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Main adhoore Geet di ik Satar haan,
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Post Main adhoore Geet di ik Satar haan, - 4th March 2009, 04:27 PM

Main adhoore Geet di ik Satar haan,
Main agam Raah da ik Safar haan.

Ishq ne kitiyan jo Barbadiya ,
Main ohna Barbadiya da Shikhar haan.

Jis vekh k v menu na vekhiya
Main ohna Naina di Gungi Nazar haan.

Ik ikali Maut hai jis da ilaaj,
Chaar din di Zindagi da, Main oh Fikar haan



this is not my own sorry frds dont mind
   
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8th April 2009, 01:52 AM

whos ever it is bhaji good thing you posted it. Its really well written. My appreciation to the original writer and thanks to you
   
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9th April 2009, 10:31 AM

bahut hi vadhia hai bai ji....
   
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14th April 2009, 12:35 PM

thx all of uuuuuuuuuuuuuu.................................... .................................................. ......................


ਮੌਤ ਦੀ ਉਡੀਕ ਵਿੱਚ
ਸਾਡੇ ਕੱਫਨ ਮੈਲੇ ਹੋ ਗਏ....
ਗਮ ਖਾ ਖਾ ਕੇ ਸੱਜਣਾ
ਸਾਡੇ ਗੀਤ ਕੁਸੈਲੇ ਹੋ ਗਏ...


   
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8th July 2009, 10:14 AM

Bangerdeep, if you didn't I know I just wanted to tell you that this Kavita is by Shiv Kumar Batalvi and I believe there's more to it. Ill try to upload the whole peace of work soon but thanks for sharing
   
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30th July 2009, 02:46 PM

ok sir ji thx.............................


ਮੌਤ ਦੀ ਉਡੀਕ ਵਿੱਚ
ਸਾਡੇ ਕੱਫਨ ਮੈਲੇ ਹੋ ਗਏ....
ਗਮ ਖਾ ਖਾ ਕੇ ਸੱਜਣਾ
ਸਾਡੇ ਗੀਤ ਕੁਸੈਲੇ ਹੋ ਗਏ...


   
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28th August 2009, 12:00 PM

but I think it's by surjit patar,,,,try his books...."Hey kavita main murr aya haan" or,,,"hawa vich likhe haraf",,,,bt m not sure...sry


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3rd September 2009, 08:52 AM

Hey I'm pretty sure it's by Shiv Kumar Batalvi since I have the book by him which contains the Kavita. but Ill still double check. and thanks for recommending Surjit Patar. I will check out his books too.
   
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