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~:*:~ Pyar Bhare Pal ~:*:~ - 28th August 2004, 04:22 AM

Yeh Shayri nahi, mere dil ke ehsaas hain, shaayad rhyming na ho...

~:*:~ Pyar Bhare Pal ~:*:~

Woh pal jab Tum mere saamne aaye,
Zindagi mein The sirf khushiyon ke saaye..

Woh lamha jab Tumne mera haaTth pakda,
Na jaane kaise sharam, kaisi chingari ne mujhe jakda..

Woh din jab roz hum mila karTe The,
Pyar ki pyari baaTein kiya karTe The..

Woh jagah jahan hum saath hoTe The,
Hazaaron phool humari raah mein khile hoTe The..

Woh chaTki hui Chandini ki raaT..
Yeh Chandini bhi Thi apne Chaand ke saaTh..

Woh andhere mein yun muskurana Tera,
Khamoshi se hi sab keh jaana mera..

Woh chudiyon ki khanak pe Tera mujhe choomna,
Neechi nigaahein liye mera sharmaana, woh ghabraana..

Woh Tera karke bahaana paas bulaana..
Bulake phir mujhe khoob saTaana..

Woh pal woh lamhe jin mein ek poori zindagi ji hai humne,
The mere woh anmol sapne jo sach kiye hain Tumne..

Aaj chaahTi hun Tumhe bas yehi kehna,
Aur nahi ab Tumse door rehna..

Judai ne jo haal bana diya hai,
Mujhko Soni Ttujhko Mahivaal bana diya hai..

RaaT ko jaagkar Teri Tasveere dekhna,
KaviTaayein likhna, Tumse pyar jaTaana..

Tumhari hun main, Tumhari hi rahungi,
Janm loongi jab Tak, Tumhari hi rahungi..

Tumhe chaahTi hun, poojti hun Tumko,
Maanga hai duaaon mein, paaya hai Tumko..

Tumhari hun main, Tumhari hi rahungi,
Jab Tak jiyungi Tumhari rahungi..

~Priya



"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."

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28th August 2004, 02:55 PM

Priya ji.....namaskarr...



poora dil hi khol kar rakh diya hai tumne....shabdo se khoob sajaya hai tumne apne dil ke haal ko...u hi hota hai...jab pyar hota hai...gam aata hai..aur dard badhta hai to kuchh u hi likha jata hai...uski yaad me...sahi bilkul sahi...pesh kiya hai aapne apne jazbaato ko...wah-wah keh kar apke jazbato per ye gunah kadapi nahi karoongi...magar apne dard ko shabdo me is kadar dhalna....kabile tareef hai...

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29th August 2004, 10:09 PM

Pyari Sunita..
Bahut bahut shukriya tumhara jo tumne mere ehsaas ko dil se samjha aur mehsoos kiya...

haan pyar kuch aisa hi hota hai..

umeed hai aage bhi tumhara saath yunhi bana rahgea..

khush rehna dost..

~Priya



"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."

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4th September 2004, 02:11 AM

Very b'ful di!

Really this one's amazing.. u always express urself so nicely!

Good job gal!

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4th September 2004, 02:24 AM

Chaahat ji,

Jo Pyar jo dil ki tadap aapki is kavita mein paayi hai, woh kahin nahi paayi.

yun to is site pe kaafi dino se aa rahe hain hum, lekin aaj yeh padh to aapne mujhe register karne ke liye majboor kar diya.

Very well done dear!

I bet the person u love is one in a trillion and he's even more lucky than u, coz he's getting u!

All the best with ur love and life!


Mera Saaya.. Tanhaai...

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6th September 2004, 08:05 PM

Thanx Sabi!!!

take care!

~Priya



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6th September 2004, 08:08 PM

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Originally posted by MeraSaaya
Chaahat ji,

Jo Pyar jo dil ki tadap aapki is kavita mein paayi hai, woh kahin nahi paayi.

yun to is site pe kaafi dino se aa rahe hain hum, lekin aaj yeh padh to aapne mujhe register karne ke liye majboor kar diya.

Very well done dear!

I bet the person u love is one in a trillion and he's even more lucky than u, coz he's getting u!

All the best with ur love and life!
Saaya ji (Aapka naam nahi jaanti)

Sabse pehle to I would like to Welcome to our Shayri parivaar and I would also like to tell you, that I felt really honoured, for being the reason of regiteration. I'm sure you will make wonderful frnds here.

Aapne bahut hi khoobsoorti se meri is nazm ko saraaha hai.. Aur aapki woh one in a trillion vaali baat...

I am flying high in air! lolz...

Thankyou very much!

Take care!

~Priya



"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."

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9th September 2004, 06:19 PM

Priya ji...

Humne "Pyaar Bhare Pal" padha aur bahout hi acha laga...
Gujrati bhasha main likhe houe aap ke nagmon ko padne
ki koshish karte hein...magar bahout jyaada samajhte nahin...
Younhi likhte rahiyega...

Amanush...



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9th September 2004, 07:12 PM

Amanush ji..

Aapne meri rachna padhi, aur pasand kari mujhe behad khushi huyi..

Aapne kaha ki aap mere likhe Gujrati rachnaayein padhte hain.. A re mujhe to khud Gujrati nahi aati to main Guj mein kuch kaise likh sakti hun.. Aap shayad mere Punjabi kalaamon ki baat kar rahe honge.. ya phir aap mujhe kisi aur ke saath mix kar rahe hain..

Bahut bahut shukriya dost!

~Priya



"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."

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[QUOTE]Originally posted by chaahat123
[B]Amanush ji..

Aapne meri rachna padhi, aur pasand kari mujhe behad khushi huyi..

Aapne kaha ki aap mere likhe Gujrati rachnaayein padhte hain.. A re mujhe to khud Gujrati nahi aati to main Guj mein kuch kaise likh sakti hun.. Aap shayad mere Punjabi kalaamon ki baat kar rahe honge.. ya phir aap mujhe kisi aur ke saath mix kar rahe hain..

Bahut bahut shukriya dost!

Priya ji...I am sorry...Punjabi ko Guju samajh baitha...
Zaahir hai ki hum bhashaaon ke maamle main bilkoul
anari hein...anyway I like your writings...

Dost...

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9th September 2004, 08:35 PM

lolz..

ji haan ache se samjh aa gaya ki aap languages mein kitni gadbad karte hain..

Thankyou very much once again!

Take care!

~Priya



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The pleasure is all mine...Priya ji.

Dost...

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"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."

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