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Sad raab mane j ik arz meri - 15th May 2009, 02:32 PM


raab mane j ik arz meri
meri mout meri jholi pa deve.
fer devan na koi dukh tenu
tethon enni door pahuncha deve.
na hove kise gam da ehsaas tenu
enniyakhusiyan teri jholi pa deve
meri mout te na aave naam tera
meri lawarisa jahi zindgi bna deve
na rove koi marjane "BANGER" di mout utte
raaba j tu "BANGER" nu enna bura bna deve


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16th May 2009, 11:17 AM

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raab mane j ik arz meri
meri mout meri jholi pa deve.
fer devan na koi dukh tenu
tethon enni door pahuncha deve.
na hove kise gam da ehsaas tenu
enniyakhusiyan teri jholi pa deve
meri mout te na aave naam tera
meri lawarisa jahi zindgi bna deve
na rove koi marjane "BANGER" di mout utte

raaba j tu "BANGER" nu enna bura bna deve
bada vadhia likhia bro..keep up the good work.



MAIN TAINU DEKHAN TA DEKHI JAVAN
NA DEKHAN TA MAR JAVAN
AA TAINU NAINA DE VICH BAND KAR LA
TE DHADKAN VICH VASAWAN
JE DARD HASEEB DA VASS CHALE
TERI AAYI MAI MAR JAVAN
   
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meri mout te na aave naam tera
meri lawarisa jahi zindgi bna deve
na rove koi marjane "BANGER" di mout utte

raaba j tu "BANGER" nu enna bura bna deve

sachmuch vakhri jehi khwahish hai tuhadi Banger ji par ke vaidya lageya

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thx all of u .................................................. ................................


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thx rickey ji..........................


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28th June 2009, 11:48 PM

hmmm ..srry bangar ji,mainu kuj jyada vadia nai lagia......
   
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hmmm ..srry bangar ji,mainu kuj jyada vadia nai lagia......
thx 22 g tusi najar mari is utte
i will try my best


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3rd July 2009, 10:59 PM

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raab mane j ik arz meri
meri mout meri jholi pa deve.
fer devan na koi dukh tenu
tethon enni door pahuncha deve.
na hove kise gam da ehsaas tenu
enniyakhusiyan teri jholi pa deve
meri mout te na aave naam tera
meri lawarisa jahi zindgi bna deve
na rove koi marjane "BANGER" di mout utte
raaba j tu "BANGER" nu enna bura bna deve


superb.....ek alag jehi soch, te yaar naal aini jayada berukhi kyun??? par berukhi vich bhi pyar hi pyar hai......good work.

reps +++

na rove koi marjane "BANGER" di mout utte
raaba j tu "BANGER" nu enna bura bna deve


menu bahut vadiya lage ahsaas.....keep writing.
rabb raakha


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