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"Tera salaam aa geya" - 28th August 2009, 05:49 PM

Namaskaar Dosto

main punjabi vich na-maatar hi likhiya hai, par aaj main Deep ji de likhe kuj ahsaas pade, te dil kita ki main v kuj likhaN, te ek nimaani jehi koshish kar laye likhan di, te oh koshish tuhade saamne hai


aaj dekh ke purani kitaab, koi yaad aa geya,
modiya hoyea saffa teri yaad dilla geya,

chuppa chuppa rakhiya si jo phool gulaab da,
murjaya hoeya oh phool teri yaad dilla geya,

purana ek calender rakhiya si jo kitaab vich,
tere milan diyan tareeka.n yaad dilla geya,

beetiyaN yaada.n ne aaj dil dukha ditta,
rondiyaN aakhiya vich tu samma geya,

hun taaN zindgi di akhiri shaam aa gaye,
jaundi baar hi sahi tera salaam aa geya.




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29th August 2009, 01:24 AM

Bahut hi khoooob Sunita ji ,
tusi ta punjabi poetry ch vi kamaal da likhde ho,


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aye hye.... chlo kise ta kamm aaye .... meri rachna to ubhar k koi vadia kalaam ban gya...... u rocks sunita ji........ thanx k tsi eh likhea.... har line shandaar hai... bht kuj sikha gye mainu.... thanx ji.... god bless u.
   
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29th August 2009, 12:09 PM

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Bahut hi khoooob Sunita ji ,
tusi ta punjabi poetry ch vi kamaal da likhde ho,


dear heer.............tusi aina maan dita, changa lagiya.........bas tusi aida hi housla dende rahogey taan sadi bhi kalam kuj na kuj likhdi rahegi.

shukriya

vasde raho


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29th August 2009, 07:39 PM

Shaandaar hai Sunitaa ji. Khaas taur te eh sher

purana ek calender rakhiya si jo kitaab vich,
tere milan diyan tareeka.n yaad dilla geya,

puraaney calender da milan diyaaN tareekaaN yaad karwaaunaa sach much man nu moh gaya...


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Namaskaar Dosto

main punjabi vich na-maatar hi likhiya hai, par aaj main Deep ji de likhe kuj ahsaas pade, te dil kita ki main v kuj likhaN, te ek nimaani jehi koshish kar laye likhan di, te oh koshish tuhade saamne hai


aaj dekh ke purani kitaab, koi yaad aa geya,
modiya hoyea saffa teri yaad dilla geya,

chuppa chuppa rakhiya si jo phool gulaab da,
murjaya hoeya oh phool teri yaad dilla geya,

purana ek calender rakhiya si jo kitaab vich,
tere milan diyan tareeka.n yaad dilla geya,

beetiyaN yaada.n ne aaj dil dukha ditta,
rondiyaN aakhiya vich tu samma geya,

hun taaN zindgi di akhiri shaam aa gaye,
jaundi baar hi sahi tera salaam aa geya.



Di..

Tussi likhya ta boht vadiya ae... purani yaadan nu kuj is tarah yaad rakho ki o bulyan utte hassa leyaun, je o akhaan ch athru leyaindiyan ne taan ohna nu vi eh athruaan naal hi beh jaan deya karo..

Agli vaar kuj eha ja tuhaada likhya padna chaavaangi jeda rooh nu baag baag kar dave..

Tussi apna khayal rakho!

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sunita g bhaut hi vadiya likhiya a tusi


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ਸਾਡੇ ਕੱਫਨ ਮੈਲੇ ਹੋ ਗਏ....
ਗਮ ਖਾ ਖਾ ਕੇ ਸੱਜਣਾ
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aye hye.... chlo kise ta kamm aaye .... meri rachna to ubhar k koi vadia kalaam ban gya...... u rocks sunita ji........ thanx k tsi eh likhea.... har line shandaar hai... bht kuj sikha gye mainu.... thanx ji.... god bless u.
shukriya deep jii, tusi meri poetry nu pasand kita, eh poetry tuhade ahsaasa.n to hi shuru hoye c, so meri eh poetry tuhade hi naam

vasde raho


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Bot hi Kamaal Da likheya E Sunita ji
Tuhadi Koshish Waqeyi Tarif de kabil hai.........

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Sister Pranaam!

kaise hai.n aap?

aapki yeh puNjaabi Ghazal bahot hi Khuub rahiiN.. waise maiN huuN Gujarati to puNjaabi language ko samjhne kii koShiSh kii hay ke Ghazal ke ehsaas hay kyaa!


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aaj dekh ke purani kitaab, koi yaad aa geya,
modiya hoyea saffa teri yaad dilla geya,

aaGhaaz bahot hi Khuub hay! Sher meiN aap yeh kehnaa chaahte hai kii pooraani kitaab aaj deKh ke ko'ii yaad aa gayaa! aur doosre miSre meiN yeh kehnaa chaahte hai kii muddat ho ga'ii saffa teri yaad dilaa gayaa!
:saffa: kaa matlab maalUm nahiN

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chuppa chuppa rakhiya si jo phool gulaab da,
murjaya hoeya oh phool teri yaad dilla geya,

jo Phool maiNe Chhipaa Chhipaa ke raKhaa thaa .. murjhaayaa huaa wo phool aaj teri yaad dilaa gaya! saHeeH huuN nah.. yeh Sher bahot hi Khuub rahaa!

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purana ek calender rakhiya si jo kitaab vich,
tere milan diyan tareeka.n yaad dilla geya,

ek calander raKhaa hai kitaab meiN.. jiss diN tum mileN the wo din taariKheN sab wo yaad dilaa gayaa!

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beetiyaN yaada.n ne aaj dil dukha ditta,
rondiyaN aakhiya vich tu samma geya,

uN beetii baatoN ne aaj dil duKhaa diyaa.. roti hu'ii aaNKhoN meiN tu samaa gayaa! waah!

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hun taaN zindgi di akhiri shaam aa gaye,
jaundi baar hi sahi tera salaam aa geya.


meri to ziNdagee ki aaKhiri Shaam aa gayii.. jaane ke waQt hi sahii teraa aaKhiri salaam aa gayaa!

ees aaKhiri Sher ke baare me.n kyaa kahuu.n laa-jawaab rahaa ! daad qabUl farmaayeN!



... aapki yeh koShiSh bahot hi Khuub rahiiN.. puNjaabi Ghazal ko samjhne kii poorii koShiSh kii hay maine.. ehsaas se kuch baate.n dil ne samjh lii! Ghazal qaabi;-e-taareef rahiiN.. dil se DheroN saari daad!

KhuSh raheN.. apnaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

aapka ChhoTu

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Sister Pranaam!

kaise hai.n aap?

aapki yeh puNjaabi Ghazal bahot hi Khuub rahiiN.. waise maiN huuN Gujarati to puNjaabi language ko samjhne kii koShiSh kii hay ke Ghazal ke ehsaas hay kyaa!



aaGhaaz bahot hi Khuub hay! Sher meiN aap yeh kehnaa chaahte hai kii pooraani kitaab aaj deKh ke ko'ii yaad aa gayaa! aur doosre miSre meiN yeh kehnaa chaahte hai kii muddat ho ga'ii saffa teri yaad dilaa gayaa!
:saffa: kaa matlab maalUm nahiN


jo Phool maiNe Chhipaa Chhipaa ke raKhaa thaa .. murjhaayaa huaa wo phool aaj teri yaad dilaa gaya! saHeeH huuN nah.. yeh Sher bahot hi Khuub rahaa!

ek calander raKhaa hai kitaab meiN.. jiss diN tum mileN the wo din taariKheN sab wo yaad dilaa gayaa!


uN beetii baatoN ne aaj dil duKhaa diyaa.. roti hu'ii aaNKhoN meiN tu samaa gayaa! waah!



meri to ziNdagee ki aaKhiri Shaam aa gayii.. jaane ke waQt hi sahii teraa aaKhiri salaam aa gayaa!

ees aaKhiri Sher ke baare me.n kyaa kahuu.n laa-jawaab rahaa ! daad qabUl farmaayeN!



... aapki yeh koShiSh bahot hi Khuub rahiiN.. puNjaabi Ghazal ko samjhne kii poorii koShiSh kii hay maine.. ehsaas se kuch baate.n dil ne samjh lii! Ghazal qaabi;-e-taareef rahiiN.. dil se DheroN saari daad!

KhuSh raheN.. apnaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

aapka ChhoTu

~ Dhaval


so sweet chottu.......accha laga ki tumhe meri punjabi poetry samaj aaye hai, bas pheley sher ka second mishra tum sahi nahi samaj paye, MODIYA means page to thoda sa fold kiya hua, aur SAFFA means page. baaki sab sahi sahi samjey ho tum.

shukriya ki tum meri poetry padne punjabi fourm mein bhi aa gaye

pyar aur duao.n ke saath
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aadaab !

jaisa keh app jaantii haiN keh mujhe punjaabii bahut kam hi smajh aatii hai aur bolna to qati nahieN aatii mager phir bhi dil ker raha keh kuch na kuch punjaabii maiN likhne ki koshish keroN

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aaj dekh ke purani kitaab, koi yaad aa geya,
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ager aisa ho to ???


aj wekh ke puranii kitaab , tuuN chete aa geya
muRyaa huyaa safah yaadaaN teriyaaN dilaa gaya


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chuppa chuppa rakhiya si jo phool gulaab da,
murjaya hoeya oh phool teri yaad dilla geya,


lukaa lukaa rakhiyaa sii jeRaa phul ghulaab da
tak tak raahvaN teriyaN oh murjhaa geyaa


beetiyaN yaada.n ne aaj dil dukha ditta,
rondiyaN aakhiya vich tu samma geya,


beete pal hote haiN beeti yaadieN to nahieN ho sakti yaadieN to beete pal ki hoti haiN

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aapki koshish achi lagi , likhti rahieN , per qaafia per thoRi se tavajuh darkaar hai appki

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aaj dekh ke purani kitaab, koi yaad aa geya,
modiya hoyea saffa teri yaad dilla geya,

chuppa chuppa rakhiya si jo phool gulaab da,
murjaya hoeya oh phool teri yaad dilla geya,

purana ek calender rakhiya si jo kitaab vich,
tere milan diyan tareeka.n yaad dilla geya,

beetiyaN yaada.n ne aaj dil dukha ditta,
rondiyaN aakhiya vich tu samma geya,

hun taaN zindgi di akhiri shaam aa gaye,
jaundi baar hi sahi tera salaam aa geya.


bahut khoob ............. Sunita Ji


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Namaskaar Dosto

main punjabi vich na-maatar hi likhiya hai, par aaj main Deep ji de likhe kuj ahsaas pade, te dil kita ki main v kuj likhaN, te ek nimaani jehi koshish kar laye likhan di, te oh koshish tuhade saamne hai


aaj dekh ke purani kitaab, koi yaad aa geya,
modiya hoyea saffa teri yaad dilla geya,

chuppa chuppa rakhiya si jo phool gulaab da,
murjaya hoeya oh phool teri yaad dilla geya,

purana ek calender rakhiya si jo kitaab vich,
tere milan diyan tareeka.n yaad dilla geya,

beetiyaN yaada.n ne aaj dil dukha ditta,
rondiyaN aakhiya vich tu samma geya,

hun taaN zindgi di akhiri shaam aa gaye,
jaundi baar hi sahi tera salaam aa geya.


Sari Kaveeta ee wadia way per jaiday lafzaan naal tusi aaghaz kita way badha ee dil noon changa lageya
dil vichoon nikli daad qabool kariya jay


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Dil jalaa ke poochhte haiN badii masoomiyat se woh.
Shamaa ka hi kyuN muqaddar hai raat bhar jalnaa.

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nice work done. thanks for sharing......................


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Namaskar Sunita ji...

kafi der baad ajj time milea kujh read karan da..

sachmuch hi tusi bahut bahut hi shandaar likhde ho..
eda hi SDC di te raaj karde raho..

parmatma tuhanu hamesha khush rakhe..
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