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rang naseeba de.... - 11th September 2009, 10:25 PM

saade naseeb ne kuj is tra de,
zor laayiya v badlde nahi rang.
sanu nitt sapp v maar k dang,
picho maafi v lainde ne mang.
ik saade te tohmat laundea lafza da sattar nahi takde,
unj bda hai salika ohna vich ,bdi hai sang.
yakeen hai mainu oh mere haal to bekhabar nahi,
haan shayd bhul gye ne haal chaal puchne da dhang.
jisdi mere hath dor c ,vicho katt gya hor c,
maitho door ja rhi hai hun meri hi patang.
"deep" moh waffa ya kise rishte di umeed na rakh,
jina chir hor hale hai hath tera tang.
   
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19th September 2009, 10:44 AM

Deep ji bahut shaandaar hai. tuhaadey zindagi te keetey kataaksh , aindagee de bahut nedey lagedy ne.

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22nd September 2009, 10:17 PM

bohat bohat vadiyaaaaaaaa......att kara ditti


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ਸਾਡੇ ਕੱਫਨ ਮੈਲੇ ਹੋ ਗਏ....
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22nd September 2009, 11:33 PM

Sat sri akal Deep ji,
mai pichhle 2 mahine ton shayri.com te poetry padh reha han. Te deep ji, tusi vishwas kariyo minu hun takk shayri.com de saare hi writers wicho tusi BEST lagge.
Waise hor writers khaas karke Ababu, Tilak ji, Heer vi bohat wadia likhde ne par tusi ta har waar hi kamaal kar dinde ho....
Bohat wadia deep ji..... bohat hi wadia.... Keep it up.....God Bless you.
   
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23rd September 2009, 04:32 PM

thanx tilkji,thanx banger ji..and thanx wellwisher ji....
tuhi diti mashoori tu aaukat vich rakhi,aina uccha na lijavi k zameen bhul java...
   
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