Sher ka jawaab sher meiN deejiye..

[LAMHA]

Originally Posted by sunita virender

rahate hai.n jamaa kuuchaa-e-jaanaa.N me.n Khaas-o-aam
aabaad ek ghar hai jahaan-e-Kharaab me.n

-Momin Khan Momin

rahe hai.n yuu.N gah-o-begah kii kuu-e-dost ko ab
agar na kahiye ki dushman kaa ghar hai kyaa kahiye
[Mirza Ghalib]

[acharya_mj]

Originally Posted by LAMHA

rahe hai.n yuu.N gah-o-begah kii kuu-e-dost ko ab
agar na kahiye ki dushman kaa ghar hai kyaa kahiye
[Mirza Ghalib]

ye ishq bhii hai ajab imtihaan-e-ahad-e-vafaa
vo aazamaaye mujhe aur mai.n aazamaa_uu.N use


himayal ali

[LAMHA]

Originally Posted by acharya_mj

ye ishq bhii hai ajab imtihaan-e-ahad-e-vafaa
vo aazamaaye mujhe aur mai.n aazamaa_uu.N use


himayal ali

un ke dekhe se jo aa jaatii hai muu.Nh pe raunaq
vo samajhate hai.n ki biimaar kaa haal achchhaa hai
[Mirza Ghalib]

[acharya_mj]

Originally Posted by LAMHA

un ke dekhe se jo aa jaatii hai muu.Nh pe raunaq
vo samajhate hai.n ki biimaar kaa haal achchhaa hai
[Mirza Ghalib]

tere badan me.n dha.Dakane lagaa huu.N dil kii tarah
ye aur baat ke ab bhii tujhe sunaa_ii na duu.N


ahmad faraaz

[LAMHA]

Originally Posted by acharya_mj

tere badan me.n dha.Dakane lagaa huu.N dil kii tarah
ye aur baat ke ab bhii tujhe sunaa_ii na duu.N


ahmad faraaz

jii Dhuu.NDataa hai phir vahii fursat ke raat din
baiThe rahe.n tasavvur-e-jaanaa.N kiye hue
[Mirza Ghalib]

[acharya_mj]

Originally Posted by LAMHA

jii Dhuu.NDataa hai phir vahii fursat ke raat din
baiThe rahe.n tasavvur-e-jaanaa.N kiye hue
[Mirza Ghalib]

ishq jab ek taraf ho to sazaa deta hai
magar dono tarf ho to mazaa deta hai

unknown

[LAMHA]

Originally Posted by acharya_mj

ishq jab ek taraf ho to sazaa deta hai
magar dono tarf ho to mazaa deta hai

unknown

ulaTii ho ga_ii.n sab tadabiire.n kuchh na davaa ne kaam kiyaa
dekho is biimari-e-dil ne aaKhir kaam tamaam kiyaa
[Meer Taqi Meer]

[acharya_mj]

Originally Posted by LAMHA

ulaTii ho ga_ii.n sab tadabiire.n kuchh na davaa ne kaam kiyaa
dekho is biimari-e-dil ne aaKhir kaam tamaam kiyaa
[Meer Taqi Meer]

[B]safar kii had hai vahaa.N tak ke kuchh nishaan rahe
chale chalo ke jahaa.N tak ye aasmaan rahe
[/B

Rahat indorii

[LAMHA]

Originally Posted by acharya_mj

[b]safar kii had hai vahaa.N tak ke kuchh nishaan rahe
chale chalo ke jahaa.N tak ye aasmaan rahe
[/B

Rahat indorii

jaane vaale se mulaaqaat naa hone paa_ii
dil kii dil me.n hii rahii baat naa hone paa_ii
[Shakeel Badayuni]

[acharya_mj]

Originally Posted by LAMHA

jaane vaale se mulaaqaat naa hone paa_ii
dil kii dil me.n hii rahii baat naa hone paa_ii
[Shakeel Badayuni]

baat phuulo.n kii sunaa karate the
ham kabhii sher kahaa karate the



sagar siddiqui

[LAMHA]

Originally Posted by acharya_mj

baat phuulo.n kii sunaa karate the
ham kabhii sher kahaa karate the



sagar siddiqui

chehare pe mere zulf ko bikhraao kisii din
kyaa roz garajate ho baras jaao kisii din
[Amjad Islam Amjad]

[acharya_mj]

Originally Posted by LAMHA

chehare pe mere zulf ko bikhraao kisii din
kyaa roz garajate ho baras jaao kisii din
[Amjad Islam Amjad]

aa bhii jaao kii zindagii kam hai
tum nahii.n ho to har Khushii kam hai

yamini das

[chaahat]

Originally Posted by acharya_mj

aa bhii jaao kii zindagii kam hai
tum nahii.n ho to har Khushii kam hai

yamini das

Tumhare aane se hi zindagi khushnumah hai..
Tumhare jaaTe hi yeh bhi murjha jaayegi..
Na jaaya karo humein chodd ke Tum yun..
Ki Tanha zindagi na kaT paayegi..

~Priya

[MahamAzmi]

vo firaaq aur wo visaal kahaa.N
vo shab-o-roz-o-maah-o-saal kahaN
fursat-e-kaarobaar-e-shauq kise
zauq-e-nazzaaraa-e-jamaal kahaaN

[muKhlis]

har mulaaqaat kaa anjaam judaaii kiuN hai?
bas, yehii baat subH-o-shaam sataatii hai hameN!!!

[faizyrizvi]

umar ki kya baat kar rahe hain acharya saheb
hamare har sher mein sadiyan hotin hain

zara ghaur se padhiye janab

[muKhlis]

Originally Posted by faizyrizvi

umar ki kya baat kar rahe hain acharya saheb
hamare har sher mein sadiyan hotin hain

zara ghaur se padhiye janab

mazarat ke saath arz karunga k aap shayad sher raqam karna bhul gaye. chaliye men ek sher pesh kiye deta hun. mulahizah farmaiye

umeed-e-Hur ne sab kuchh sikhaa rakkha hai vaa'iz ko
yeh Hazrat dekhne meN seedhe saade, bhole bhaale haiN

[LAMHA]

Originally Posted by muKhlis

har mulaaqaat kaa anjaam judaaii kiuN hai?
bas, yehii baat subH-o-shaam sataatii hai hameN!!!

tere Khayaal se lau de uThii hai tanhaa_ii
shab-e-firaaq hai yaa terii jalvaa-aaraa_ii
[Nasir Kazmi]

[LAMHA]

Originally Posted by muKhlis

mazarat ke saath arz karunga k aap shayad sher raqam karna bhul gaye. chaliye men ek sher pesh kiye deta hun. mulahizah farmaiye

umeed-e-Hur ne sab kuchh sikhaa rakkha hai vaa'iz ko
yeh Hazrat dekhne meN seedhe saade, bhole bhaale haiN

sab hasii.n hai.n zaahido.n ko naapasand
ab ko_ii huur aayegii in ke liye
[Ameer Minai]

[huur = fairy/celestial nymph]

[muKhlis]

Originally Posted by LAMHA

sab hasii.n hai.n zaahido.n ko naapasand
ab ko_ii huur aayegii in ke liye
[Ameer Minai]

[huur = fairy/celestial nymph]

jis kaa 'amal hai be-Gharaz, uskii jazaa kuchh aur hai
Huur-o-Khaiyam se guzar, baadaa-o-jaam se guzar

allamah Iqbal

[MahamAzmi]

Originally Posted by muKhlis

jis kaa 'amal hai be-Gharaz, uskii jazaa kuchh aur hai
Huur-o-Khaiyam se guzar, baadaa-o-jaam se guzar

allamah Iqbal

Hazur

kafee arse se notice kar rahe hei maham ke apka zouq apka intikhaab bakamal hoa karta hai

bauhat umda ashaar ata karte hien aap

Bauahat kam hota hai ke maham kisi ke sher ke aagayae lajavab ho magar yahan sach ye ke hum lajvab hien

koi sher soojha he nahi

kabhi kabhi yun haar janae mein baara lutf ata hai

ab aap hee koi sher ata kjiye jo apke is shahkaar ka javab ho

:-)

[LAMHA]

Originally Posted by muKhlis

jis kaa 'amal hai be-Gharaz, uskii jazaa kuchh aur hai
Huur-o-Khaiyam se guzar, baadaa-o-jaam se guzar

allamah Iqbal

tere nisaar saaqiiyaa jitanii piyuu.N pilaaye jaa
mast nazar kaa vastaa mast mujhe banaaye jaa
[Unknown]

[siddiq.Love]

mohhabat kar ke to dek zalim hum b to tamana rakhe hai tum .husn rakhi ho to hum javani rakhen....................

[siddiq.Love]

send me some shayri

[LAMHA]

Originally Posted by siddiq.Love

send me some shayri

what do u mean ????????????

kabhii nekii bhii us ke jii me.n aa jaaye hai mujh se
jafaaye.n kar ke apanii yaad sharmaa jaaye hai mujh se
[Mirza Ghalib]

[MahamAzmi]

Originally Posted by LAMHA

tere nisaar saaqiiyaa jitanii piyuu.N pilaaye jaa
mast nazar kaa vastaa mast mujhe banaaye jaa
[Unknown]

I luv ur selections Lamha!

javab haazir hei



Lab band hein saaqi mujhe ankhon se pila de
vo jaam jo minat kash e sehba nahi hota

[LAMHA]

Originally Posted by MahamAzmi

I luv ur selections Lamha!

javab haazir hei



Lab band hein saaqi mujhe ankhon se pila de
vo jaam jo minat kash e sehba nahi hota

thank u diiiii................

Gair le.n mahafil me.n bose jaam ke
ham rahe.n yuu.N tashnaalab paiGaam ke
[Mirza Ghalib]

[tashnaalab = thirsty]

[MahamAzmi]

Originally Posted by LAMHA

thank u diiiii................

Gair le.n mahafil me.n bose jaam ke
ham rahe.n yuu.N tashnaalab paiGaam ke
[Mirza Ghalib]

[tashnaalab = thirsty]

sahee spelling hei

GHAM
GHAIR
TISHNALAB
PEGHAAM

jab ap copy paste kiya karen to spell out sahee kar lya kijiye buahat ghalat roman urdu likhee hotee hei urdupoetry.com etc pe .kabhi kabhi ghalat spelling se urdu ka talafuz biklul bigar jata hai aur hamae is ka khaas khayal rakhna chahayae hei

I hope u dont mind me saying so !


Javab haazir hei :


shayad aa jaye gaa saaqi ko taras ab ke baras
mil na paya hai un aNkhon ka ras ab ke baras

uff vo un madhbharii aaNkhon ke chalakte huye jaam
badh gayi aur bhi peene ki havas ab ke baras

[LAMHA]

Originally Posted by MahamAzmi

sahee spelling hei

GHAM
GHAIR
TISHNALAB
PEGHAAM

jab ap copy paste kiya karen to spell out sahee kar lya kijiye buahat ghalat roman urdu likhee hotee hei urdupoetry.com etc pe .kabhi kabhi ghalat spelling se urdu ka talafuz biklul bigar jata hai aur hamae is ka khaas khayal rakhna chahayae hei

I hope u dont mind me saying so !


Javab haazir hei :


shayad aa jaye gaa saaqi ko taras ab ke baras
mil na paya hai un aNkhon ka ras ab ke baras

uff vo un madhbharii aaNkhon ke chalakte huye jaam
badh gayi aur bhi peene ki havas ab ke baras

not at all DIIIIIIIIII................

[mausam]

Originally Posted by MahamAzmi

shayad aa jaye gaa saaqi ko taras ab ke baras
mil na paya hai un aNkhon ka ras ab ke baras

uff vo un madhbharii aaNkhon ke chalakte huye jaam
badh gayi aur bhi peene ki havas ab ke baras

maiN nazar se pii raha huuN ye samaaN badal na jaaye
na jhukaao tum nigaaheN kahiiN raat Dhal na jaaye
(samaaN : ambience)

[MahamAzmi]

Originally Posted by mausam

maiN nazar se pii raha huuN ye samaaN badal na jaaye
na jhukaao tum nigaaheN kahiiN raat Dhal na jaaye
(samaaN : ambience)

tishniaa nazarei.n milin shoKh nazaron se jab
maiy barasne lagi jaam bharne lagaa
saqiya aaj teri zarurat nahin
bin piye bin pilaaye Khumaar aa gaya

[LAMHA]

Originally Posted by MahamAzmi

tishniaa nazarei.n milin shoKh nazaron se jab
maiy barasne lagi jaam bharne lagaa
saqiya aaj teri zarurat nahin
bin piye bin pilaaye Khumaar aa gaya

haadise aur bhi guzare teri ulfat ke sivaa
haa.N mujhe dekh mujhe ab meri tasvir na dekh
[Majrooh Sultanpuri]

[MahamAzmi]

Originally Posted by LAMHA

haadise aur bhi guzare teri ulfat ke sivaa
haa.N mujhe dekh mujhe ab meri tasvir na dekh
[Majrooh Sultanpuri]

is khubsoorat sher ka javab is nazm ke siwa aur kiya den ke :


tasvir teri dil mera behla na sakegi
ye teri tarah mujh se to sharma na sakegi

main baat karuNga to ye Khaamosh rahegi
seene se laga luNga to ye kuch na kahegi
aaraam vo kya degii jo taDpaa na sakegi

ye aaNkhen hain Tehhrii hui chanchal vo nigaahen
ye haath haib sehme huye aur mast vo baahen
parachhaayi to insaan ke kaam aa na sakegii

in honThon ko "Faiyyaz" main kuch de na sakuNga
is zulf ko main haath men bhi le na sakuNga
uljhi hui raaton ko ye suljha na sakegi

[muKhlis]

Originally Posted by MahamAzmi

is khubsoorat sher ka javab is nazm ke siwa aur kiya den ke :


tasvir teri dil mera behla na sakegi
ye teri tarah mujh se to sharma na sakegi

main baat karuNga to ye Khaamosh rahegi
seene se laga luNga to ye kuch na kahegi
aaraam vo kya degii jo taDpaa na sakegi

ye aaNkhen hain Tehhrii hui chanchal vo nigaahen
ye haath haib sehme huye aur mast vo baahen
parachhaayi to insaan ke kaam aa na sakegii

in honThon ko "Faiyyaz" main kuch de na sakuNga
is zulf ko main haath men bhi le na sakuNga
uljhi hui raaton ko ye suljha na sakegi

mohtaramah Maham sahiba

yaqeenan! shahenshaah-e-ghazal Talat Mehmood kii aawaz meN gaai hui yeh ghazal meri bhi pasandeedah hai. kabhi yeh ghazal mujhe azbar thi aur men maHfiloN meN sam'a Kharashhi bhi kiya karta tha.

jahaN tak meri yaad-dast ko daKhl hai, ek line ke chand ek alfaaz men radd-o-badal ho gayi hai. main uskii tasheeh kar rahaa huN, aap bhi farma leN. shukrya

yeh haath haiN sehme huye, yeh marmari baaheN

ab meri jaanib se ek she'r apkii nazar he:

dil Ke aaine meN hai tasveer-e-yaar
jab zara gardan jhukaayee, dekh Lii!!!!!

[MahamAzmi]

Originally Posted by muKhlis

mohtaramah Maham sahiba

yaqeenan! shahenshaah-e-ghazal Talat Mehmood kii aawaz meN gaai hui yeh ghazal meri bhi pasandeedah hai. kabhi yeh ghazal mujhe azbar thi aur men maHfiloN meN sam'a Kharashhi bhi kiya karta tha.

jahaN tak meri yaad-dast ko daKhl hai, ek line ke chand ek alfaaz men radd-o-badal ho gayi hai. main uskii tasheeh kar rahaa huN, aap bhi farma leN. shukrya

yeh haath haiN sehme huye, yeh marmari baaheN

ab meri jaanib se ek she'r apkii nazar he:

dil Ke aaine meN hai tasveer-e-yaar
jab zara gardan jhukaayee, dekh Lii!!!!!

aray wah , talat sahab to hamare bhi fav hein

ap ka zouq bakamal hei

apko uper bhi eik post mein daad dee thee zaror dekh lijiye ga ke dilse di thee


khushi hoee bazm ki raahon mein aap jaise sanjeeda fard se mil kar ke jisko il m o adab ke baare mein bauhat pata hai

hmm to hazur ap singer bhi hein eik khubsoorat shayer hone ke sath sath wah janab !!


lijiye apke sher ka javab bhi dete chalaen lage hathon


tasvir banata huN tasvir nahin banti
ek khvaab sa dekha hai taabir nahin banti


umeed hei mulaaqat hotee rahe gee ,

Maham Azmi

[acharya_mj]

Originally Posted by MahamAzmi

aray wah , talat sahab to hamare bhi fav hein

ap ka zouq bakamal hei

apko uper bhi eik post mein daad dee thee zaror dekh lijiye ga ke dilse di thee


khushi hoee bazm ki raahon mein aap jaise sanjeeda fard se mil kar ke jisko il m o adab ke baare mein bauhat pata hai

hmm to hazur ap singer bhi hein eik khubsoorat shayer hone ke sath sath wah janab !!

lijiye apke sher ka javab bhi dete chalaen lage hathon

tasvir banata huN tasvir nahin banti
ek khvaab sa dekha hai taabir nahin banti

umeed hei mulaaqat hotee rahe gee ,

Maham Azmi

जो ग़म-ए-हबीब से दूर थे वो ख़ुद अपनी आग में जल गए
जो ग़म-ए-हबीब को पा गए वो ग़मों से हँस के निकल गए।

unknown

[LAMHA]

Originally Posted by acharya_mj

जो ग़म-ए-हबीब से दूर थे वो ख़ुद अपनी आग में जल गए
जो ग़म-ए-हबीब को पा गए वो ग़मों से हँस के निकल गए।

unknown

rahate the kabhi jin ke dil me.n hum jaan se bhi pyaaro.n ki tarah
baiThe hai.n unhi ke kuche me.n hum aaj gunahgaro.n ki tarah
[Majrooh Sultanapuri]

[acharya_mj]

Originally Posted by LAMHA

rahate the kabhi jin ke dil me.n hum jaan se bhi pyaaro.n ki tarah
baiThe hai.n unhi ke kuche me.n hum aaj gunahgaro.n ki tarah
[Majrooh Sultanapuri]

खुली जो आँख तो वो था न वो ज़माना था
दहकती आग थी तनहाई थी फ़साना था।

farhat shahzaad

[LAMHA]

Originally Posted by acharya_mj

खुली जो आँख तो वो था न वो ज़माना था
दहकती आग थी तनहाई थी फ़साना था।

farhat shahzaad

dur hai manzil raahe.n mushkil aalam hai tanha_i ka
aaj mujhe ehsaas hua hai apani shikastapa_i ka
[Shakeel Badayuni]]

[shikastapa_i = infirmity of the feet]

[dil kya kare]

koshishon ke bawajood......ho jaati hai kabhi haar...
hoke niraash mat baithna...mann ko apne maar...
badte rahna aage sada.......ho jaisa bhi mousam...
paa leti manzil chinti bhi.....gir gir ke har baar...
( by .... padha tha kahin par)