/index.php?showtopic=15908

Prove app ke saamne hai dono ke dates compare ker le jaae to acha hi

Abha ne Lamha ki feelings ko unke soochne se 2 saal pehle hi
likh diya hehehhehehe.

shayri pariwar plz in chezo pe dhyan de shukriya.


Kahin aisaa to nahin ki Abha aur Lamha ek hi shaks hon?
If you go through the chain carefully, you may notice that they have similar style of writing.

Like Abha wrote as under in one of the posts

thanx a lot Nira....tumne itne pyaar se isay padha aur saraha...
god bless
abha

Which is how Lamha writes too

kimati waqt dekar meri is koshish ko padha aur saraha

thanx once again.................


If that is the case, tum bahot peetoge


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9th December 2009, 04:12 PM

Dear sir,

your effort against piracy is highly appreciated. After proper verification, I have warned the member and the thread has been deleted too.

Thank u very much for your support.

Mayank

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Kal ho na ho mein ek dialogue tha.........

"Piracy.....Zindabaad"

Har kisi ko jeene ka haq hai...
ab koi chori se jeeta hai tou jeene do na...
   
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karan mere bhai ....................acchi koshish thi tumhari.................par kaun kahta hai ...............ke aaj ka sooraj aur kal ka sooraj alag hai.................waise hi kisi ki ke vichar kisi ki shayri ..............kisi dusre ke jahen me na panpe aisa to mumkin nahi mere dost.............samjho to thik...........warna.............waqt............. .malik hai..............

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