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ohde naal sada ena ku hi c,,,,,
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Angry ohde naal sada ena ku hi c,,,,, - 26th August 2009, 03:43 PM

Yaada di galion langdeya fer tera didar ho gya c,
rooh c tadpi ik paase- dil add ro peya c,,

Oh pal jehan vich aa k dhur andhar teek jhanjhorh gaye,
jad tu bhull jawan lai keh k- haase naal hi lai gya c,,

josh-e-dard vich aa k jhooth c main v bol gya-
k bin tere sajan main kalla lavanga jee,,

kyo tadpiye vich tanhayiyan kyo asi haqdaar sajavan de-
aida v ki yaara gunaah ho gya c,,

hun ta bass haunka jeha bhar k dil nu dharwaasa de layida-
k Raj chandreya ohde naal sada ena ku hi c,,,


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28th August 2009, 04:56 PM

aakhri 2 lines ne rooh dhrooh laee balraj ji. wasdey raho


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bht vadia a ji... hor vadia likh sakde c.... likhde raho..... god bless u
   
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30th August 2009, 04:33 PM

tuhada bahut-2 shukriya tilak g and deep bai g,,,jo tusi mainu hounsla baksheya,,,,,main ta g bass aavde wallo koshish kiti c,,,ja keh lao dil hi chapeya c,,,,,


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30th August 2009, 06:46 PM

bhut hi jiyada vadiya a g rooh khush kar ditti a tusi


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31st August 2009, 09:50 AM

meharbani bangerdeep g,,,jo tusi v slaheya,,,


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31st August 2009, 11:00 AM

hun ta bass haunka jeha bhar k dil nu dharwaasa de layida-
k Raj chandreya ohde naal sada ena ku hi c,,,



Balraj ji, eh do lines dil de kareeb rahiyaN.

vasde raho


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31st August 2009, 06:31 PM

bahut meharbani sunita virender singh g,,,,jo tusi v mainu parh k maan bakhsheya,,,bass tuhade vallo hounsla hi ta labhde rehne aa,,,,,,


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6th September 2009, 09:52 PM

sorry babeo.......thnx
khush raho next time kuch hor wadhia aapna lai ke avanga...


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