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~*~Kujh yaadein...mein~*~ - 5th October 2007, 06:53 AM

hi friends.............
aaj fir likhne ki koshish hai ... umeed hai yeh koshish aap ko pasand aayegi ... bye take good care

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Kujh yaadein ne, kujh tera pyaar sajana
jo dil cho bhula nai sagdi mein

Kujh waqt marra, kujh tera intezaar sajana
Jo ro ke v rukaa nai sagdi mein

Kujh duuriya pediya, kujh zindagi di saachiya sajana
Jo samjota karan to siva hor kujh nai kar sagdi mein

Kujh pyaar sade aapniya da,kujh lekhe karma de sajana
Jo cha ke kismat diya lakera badal nai sagdi mein

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5th October 2007, 05:12 PM

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hi friends.............
aaj fir likhne ki koshish hai ... umeed hai yeh koshish aap ko pasand aayegi ... bye take good care

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Kujh yaadein ne, kujh tera pyaar sajana
jo dil cho bhula nai sagdi mein

Kujh waqt marra, kujh tera intezaar sajana
Jo ro ke v rukaa nai sagdi mein

Kujh duuriya pediya, kujh zindagi di saachiya sajana
Jo samjota karan to siva hor kujh nai kar sagdi mein

Kujh pyaar sade aapniya da,kujh lekhe karma de sajana
Jo cha ke kismat diya lakera badal nai sagdi mein

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mandeep ji........dil nu chu gaye tuhadi kavita....ahsaas dil-fareb rahe. bahut vadiya likhiya hai tusi...bahut samey baad tuhanu padna naseeb hoeya hai...umeed hai hun routine vich tuhanu pad sakaNgey.

kush raho


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hi friends.............
aaj fir likhne ki koshish hai ... umeed hai yeh koshish aap ko pasand aayegi ... bye take good care

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Kujh yaadein ne, kujh tera pyaar sajana
jo dil cho bhula nai sagdi mein

Kujh waqt marra, kujh tera intezaar sajana
Jo ro ke v rukaa nai sagdi mein

Kujh duuriya pediya, kujh zindagi di saachiya sajana
Jo samjota karan to siva hor kujh nai kar sagdi mein

Kujh pyaar sade aapniya da,kujh lekhe karma de sajana
Jo cha ke kismat diya lakera badal nai sagdi mein

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mandeep ji bhut khub likha hai dil khush ho gyaa......yunhi likhte raho or khush raho......raj......


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6th January 2008, 12:22 PM

hi sunita di
kaise hain aap? aapko meri koshish pasand aayii yeh jaan kar khushi hue ... eda hi saath dende ravo .... asi hor koshishan de naal aavage
tusi aap khayal rakhana
aapki dost
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6th January 2008, 12:25 PM

hi raj ji
ki haal hai twaada? twanu meri koshish pasand karan laaye shukriya eda hi saada saath dende reho ... asi hor koshishan de naal pesh hovange...
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hi friends.............
aaj fir likhne ki koshish hai ... umeed hai yeh koshish aap ko pasand aayegi ... bye take good care

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Kujh yaadein ne, kujh tera pyaar sajana
jo dil cho bhula nai sagdi mein

Kujh waqt marra, kujh tera intezaar sajana
Jo ro ke v rukaa nai sagdi mein

Kujh duuriya pediya, kujh zindagi di saachiya sajana
Jo samjota karan to siva hor kujh nai kar sagdi mein

Kujh pyaar sade aapniya da,kujh lekhe karma de sajana
Jo cha ke kismat diya lakera badal nai sagdi mein

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Hi mandy u have written a absolute fantastic poetry,it is nice when u explain it, really wonderfull attempt, keep it up the good work. May god always bless u with better and better creative, beautiful thoughts and success in to it.Nice to read u as always.

keep posting good work
take care
regards
manu

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13th January 2008, 07:56 PM

Hi manu
Its always pleasure to hear from u .... as long i as u all encourage ... i will try my best to come up with better work ..... Once again i appreciate u made enough time go thru my work....

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18th August 2009, 10:53 PM

Raj jii

bahut khoob kaha aapne..

yu hi aate rahye

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19th August 2009, 09:03 PM

hmmm hanji bht khoobsoorat ehsas nu simplicity nal likhea hai...
bs kite kite lagda hai k tuhanu shyd punjabi ghat aaundi hai,,, ya eh mera vehm hai....
baki bahut khoobsoorat likhiya hai...
keep it up ji...
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Kujh punjabi di shabdaawli ch kami laggee. Par ehsaas bahut khoobsurat ne. Agar kisey hor language vi likhdey oN te dassnaa, u seem worth reading


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Deep jii te Tilak jiii

Mandeep punjaban taan hai par punjab vich rahi nahi, pher bhi punjabi likhan da te punjabi bolan da bahut shonk hai es nu, esi karke main eh poetry es di es section vich transfer kiti taaki MANDEEP nu kuj sujao milan te us nu changa lage aapne punjabi veeraN te behna naal gal-baat karke.

vasde raho


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bhut hi jiyada vadiya aaaaaaaaaaaa


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27th August 2009, 10:18 PM

Hello DEEP JII

sat siri akal jii
Jii koshish padhan layee bahut bahut shukriya jii .. haan jii mennu zada punjabii aundi nahi per koshish karagii hor chnaga likhan te ummed kardii haan tusi eda hi saath dende reho ...

thanx alot

rab rakha

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bs kite kite lagda hai k tuhanu shyd punjabi ghat aaundi hai,,, ya eh mera vehm hai....
baki bahut khoobsoorat likhiya hai...
keep it up ji...
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Dear Tilak jii,

Sat siri akal jii


Jii sab toh phela touhada bahut bahut shukriya tusi aapna keemtii waqt deeta meri chotii jehii koshish nu deta .. te ehsaas pasand aaye yeh jaan ke hor v chnaga lagiya ... hmmm ...hor punjabiaat che pesh karan di koshish kaarangii .. jee languages te menu kujh 5 aundiya ne .. te onna de wich likhaya te fir kise nu nahi aaunii .. jeve seyaaneiya ne keha zada pangey nahi layaide..hehhehe


thanx alot

eda hi saath dende reho

rab rakha

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27th August 2009, 10:34 PM

My Dearest Didi,
sat siri akal jii


Bilkul sehii keeta te keha ..didii

tusi great ho!!!!

tusi aapna khayal rakhiyo ..

miltey haan

touhadii aapni
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Deep jii te Tilak jiii

Mandeep punjaban taan hai par punjab vich rahi nahi, pher bhi punjabi likhan da te punjabi bolan da bahut shonk hai es nu, esi karke main eh poetry es di es section vich transfer kiti taaki MANDEEP nu kuj sujao milan te us nu changa lage aapne punjabi veeraN te behna naal gal-baat karke.

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