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ek sher - 17th April 2004, 12:57 PM

this is 4 all
meharbaan hoke bula lo mujhe chahe jis waqt
main gaya waqt nahi ki phir aa bhi na sakoon
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Question waqt - 19th April 2004, 04:41 PM

Tum gaya waqt na sahi, bulane par aa hi jaoge,
par tumhe bula sake aisa bhi to hamara waqt nahi....



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hello - 19th April 2004, 05:02 PM

aap dono logo ne bahut khub likha hai. dher sara dhanyvaad aap dono ko yaha apane thoughts pesh kerne ke liye.


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20th October 2004, 11:16 AM

hi sweety..
how r u?
tahnx

hi akant
how r u?
mujhe kaise pata lagega k tum ho....tumhari aahat hogi kaisi???????
by the way this is for u
aahat si koi aaye to lagta hai k tum ho
sheesha kahin takraye to lagta hai k tum ho
ab pata nahin k tum ho bhi ke nahin
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are zara suno,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, - 20th October 2004, 06:35 PM

tum bhi gajab ho ..........miss kehkashan{niharika}........darasal..galti tumhari nahin ....shayad tum kam hi shayri se wakif ho..........isiliy to tumne shayar janab "asadullah khan galib ka sher apne naam kar liya ........waise ye galat baat hai kyu ki jab koi shayar koi sher compose karta hai to us ekafi mahnat karni padhai hai....ummeed hai aage se agar koi shar post karogi to ...........shatay ka naam bhi numaya karogi.....


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21st October 2004, 01:54 PM

haan ji amaan
maine ye kab kaha ki ye sher maine likha hai
aaap to kuch zyada hi ghalat fehmi paaalne lage hain
waise apke liye main apna likha hua ek sher post kar rahi hooon
n yes by the way who is NIHARIKA?
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AUR YAAR KOI BHOOL HAMARI NAHI BHOOLE

yahan main ye likha rahi hooon ki ye mera likha hua sher hai wahan maine nahi likha tha ki wo mera hai..... waise samajhne wale khud hi samajh jaate hai ok


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waqaeee........................ - 22nd October 2004, 08:23 PM

kahin ek ghazal suni thi or uska ek sher bahut pasand aya...par aaj mujhe yah pata chala ke woh sher kiske liya likha tha ....kahte hai ke kisi ko agar dost mankar kuch kaho o bura woh maan leta hai.....aur agar samne wala ladaki hai to phir to allah malik hai bus....ab woh sher bhi sun lo jo kisi ne tumhare aur mere is marasim {restey} ko lekar likha tha.....

"apna chehra na badala gaya
aeene se khafa ho gaye"

isliye badebuzurgoon ne kaha hai ke kisi ko aeena mat dikhao........

aur han.....maine kaha tha ke tum urdu shayri se kam hi wakeef ho magar ab pata chala ke tumhari to hindi bhi taras khane layak hai........kahakashan ke hindi mein mani{meaning} ...hote hai....niharika.....apni hindi ki teacher se puchna ....

tumhari profile dekhi aur sach kaha hai tumne aone bare mein ke tum......ho......


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23rd October 2004, 02:02 PM

Assalam u alaikum aman ji
shukriya aaina dikhane k liye par pata na tha k yahan agar original writer ka naam na likho to log usey aapka hi sher samajhte hain...ya yeh samajhte hain k aap kisi ka credit apne naam karna chah rahe hain....sorrry aagey se yeh ghalti nahin hogi aur agar original writer ka naam nahin pata hua karega to likh diya karoongi...k that its not written by me...is it fine..
one thing more i wanna tell u....that i have urdu as main subject not hindi ok...aapne to wahi baat kar di na
aur rahi baat mere profile ki to usmein jo likha hai woh sahi hai main thodi si pagal hi hoon aur thoda pagal har insaan hota hai
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zara suno.............. - 23rd October 2004, 09:57 PM

dekho meri tumse koi zati ranjish to hai nahi .........maga maine woh baat sirf isliye kai thi ki.......tum khud bhi urdu badhati ho......maano tumne koi sher likha .......aur ye lafz "likha".......shayar ki mahanat ki shiddat ka nahiin samjha sakta .........khair tumne ek sher badi mushkil se khud apni kalam se likha ...........aur ek din wahi sher tumhara koi frd apna naam lekar suna de to tumpar kya guzaregi........

in short u must give credit to the shayar for composing a desent sher.......

manta hoon ab hamare marasim bhi behtar honge.....

muskurakar mila karo humse
kuch kaha aur suna karo humse

baat karne se baat badhati hai
roz baatein kiya karo humse.....
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hi - 25th October 2004, 11:54 AM

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hi akant
how r u?
mujhe kaise pata lagega k tum ho....tumhari aahat hogi kaisi???????
by the way this is for u
aahat si koi aaye to lagta hai k tum ho
sheesha kahin takraye to lagta hai k tum ho
ab pata nahin k tum ho bhi ke nahin
STRANGE
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Hello Kahkashan

I am fine and hope that you may be fine there..
thanks for.. giving ur words to me...

likhati rahiye...

ek din aapko pata chal jayega ki main hoon..


shubhkamnao sahit,

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26th October 2004, 11:37 AM

thanx 4 giving me ur suggestion ki kuch log doosro ka nam le kar kya kya karte hain. reallly i didnt know this kyonki main ye site zyada surf nahi karti.......................... han main is bat se inkar nhai karti ki i just love urdu poetry lekin phir bhi , jaisa ki maine likha tha ki is site main rajistration karte waqt main bilkul bhi serious nahi thi , but now i m just ok with this id, n i think i can surf from this id too
aur sach bolun to mujhe is site ke baare main zyada kuch to pata nahi tha ,actuallly my frnd told me abt this site cause i m a poetry lover na isiliye.n mujhe lagta hai ki main aaaapko bore kar rahi hoooooon
AISE RAHA KARO KI KAREIN LOG AAARZOO
AISE MILA KARO KI ZAMANA MISAAL DE
n yaaaa one thing more i wannna tell u that ur urdu is reallly fantastic
ok alllah hafiz


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achcha laga.... - 28th October 2004, 08:02 PM

ab ki baar tumne achcha kaha ..kyu ki shayad tum pahle se zyada sanjeeda thi ......maine kaha tha na ke hamare marasim sudhareinge.....waise tum ne mujhe bilkul bhi bore nahin kiya bythe way........tum bhi sochati hgi ki yahan sab mujh jaise over 50 years hi rahte hoonge na jo bus baat bebaat par apni salaah dee hai.......magar nahin yahan we hi log rahte hai jo shayri cum poetry ko "like " nahin karte "love " karte hai....aur han....main bhi sirf 20 years old hon ok....

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1st November 2004, 12:52 PM

assalamualekum
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Re: ek sher - 2nd November 2004, 12:26 PM

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