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Kaysay bujhaayen ab hum, seenay ka yay sharaara, -
30th December 2011, 12:12 AM
Aadaab dosto, aaj aap loagaon kay darmeyaan ayk himaqat bhari kavish laykar haazir huaa hoon. Dar-asal yay ghazal janaab Aanand Bakshi ki zameen par hay. Yahi wajah kay isay apni himaqat keh raha hoon.... tarz hay unkay likhay geet " Kabhi be-kasi ne maara , kabhi be-basi nay maara" jo film "Alag Alag" ka hissa hay. Ayk aur zameen aap keh saktay hayn janaab Shakil Badayuni ke geet- "Raha gardishon mayn hardam meray ishq ka sitaara" ki. Ummeed hay yay ghustaakhi aap loag bardaasht kar apnii aara say nawazayngay: Kaysay bujhaayen ab hum, seenay ka yay sharaara, Sholaa banaa huaa hai, baytaab dil hamaara! Sare-raah choarh tanha, tum tou nikal paday thay, Ab poochtay ho hamsay, kaysay safar guzaara? Darya ko paar kar ham, saahil pay aa bhi jaatay, Gar tum na yoon dubotay, darya ka har kinaara! Kar ishq tum say ham to, pahlay he mar chukay hayn, Pa ke hijr ab yun hamko, marna nahee dobaaraa! Meri muf-lisee pay ab to, dushman bhi roa rahay hayn, Aakay daykh layna apnee, aankhaon say yay nazaara! .................................................. ............................................. Ahmad Hyderabadi |
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30th December 2011, 07:52 AM
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bahot khub Ahmad sahab bahot pasand aayi mujhe ye ghazal dili daad hazir hai qabul farmayen Regards  _______________________________________________ PRANEETA
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30th December 2011, 06:22 PM
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Khushaamdeed! Aap ki aamad wa daad ki nawazish ka bayhad shukrguzaar hoon. Aap ko is bazm mayn daykh buhat khushee huee. Ilteja hay aap say yoon hee saath dayteen rahayn. Duagoh Ahmad |
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30th December 2011, 08:48 PM
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BehtreeN Takhleeq ... Umdaa Andaaze BayaaN ! Aate RaheN Aur Likhte RaheN ... Bahut AchChaa Likh Rahe HaiN !!! Dilee Daad O Mubaaraqbaad !!!  YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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31st December 2011, 09:25 AM
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Aapka Apna Ishk 'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है email: rkm179@gmail.com 
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31st December 2011, 04:43 PM
waa........haaa............. bahut khoob janaab, bahut -2 pasand aayi aapki ye ghazal.
sar se paa taq behatreen . bahut saaf bayani huyi hai . aapko is khoobsurat peshqash par dili daad o mubaraqbad. khush rahiye, likhte rahiye. |
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31st December 2011, 06:14 PM
Darya ko paar kar ham, saahil pay aa bhi jaatay, Gar tum na yoon dubotay, darya ka har kinaara! Janab AHMAD Sb........... Umdah Takhleeq Hui Hai........... Quoted Sher Dil Ko Chuu Gaya........... Daad Qabool Farmayen.......... 4,5th Sher Thora Bahr Se Niklta Nazar Aa Raha Hai.......... Mujhy In Me Baaqi Ashaar Ki Maanind Rawani Nazar Nahi Aayi.... Haan In Me Bhi Aap Ke Takhayyul Ki Parwaaz Buland Mili.... Gr Ho Sakay To Aik Baar Tawajjo Farma Lijiye Ga......... Ummid Hai ke Aap Naraaz Nahi Hon Ge.......... Lazim Nahi Ke Ye Waqae Ghalat Ho... Bs Mujhy Aisay Laga.......... Sada khush Rahen........... Ay Chaara-Saaz Dil Pe M're Daal Ik Nazar Mujhko Bas Aik Jism Ka Aazaar Hee Nahi AHMAD ALI SHAKIL |
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2nd January 2012, 10:35 PM
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Khushaamdeed! Naya saal mobarak ho aapko! Aapki zarranawazi ka tahay dil say shukrguzar hoon aur maazratkhwaah hoon takheer say shukriya adaa karnay kay per, yay mayree badnaseebi zaroor hay par badtameezi nahee jo itnee dayr hogayee! Ilteja hay aap say yoonhee saath daytay rahayn! Duagoh Ahmad |
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3rd January 2012, 12:37 PM
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aadaab ahamd saheb, dua karta huN ke aap khairiyat se hoNge, janaab bahut umdaH ghazal le kar bazm meN aaye haiN...bahut umdaH fiqr nikla hai...meri jaanib se daad haazir hai qubuul kijiyega.... Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi.... vikramjethi@gmail.com |
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3rd January 2012, 10:48 PM
Iss umda ghazal ke liye hamari taraf se bhi badhaaiyaN, Ahmad Sahab...!
YuNhi likhte raheiN Duaaon ke saath Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai 
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4th January 2012, 02:15 PM
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Mashallah!! Bohat khoob Ahmed sahab.............................. Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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4th January 2012, 03:21 PM
sare-raah choarh tanha, tum tou nikal paday thay, ab poochtay ho hamsay, kaysay safar guzaara? wahhhh... boht khoob! tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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6th January 2012, 11:52 AM
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Radhika  Seene Me Zakham Utarey Chale Gaye Jo Humpe Guzari Guzarey Chale Gaye Woh Aayega Ek Din Milne Humse Naam Uska Hi Pukarey Chale Gaye E-mail : radhika.nm2@gmail.com |
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13th May 2012, 05:22 PM
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Sabsay pahlay itni dayree say shukr adaa kerne par maazratkhwaah hoon! Khushaamdeed aur dili shukriyaa aapki daad wa aamad kaa janaab! Ilteja haye aapsay yoonhee saath nibhatay rahayn! Duagoh Ahmad |
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26th November 2012, 08:40 PM
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27th November 2012, 11:38 AM
Arse baad bhi kalaam me wo chamak baaki hai.. wo lutfe karam wo nazaaqat woshiqaayat ab bhi nazar aati hai.. bahot khubsurti se piroye gaye khayaalon se rubaroo karaaya hai aapne.. behad behad shukriyaa... likhte rahen...
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"Taish meN hai Taish"
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29th November 2012, 09:56 AM
wah ahmad sahab wah, maza aa gya, dil ban gaya aaj ka, aapki ghazal padh kar, aakhir ke teenoN sher bahut umda bane haiN, par khaash taur pe aakhiri sher mujhe haasil-e-ghazal laga, umeed karta huN aapke qalam ki qalamkaariyaaN yuNhi dekhne ko milti raheNgi...
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ http://alfaaz-e-taish.blogspot.in/ Ishq hota tha, ishq karte haiN, Vo zamana tha, ye zamana hai... ----Taish ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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2nd December 2012, 04:40 PM
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bahot dinoeN baad yahaan aaya hun aur bahot dinoeN baad aapko padha hai..mazaa aa gaya.. yun to tamaam ghazal hi khoob hai..yeh sher khaas pasand aayaa..daad hi daad..god bless u Darya ko paar kar ham, saahil pay aa bhi jaatay, Gar tum na yoon dubotay, darya ka har kinaara! wahhh regards, Pradhyuman - Bismil gore ghareeban hai ye 'bismil', kyun tu naashaad nazar aata hai? musht-e-khaak hai basi yahan, bata kahan fuwaad nazar aata hai? -------------------------------------------------- |
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3rd December 2012, 04:02 PM
Tasleemaat Shuaib bhaee, Lucky bhaee, Bismil bhaee...
Aap teeno ka mayn tahay dil say shukrguzaar hoon jo itni daryadili aur khuloos say apni daad say nawaza. Aap sabki aaraa nacheez kay liyay buhat muaynay rakhti haye. Ilteja haye aap sabsay yoonhee saath nibhaatay rahayn. Duagoh Ahmad |
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4th December 2012, 03:00 PM
Ahmad ji salam
bahut khubsurat andaze bayan he yun to pura kalam hi behtreen laga par ye sher lajwab he sare-raah choarh tanha, tum tou nikal paday thay, ab poochtay ho hamsay, kaysay safar guzaara? bahuttttttt khoooooooooob keep writing take care Allah Hafiz Zindagi ko tumne mohbbat bana diya |
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28th December 2012, 03:34 AM
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aapki yeh Ghazal bohat pasaNd aayi go maine aapki kuch aur bhi kaavisheiN padhiiN haiN aur voh bhi har lihaaz se daad ki haqdaar haiN lekin yeh Ghazal "ain" nishaane par hai, ab kya kareiN khaana-kharaaboN ka zauq kuch alag hi hota hai Ghazal par meri daad aur mubarkbaad qabuul kijiye rab raakha maikash is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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28th December 2012, 04:01 PM
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Ahmad Bhai..............no words...simply SUPERB reps +++ god bless u .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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28th December 2012, 05:36 PM
Ahmed Sahaab Aadaab... Bahut khoob janab... badi hi achchi kalaam kahi
hai aapne.... Amooman sabhi ashaar qabil e daad hai... Humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye......... Shaad O aabaad rahiye... Khuda Hafez... Eh insaan teri uske aage hargiz chal nahi sakti Aaj tu zameen par hai kal zameen mein hoga Maut tujhe aani hai har roz tal nahi sakti |
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1st January 2013, 07:09 PM
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1st January 2013, 07:11 PM
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1st January 2013, 07:14 PM
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Aapki aamad hamree khushnaseebee! Khushaamdeed! Aapki purkhuloos paziaaye ka bayhad mashkoor wa mamnoon hoon janaab! Buhat shukriya buhat masarrat haail huee aapki nawazish e daad paaker! Ilteja haye aapsay, yoonhee saath banayay rakhayn! Duagoh Ahmad |
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1st January 2013, 07:16 PM
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Khushaamdeed! Aapki aamad nay hee dil ko masroor kardiya tha oopar say aapki daad wa reps,... sonay pay sohaga! Bayhad mashkoor wa mamnoon hoon! Yoon he honsla afzaai kertee rahayn! Duagoh Ahmad |
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1st January 2013, 07:18 PM
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Khushaamdeed Janab! Aapki daad wa mobarakbaad sar aankhaon par! Bayhad khushee huee apko is bazm e khaaksaar mayn daykh! Ilteja haye aapsay, yoonhe saath banayay rakhayn! Duagoh Ahmad |
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