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Kabhi Kabhi..... -
10th July 2010, 01:04 AM
Kuch khayaal yu bhi hote hain, jo jeevan main shayad ek hi baar milte hain......yeh kosish meri unhi khayaalo ko samarpit hain.....
Kabhi Kabhi mere Dil mai Khayaal Aate Hai Kabhi Kabhi.... Jo Tu Nahi Hoti To main Kaha Hota... Is Sahar mai Kabhi To Us Sahar mai Bhatak Raha Hota Sochta hu, meri zindagi ka sarmaya To tu hai mere har talash ki manzil to tu hai, Jo teri khawaish ko na paata to, Na Jaane kaha kaha bhatak raha hota Kabhi Kabhi mere dil mai khayaal aate hai Kabhi Kabhi.... Ki yeh jo hasi hai teri... kahi pe koi gulzar khila rahi hogi ek phool bhi mere daaman mai girta shayad To ta-umar yu hi na tadapta rahata Kabhi Kabhi mere dil mai khayaal aate hai Kabhi Kabhi.... Ki yeh jo kano ki baali hain teri Sooraj bhi inse nazre milane se darta hoga Mere andhere sine ko jala dete agar... To dil ko sakun mil jaata aur mahobbat ko kinara Kabhi Kabhi mere dil mai khayaal aate hain kabhi kabhi Ki jaise meri har soch ki soch tu hain Mere har khayaal ki jaroorat tu hain Jo tere khayaal meri jaroorat na bante To umar bhar ka yeh nasha mera humnava na hota Aur Kabhi kabhi dil main khayaal aate hain tahar jaane ko Kabhi kabhi dil main khayaal aate hain chale jaane ko Kabhi kabhi fir bhi dil main khayal aate………… ---------TERE KHAYAAL AATE HAIN Magar Kabhi kabhi khayaalo main to yeh bhi khayal aate hain Ki yeh kano ki bali, yeh hasi, yeh rukhsaar tera Dil ka dhoka hain yaa nasiba mera….. Aandhiya Gam Ki Chalegi To Sawar Jaoonga Me Mai To Dariya Hu Samoondar Me Utar Jaaonga Me Mujhe Suli Pe Chadane Ki Jaroorat Kya Hai Logo Mere Haato Se Kalam Cheen Lo Yuhi Mar Jaoonga Me (When i received You in my heart everything changed for me) |
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10th July 2010, 01:30 AM
Amit Bhai salaam ........ kya khayaal hai aapke bahot achche...... hume aapke khayaal behad achche lage.........
Eh insaan teri uske aage hargiz chal nahi sakti Aaj tu zameen par hai kal zameen mein hoga Maut tujhe aani hai har roz tal nahi sakti |
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Very nice Bhaiya |
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Very nice Bhaiya -
10th July 2010, 01:41 AM
Pranaam Bhaiya, Kaise hai aap??
Kya baat hai bhaiyaa ... bahot hi pyaare ehsaas leke aaye hai ... Bhabhi ji ko padhaaya ki nahi ???   uumm aur ye aapke dil ka dhokha nahi ..Naseeb hi hai ... Itani pyaari jo hai Bhabhi ji ... aur itani pyaari bitiyaa bhiiiii  Bhaiya ehsaas bahot khoob rahe iske ... aap hammesha yunhi pyaare pyaare ehsaason ke saath aate rahiye .... hume aap ko padhanaa bahot achchha lagataa hai ... kuchh different ..thoughts hote hai aap ke .. bahot khoob bhaiyaa .. likhate rahiye Bhagwaan Ji aap ko hammesha khush rakhe, Aapki:- Gudia Jay Ambe. Puri Hoke Bhi Jo Puri Na Ho Hoon Zindagi Ki Wo Ankahi Kahaani...... ------------------------------------------------------------ Ek Aaina Jiski Tasveer Dhundhla Gai, Ek Dil Jiski Dhadkan Ruksi Gai, Ek Zindagi Jiski Manzil Ka Koi Pata Hi Nahi, Ek Daaman Jahaan Se Khushiyaan Galti Se Bhi Guzarti Nahi. |
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10th July 2010, 01:57 AM
Amit bhai ...
ek aisi rachna jo tasweer see bana de .. aur dil main ek sirhan paida kar de .. kavita ka isse accha udaharan kahiN mil hi nahi sakta ... aapki likhi hui is kavita main sirf gehraai hi nahi hai .. har dil ko aaina dikhaane ki kshamta nazar aati hai mujhe .. akhir main to bas koi uff bhi na keh sake .. ek muskaan hoNtoN pe rakh ke kho hi jaaye .. mujhe aapki kavita behad pasand aayi .. word play bhi accha hai akhir main ... lekin jo baat gudiya ne yahan yaad dilaayi hai ..us aur to mera dhyaan gaya hi nahi .. bhaabhi je ko sunaai ya nahi .. agar nahi sunaai hai to suna hi dijiye .. aise mauke baar baar nahi milte .. mujhe yakeen hai wo iske sunne ke baad apne aapko rok nahi sakengi .. apni bhaavnatak jazbaatoN ko ... meri tareef kabool kijiye aur aate rahiye .. aapka intzaar rehta hai ... Kunaal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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10th July 2010, 07:49 AM
Kabhi Kabhi mere dil mai khayaal aate hai Kabhi Kabhi....
Ki yeh jo hasi hai teri... kahi pe koi gulzar khila rahi hogi ek phool bhi mere daaman mai girta shayad To ta-umar yu hi na tadapta rahata Kabhi Kabhi mere dil mai khayaal aate hai Kabhi Kabhi.... Ki yeh jo kano ki baali hain teri Sooraj bhi inse nazre milane se darta hoga Mere andhere sine ko jala dete agar... To dil ko sakun mil jaata aur mahobbat ko kinara Amit Ji.....Bahut maasoom si panktiya aur dil ko chhu gai....very impressive...very touching......very romantic........nice creation....dil se daad hazir hai........yunhi behtar rachnaaoN ke saath aate rahiye...khush raheN.... apna khayal rakhen... duaaon ke saath.....  YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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10th July 2010, 11:46 PM
parwazz bhai,
aadab.....aapko jo pasand aaye mere khayaal to maano mere khayaalo ko nayi pehchaan mil gayi.... dhnyavad aapka Aandhiya Gam Ki Chalegi To Sawar Jaoonga Me Mai To Dariya Hu Samoondar Me Utar Jaaonga Me Mujhe Suli Pe Chadane Ki Jaroorat Kya Hai Logo Mere Haato Se Kalam Cheen Lo Yuhi Mar Jaoonga Me (When i received You in my heart everything changed for me) |
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10th July 2010, 11:50 PM
gudiya.
aapka hukum sar aankho pe.....hukum ki taamil hogi  tumko pasand aaye mere khyaal accha laga mujhe....... khush rahiye Aandhiya Gam Ki Chalegi To Sawar Jaoonga Me Mai To Dariya Hu Samoondar Me Utar Jaaonga Me Mujhe Suli Pe Chadane Ki Jaroorat Kya Hai Logo Mere Haato Se Kalam Cheen Lo Yuhi Mar Jaoonga Me (When i received You in my heart everything changed for me) |
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10th July 2010, 11:58 PM
kunaal bhai,
shukriya aapka jo meri adnaa si kosish aapko pasand aayi......ab aapne permission de hi di hain to yeh jurrat bhi kar hi doonga..... ....aapke chere pe mere kaaran agar muskaan aa gayi hain to mera likhna safal hua....duao main yaad rakhenge (aur vaise bhi!!!) yehi aasha hain............... shabba khair Aandhiya Gam Ki Chalegi To Sawar Jaoonga Me Mai To Dariya Hu Samoondar Me Utar Jaaonga Me Mujhe Suli Pe Chadane Ki Jaroorat Kya Hai Logo Mere Haato Se Kalam Cheen Lo Yuhi Mar Jaoonga Me (When i received You in my heart everything changed for me) |
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11th July 2010, 12:04 AM
nareshji,
ji shukriya aapka dher saara jo aapne mere shabdo ko saraaha.....payaase ko kya chahiye....do boond paani....aapne to ganga-jal pila diya...... kosish karoonga ki masoomiyat rakh pau apne khayaalo main....fir aage ka pata nahi......... aapki nazro ne jo iniyaat kari hain mere khaak shabdo pe uska main shukrguzaar rahoonga..... aise hi sabko bhadava dete rahe..... dhnyavad Aandhiya Gam Ki Chalegi To Sawar Jaoonga Me Mai To Dariya Hu Samoondar Me Utar Jaaonga Me Mujhe Suli Pe Chadane Ki Jaroorat Kya Hai Logo Mere Haato Se Kalam Cheen Lo Yuhi Mar Jaoonga Me (When i received You in my heart everything changed for me) |
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12th July 2010, 09:16 PM
Bohat hi khoobsurat khayaal haiN Amit jii......Touching and romantic.....
yuhi likhte rahiye.... Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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18th July 2010, 01:07 AM
dhnyavad zainyji.....
aapko mere yeh khyaal pasand aaye.... Aandhiya Gam Ki Chalegi To Sawar Jaoonga Me Mai To Dariya Hu Samoondar Me Utar Jaaonga Me Mujhe Suli Pe Chadane Ki Jaroorat Kya Hai Logo Mere Haato Se Kalam Cheen Lo Yuhi Mar Jaoonga Me (When i received You in my heart everything changed for me) |
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18th July 2010, 09:27 AM
Amit da ,
bahut hi pyaara ,masoom sa nazm hai dil ko chhu gayi aapki ehesaas.........aap is tarah likha kijiye sotti khub bhalo legechhe aamar apna khayal rakhiye DuaoN ke saath Diya  Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz. Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai Goodbye SDC Diya |
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18th July 2010, 10:08 AM
Amit jee, namaste!
Aapke khayalon ke khayaal humein bahut khoobsoorat lage! Hamarii mubarakbaad aur shubhkamnaein kubuul keejiye! Aur bhi parhne ke mauke deejiyega. Mann |
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18th July 2010, 11:06 AM
Kabhi kabhi dil main khayaal aate hain tahar jaane ko
Kabhi kabhi dil main khayaal aate hain chale jaane ko Kabhi kabhi fir bhi dil main khayal aate………… ---------TERE KHAYAAL AATE HAIN Magar Kabhi kabhi khayaalo main to yeh bhi khayal aate hain Ki yeh kano ki bali, yeh hasi, yeh rukhsaar tera Dil ka dhoka hain yaa nasiba mera….. Very sweet lines amit ji... daad kubul keejiye.. take care.. |
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18th July 2010, 03:53 PM
amit da....
ek sirhan si paida ho gayee aur ek tees ne dil ke dard ko ubhaar diya, kuchh nasha sa hai aapki is nazm meiN...paana, paa kar khona....ya bina mile hi paa lena....ye aise ehsaas haiN ki kabhi to in meiN umroN ka safar yuN kat jaye aur pata bhi na chale, to kabhi ek pal bhi aisa bojhil ho jaye ki usme hi duniyaa simat jaye...aapki is rachna ki tareef ke liye alfaaz nahi haiN mere paas….likhte rahiye…. aapka… Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi.... vikramjethi@gmail.com |
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thanks for coming and appreciating |
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thanks for coming and appreciating -
19th July 2010, 01:20 AM
diyaji,
gar aapko accha laga to meri mehnat safal hui.... aapke aane se, jaise maine pehle bi kaha tha mehfil main raunak rehti hain....aaya kijye aur khoob aaya kijiye...... aap hamari yeh choti si guzarish to rakh hi sakti hain...... PS: aar saun,"choo gayi" hobe naa..."choo gaye" hobe.....coaching classes niye ne aamar theke. Bhalo thaak Aandhiya Gam Ki Chalegi To Sawar Jaoonga Me Mai To Dariya Hu Samoondar Me Utar Jaaonga Me Mujhe Suli Pe Chadane Ki Jaroorat Kya Hai Logo Mere Haato Se Kalam Cheen Lo Yuhi Mar Jaoonga Me (When i received You in my heart everything changed for me) |
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19th July 2010, 01:23 AM
mannji,
dhnyavad aapka jo aapne hamare khayalo ko itni tawazzo di.....aapki mubarakbaad aur shubhkamnaye sar maathe...... aapke saath ki hamesha jaroorat raheti hain....aage bhi saath banaye rakhe Aandhiya Gam Ki Chalegi To Sawar Jaoonga Me Mai To Dariya Hu Samoondar Me Utar Jaaonga Me Mujhe Suli Pe Chadane Ki Jaroorat Kya Hai Logo Mere Haato Se Kalam Cheen Lo Yuhi Mar Jaoonga Me (When i received You in my heart everything changed for me) |
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19th July 2010, 01:26 AM
shipraji,
thanks for your appreciation and support.... aapki daad dil se kabool hain........... dhnyavad Aandhiya Gam Ki Chalegi To Sawar Jaoonga Me Mai To Dariya Hu Samoondar Me Utar Jaaonga Me Mujhe Suli Pe Chadane Ki Jaroorat Kya Hai Logo Mere Haato Se Kalam Cheen Lo Yuhi Mar Jaoonga Me (When i received You in my heart everything changed for me) |
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19th July 2010, 01:37 AM
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aap aate hain meri kisi bhi kosish pe to dil ko sakun milta hain....kuch baate bina bole hi samjh le...... aapka Aandhiya Gam Ki Chalegi To Sawar Jaoonga Me Mai To Dariya Hu Samoondar Me Utar Jaaonga Me Mujhe Suli Pe Chadane Ki Jaroorat Kya Hai Logo Mere Haato Se Kalam Cheen Lo Yuhi Mar Jaoonga Me (When i received You in my heart everything changed for me) |
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19th July 2010, 06:44 PM
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kintu aapni to rati 2 to samaye aasen aami to ghumie padi  ki kari bolo toh...? Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz. Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai Goodbye SDC Diya |
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