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Originally Posted by parveen komal
hawa ko samjhaane gaya tha
Le ke aya gaal pe kharo.ncho.n ke nishaa.n,
Bata raha hai mashooq ko manane gya tha.
Subah latkta mila chane ke jhaad pe,
Kahte hai.n hawa ko samjhaane gaya tha.
kai salo.n se taras raha hai neend ko,
Padosio.n ke bachhe sulaane gaya tha.
vaqat bada mushkil tha intzaar ka,
kahata hai jara sa nahaane gaya tha.
lut gaya, gafil ka chain-o-sukoon,
jara sa hi bas sustane gaya tha.
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wah komal sahab.......apko pad kar bada lutf aata hai.......
apki fikr kamaal ki hai aur vocabulary bhi hai apke paas
bus construction me thoda sa .......agar kheech sake to maza dugna-tiguna-chauguna-dasguna-sauguna ho jaaye.........
apka matla bahut khas raha ...sabhi ashaar khaas rahe....
apke banaye gaye daad meter
ke hisaab se apko peetal daad........
regards
ek baat aur...apka 'sustaane' qafiya bada accha laga