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15th September 2009, 08:42 PM
vich rakh k kitabi tasveer ve,main akhraan nal gallaan krdi.
mainu aapni bna lai channa heer ve,main tere utte kina mardi. hye koi ni khabar mainu apne haal di. supne ch fira bs tainu bhaaldi. chitt kre la lva udaari aasmaan di,main udne nu fira chir di. mainu aapni bna lai.............. sadi nabz vi tu sada saah vi tu hai. sada judge vi tu sada gwaah vi tu hai. kar lai kabool kine chir di main arzi fira tere muhre dhardi. mainu aapni bna lai........ sadi ban ja diwali sohne yaara ve. sanu tere nalo vadh na koi pyara ve. sheti-2 aaja hun "deep" ve,teri nitt di udeek channa kardi. mainu aapni bna lai channa heer ve,main tere utte kina mardi.... |
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16th September 2009, 06:21 AM
Sat sri akal D33P ji,
Tussi ek vaar phir mainu hehraan kar ditta. Tuhadi shayri bohat hi vadiya hai. Rab karre tussi hamesha likhde raho... |
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16th September 2009, 07:42 PM
sat shri akal ria ji..thanx k tsi padia mainu..likhan wala main kaun huna,ehta tsi lok e ho jo likha rhe o..... sach janio..thanx jiiiiiii
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gud he g -
20th September 2009, 04:05 PM
bhen g bahut acha laga,me nwa ha te geet 1 wari padya, nice,
Carry on.. Ye kya kam tha k ik mulakat ho bus, tumhari dosti me kambakht hmara dil gya, hm drd ko khuda maan bethe he ab,mere maran k bahane me sath tumhara bn gya,, Kya malum hqiqat me sath dega khuda, Khwab aya k hmara ek jakham sil gya...M |
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22nd September 2009, 09:16 PM
bohat vadiya janbbbbbbbb.............
ਮੌਤ ਦੀ ਉਡੀਕ ਵਿੱਚ ਸਾਡੇ ਕੱਫਨ ਮੈਲੇ ਹੋ ਗਏ.... ਗਮ ਖਾ ਖਾ ਕੇ ਸੱਜਣਾ ਸਾਡੇ ਗੀਤ ਕੁਸੈਲੇ ਹੋ ਗਏ... |
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23rd September 2009, 03:38 PM
thanx bangerdeep ji................................................ ............................
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7th October 2009, 11:07 PM
sadi nabz vi tu sada saah vi tu hai.
sada judge vi tu sada gwaah vi tu hai. kar lai kabool kine chir di main arzi fira tere muhre dhardi. mainu aapni bna lai...... bahut bahut hi khoob DEEP JI.. |
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9th October 2009, 11:32 AM
Deep ji bahut wadhiyaa si. GeetaaN wich vi tuhadi kalam da suhappan saaf dikhaee dendaa hai.
chitt kre la lva udaari aasmaan di,main udne nu fira chir di. Udney di jagah kujh hor honaa chaahidaa si chitt kre la lva udaari aasmaan di,main ambraaN nu fira chir di. Wasdey raho |
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