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wah wah wah very good mausam ji sach me aachi shayri likhi he



dooriyo ki parwah kon karta he hum to nazdeek jane se darte he
nigahe to unse uhmilale nihar par unke dil me utar jane se darte he
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18th November 2007, 07:20 PM

sach kaha manish ji aap ne
hum aap ki is shayri se sehmiyat he aab aage sune



zindagi ne mari thokar zindagi ko zindagi badal gayi,
jise samaj baithe the hum aap ni zindagi wohi humse door chali gayi.


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sach kaha manish ji aap ne
hum aap ki is shayri se sehmiyat he aab aage sune



zindagi ne mari thokar zindagi ko zindagi badal gayi,
jise samaj baithe the hum aap ni zindagi wohi humse door chali gayi.


Gham ,udaasi., tanahayi ka samandar hai dil
yaado ke kaante,registaan sa banjar hai dil
khwaayisho ke ped to sabhi patzad ho chale
labo par feeki mushkan ke nakli pad ho chale
bhitar ummiddo ki jalti chitaa ka manjar hai dil


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19th November 2007, 12:14 PM

gham Ki Kasti Pe Sawar Is Dil Ko
samundar-e- Khushi Ka Kya Pata
lahero Me Khel Ne Wale Is Dil Ko
gerai-e-samundar-e- Moti Ka Kya Pata


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19th November 2007, 02:51 PM

mouf karta hoon main aap ko
riha kardiya har gunah se
nahi dete saza hum unhe
jo alag ho is badnaam jaha se


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20th November 2007, 02:50 PM

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mouf karta hoon main aap ko
riha kardiya har gunah se
nahi dete saza hum unhe
jo alag ho is badnaam jaha se

"tujhe na sahi muje tujse mohabat to hai,
main na hue mashoor tere naam se,
tu mere naam se badnaam to hai"


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20th November 2007, 08:08 PM

riste na sahi abtak bandhanke
dil to humara ek hain
aaj nahi to kal hum sath honge
jab irada humara nek hain


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riste na sahi abtak bandhanke
dil to humara ek hain
aaj nahi to kal hum sath honge
jab irada humara nek hain

dil mein ho chahat to doori koi mayane nahi rakhti,
faaslo.n se rishto.n ki kareebi kum nahi hoti.........


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dil mein ho chahat to doori koi mayane nahi rakhti,
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Tujh ko bhi jab apanii qasameN apane vaadeN yaad nahiiN
Hum bhii apane khvaab teri ankhoN meiN rakh kar bhul gaye


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Tujh ko bhi jab apanii qasameN apane vaadeN yaad nahiiN
Hum bhii apane khvaab teri ankhoN meiN rakh kar bhul gaye

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Faasle aise bhi hon ge mein ne socha na tha
vo mere saamne betha tha magar mera na tha

Kal raat meri nee.nd men bhee tairnane lagi
Vo machhaliyaa jinhe koii dariyaa nahee mila

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raat ke Khvaab sunaayen kis ko raat ke Khvaab suhaane the
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sab gunaahon ka iqaraar karne lagen
is qadar Khubsurat sazaayen na de
Zindagii se badii saza hee nahee
Aur kyaa jurm hai pata hee nahee
Bichhar kar aap se ham jee rahe hai
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Zindagii se badii saza hee nahee
Aur kyaa jurm hai pata hee nahee
Bichhar kar aap se ham jee rahe hai
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main tab jaanu mere dil se chale jaao juda hokar

Kaavish ki ghazal khoon-e-jigar gaata hai
shaayar ka sukhan aur sa.nwar jaata hai
Auzaan-e-roobaayii ko piilaaye jab khoon
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apnee waHshat ke har ik Khaar se zaKhmee hai badan
tuu utar mujh meiN, miree zaat ko maKhmal kar de

jo barastaa hai gul-o-Khaar-o-rag-e-SeHraa par
tuu miree zaat ko ulfat kaa woh baadal kar de

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jo barastaa hai gul-o-Khaar-o-rag-e-SeHraa par
tuu miree zaat ko ulfat kaa woh baadal kar de

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Kabhi to khul ke baras abr e meharbaan ki tarha
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Gujar jaata huun chupchap tanha jab bhi tere makaan se
Zeh'n puuchhtaa hai sawaal kitney dil-e-bejubaa.N se

bhanak lag jayegii jo hawaao ko mere dard ki hamnashii
Baras jaayenge sab dariyaa-e-ashq Nigaah-e-aasmaaN se


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Gujar jaata huun chupchap tanha jab bhi tere makaan se
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bhanak lag jayegii jo hawaao ko mere dard ki hamnashii
Baras jaayenge sab dariyaa-e-ashq Nigaah-e-aasmaaN se


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GUJARTA nahi GUZARTA
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Khud piyaas ka sehra hon magar dilki ye zid hei ke
hur dasht pe sawan ki tarha toot ke barson
ba.D gayaa thaa pyaas kaa ehasaas dariyaa dekh kar
ham palaT aaye magar paanii ko pyaasaa dekh kar


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ufffffffffff mausam wah waaaaaaaaaaaaah wah wah wah

oh my gosh

uff utm ne to kamal kar diya

dil khush kar dya


buahat din baad kisi ne maham ke sher ka aisa qayamat khez javab diya ke ruh tak khush ho gayee


kya baat hai janab ki

der se bethee wah wah kar ahehon is sher pur iskee gehrayee par aur tumahre javab pur

u really really deserve a warm maham kindda hug sweetheart for this one

GREAT !


sham k sanwle chehre ko nikhara jaye
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ufffffffffff mausam wah waaaaaaaaaaaaah wah wah wah

oh my gosh

uff utm ne to kamal kar diya

dil khush kar dya


buahat din baad kisi ne maham ke sher ka aisa qayamat khez javab diya ke ruh tak khush ho gayee


kya baat hai janab ki

der se bethee wah wah kar ahehon is sher pur iskee gehrayee par aur tumahre javab pur

u really really deserve a warm maham kindda hug sweetheart for this one

GREAT !


sham k sanwle chehre ko nikhara jaye
kyon na sagar se koi chand ubhara jaye
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kaun sa zaKhm kisne baksha hai uska kaise rakhe hisaab koi

Chandani teri nazar ke dariyaa men naha kar noor tera chura layi hai
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wahhhhhh MANU, bahut khub................

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na aayi unhe nibhani pyaar me wafaa,
aur zamane ki nazar bewafaa ke naam se mashoor hue hum....................


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ek khushi ki chah me har khushi se dur huye hum,
kisi se kuch keh na sake, itne majboor hue hum,
na aayi unhe nibhani pyaar me wafaa,
aur zamane ki nazar bewafaa ke naam se mashoor hue hum....................
lamha tumaare is sher ka jawaab yeh jagjeet singh ki ghazal hai

तुम ये कैसे जुदा हो गए,
हर तरफ़ हर जगह हो गए,

बेवफा तो न वो थे न हम,
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तुम ये कैसे जुदा हो गए,
हर तरफ़ हर जगह हो गए,

बेवफा तो न वो थे न हम,
यूं हुआ बस जुदा हो गए,


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hello krenil ji, bahut acha likha. lijiye humara jwab

maana ruth-kar tujse humne raasten badal liye
saama jayein teri baahon mein, tu ek bar awaj to de



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bahut hi khub dost ab ye suno

ruth kar aap hame bhulane lage
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bahut hi khub dost ab ye suno

ruth kar aap hame bhulane lage
itna dur huye ki yaad aane lage
kaise bhula du aapko ek pal me
jab aap jaise log pane me hame kai jamane lage

bahut khoob........

"hum bhi aapko dil se bhulla na payeNge,
par majboori hai yeh mere naseeb ki,
dil-o-jaan se aapko chahti hoon maiN,
par tera naam lakeero.n mein saja na payeNge"


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bahut khoob........

"hum bhi aapko dil se bhulla na payeNge,
par majboori hai yeh mere naseeb ki,
dil-o-jaan se aapko chahti hoon maiN,
par tera naam lakeero.n mein saja na payeNge"

wah didi bahut hi khub likha hai mujhe pasand aaya

dil ki hasti kab bikhar gai hoti
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dil ki hasti kab bikhar gai hoti
ruh ke zakham bhar gaye hote
zindagi aapki namajish hai
varna hum kab ke mar gaye hote

wahhhhhhhhhhh dost.....kya baat hai....ab ye suno....

zamane se kabke guzar gaye hote,
thokar na lagi hoti to bahek gaye hote,
bandhe the bas aap ki mohabbat ke dhage me,
warna kabke motiyon jaise bikhar gaye hote.......


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bandhe the bas aap ki mohabbat ke dhage me,
warna kabke motiyon jaise bikhar gaye hote.......

wah lamha bahut khub achha likha hai

maine bhi kisi se pyaar kiya tha
thoda nahi besumaar kiya tha
meri to duniya ujad gai jab
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usne kaha are pagle maine
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sau sau ummiide.n ba.ndhatii hai.n ik ik nigaah par
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na jaane kis liye ummiidavaar* baiThaa huu.N
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