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is daur nai kisne sachcha pyaar paya

zindaghi guzar rahi hai imtihano ke daur se

ek zakhm bhara nahi ki dusra taiyaar paaya ....

jawab hazir hai janab



meri khusk ankhon ko who selab day gya.
meri zeest ko gham behisab day gya.
Mai ne to chahi thi sirf khushi uski .
na jany q bewafa ka muje khitab day gya.

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jawab hazir hai janab



meri khusk ankhon ko who selab day gya.
meri zeest ko gham behisab day gya.
Mai ne to chahi thi sirf khushi uski .
na jany q bewafa ka muje khitab day gya.
mat lagavo us per koi bewafai ka ilzam
uski bhi kuch majburi rahi hogi
mana chahte the tum uski khushi har dam
per wo bhi tumari khushiyo ki wajah se tumse door rahi hogi


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mat lagavo us per koi bewafai ka ilzam
uski bhi kuch majburi rahi hogi
mana chahte the tum uski khushi har dam
per wo bhi tumari khushiyo ki wajah se tumse door rahi hogi


wah dost bahut hi achha hai


marne ke baad mere tum jo kahani likhna
kaise barbad hui meri jawani likhna
kaise umra bhar mere hoth khushi ko tarse
kyu umra bhar baha aankh se pani likhna
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3rd March 2008, 10:09 AM

Ek jaam ulfat ke naam, Ek jaam wafa ke naam, Puri bottle bewafa ke naam.

ein phoolon ki khushboo dil mein bikhar jaaye dua hum karenge ki yeh marz jald utaar jaaye bharrayi hui aapki awaaz dil lubhati hai mera shayad yeh bhi manaye ki marz lagaye rakhe dera aayinda ein phoolon ki jaroorat na ho agar ein ke siwa, aapke sirhaane hum hon

Kisi nazar ko tera intezaar aaj bhi hai kahan ho tum ki yeh dil beqarar aaj bhi hai woh waadiyan woh fazaayen ki hum mile the jahan meri wafaa ka wahi bar-mazaar aaj bhi hai main jaane dekh ke kyun unko yeh hua ahsaas ki mere deil pe unhe aikhtiyaar aaj bhi hai

Kaun kahta hai mohabbat ki jubaan hoti hai yeh haqiqat to nigahon se bayaan hoti hai woh na aaye to satati hai khalish si dil ko woh jo aaye to khalish aur jawaan hoti hai


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PADHAI KE LIYE ZARURI KITAB HAI

DUNIYA MAIN HAR SAWAL KA JAWAB HAI

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3rd March 2008, 04:11 PM

[quote=krenil;273998]wah dost bahut hi achha hai


marne ke baad mere tum jo kahani likhna
kaise barbad hui meri jawani likhna
kaise umra bhar mere hoth khushi ko tarse
kyu umra bhar baha aankh se pani likhna

likhne ko to bahut kuch likh dete
per vo likhawat kaha se lata jo tum muje dete
hum umar bhar sirf ek khusi ki liye tarse
kyu ki humari har khushi to hum usko dete


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3rd March 2008, 04:18 PM

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Ek jaam ulfat ke naam, Ek jaam wafa ke naam, Puri bottle bewafa ke naam.

ein phoolon ki khushboo dil mein bikhar jaaye dua hum karenge ki yeh marz jald utaar jaaye bharrayi hui aapki awaaz dil lubhati hai mera shayad yeh bhi manaye ki marz lagaye rakhe dera aayinda ein phoolon ki jaroorat na ho agar ein ke siwa, aapke sirhaane hum hon

Kisi nazar ko tera intezaar aaj bhi hai kahan ho tum ki yeh dil beqarar aaj bhi hai woh waadiyan woh fazaayen ki hum mile the jahan meri wafaa ka wahi bar-mazaar aaj bhi hai main jaane dekh ke kyun unko yeh hua ahsaas ki mere deil pe unhe aikhtiyaar aaj bhi hai

Kaun kahta hai mohabbat ki jubaan hoti hai yeh haqiqat to nigahon se bayaan hoti hai woh na aaye to satati hai khalish si dil ko woh jo aaye to khalish aur jawaan hoti hai


wah dost apne bahut acha likha hai
likhne se kese pata chalega ki mohbbat kya hoti hai
kisi ko mohbbat karke dekho to pata chalega
dil me basakar to har koi mohbbat karta hai
per kisi ka intzaar karo to pata chalega ki mohbbat kya hoti hai


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wah dost apne bahut acha likha hai

likhne se kese pata chalega ki mohbbat kya hoti hai
kisi ko mohbbat karke dekho to pata chalega
dil me basakar to har koi mohbbat karta hai

per kisi ka intzaar karo to pata chalega ki mohbbat kya hoti hai

bilkool sahi kaha hain aapne main aapki baat se sehmat hoon


mohabbat mohabaat karte ho
mohabbat ko janna bhi sikho
sirf pana mohabbat ka naam nahi
mohabbat main khona bhi sikho


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3rd March 2008, 07:54 PM

[quote=nihar;274222]bilkool sahi kaha hain aapne main aapki baat se sehmat hoon


mohabbat mohabaat karte ho
mohabbat ko janna bhi sikho
sirf pana mohabbat ka naam nahi
mohabbat main khona bhi sikho

bilkul sahi kaha dost tumne
mohbbat se hume kya ummid hoti hai
wo to khud be ummid hoti hai
mohbbat ko pana hi sabki jarurat hoti hai
per ye koi nahi janta hai ki mohbbat ko bhi kisi ki jarur hoti hai


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meri zindagi hai roshan in kaale aandhero se
meri zindagi main soch samagh ke aaiyega

banzar zameeno par phool nahi khila karte
podha mohobbat ka soch samagh kar lagaiyega

gulo se bhi nazook hain paon aapke
in kantili raho ko yu hi na aajmaiyega

gam apne chupa ke rakhiye yeh shahar hai aandhe bahro ka
kis ko dil ki bat kahiyega kis ko aanso dikhaiyega

jaan deke bhi hasil nahi hai kuch bazare ishq main
soda bahut hai mehnga kijiyega to pachtaiyega

aap pareshan hote hain kyu mere liye kyu khamkha
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meri zindagi hai roshan in kaale aandhero se
meri zindagi main soch samagh ke aaiyega

banzar zameeno par phool nahi khila karte
podha mohobbat ka soch samagh kar lagaiyega

gulo se bhi nazook hain paon aapke
in kantili raho ko yu hi na aajmaiyega

gam apne chupa ke rakhiye yeh shahar hai aandhe bahro ka
kis ko dil ki bat kahiyega kis ko aanso dikhaiyega

jaan deke bhi hasil nahi hai kuch bazare ishq main
soda bahut hai mehnga kijiyega to pachtaiyega

aap pareshan hote hain kyu mere liye kyu khamkha
sapna hoon main ..khulte hi aankh bhool jaiyega..
hello bhai yaha per sirf share likha karo app mana ki apne bahut acha gazal likha hai per isme gazal nahi sirf share hi likhna hai.

kabhi din hota hai to kabhi raat hoti hai
sapno ki duniya to har pal me basi hoti hai
ab kese kahe ki in sapno me kis ki surat hoti hai
bas ankh khol kar dekhte hai to sirf maa ki hi murat hoti hai


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dinesh ji bahut acha likha hai aapne. abb jwab dene mein thodi si ulkjan ho rahi hai, k kaise jwab dein. chalo koshish to ki hai, zara gaur farmayein.

hum to har pal bhagwaan ke saath rehte hain
bhagwan hai wo jisse hum maa - baap kehte hain
chahe kitna insaan pooj le kissi ko bi
aagar dil se nah, is pooja ko paap kehte hain.......

umeed karte hain k aapko yeh sher pasand ayega. lukin 4wd to ur reply.

do take care

God bless u

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baikhudi ki zindagi jiya nahi karty
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dinesh ji bahut acha likha hai aapne. abb jwab dene mein thodi si ulkjan ho rahi hai, k kaise jwab dein. chalo koshish to ki hai, zara gaur farmayein.

hum to har pal bhagwaan ke saath rehte hain
bhagwan hai wo jisse hum maa - baap kehte hain
chahe kitna insaan pooj le kissi ko bi
aagar dil se nah, is pooja ko paap kehte hain.......

umeed karte hain k aapko yeh sher pasand ayega. lukin 4wd to ur reply.

do take care

God bless u

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kabhi pyase ko pani pilaya nahi fir daan karne se kya fayda
kabhi girte huye ko uthaya nahi fir aanso baha ne se kya fayda
yahi to ajki duniya ka dastur hai maa baap ko bhul jaane ka
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baikhudi ki zindagi jiya nahi karty
cheen kar jaam piya nahi karty
jinhay hum say pyar hai aakar kahain hum say
peecha hum bhi kisi ka kia nahi karty
wah dost bahut acha likha hai
sach kaha hai tumne ki bekhudi ki jindagi jiya nahi karte
per kisi ki yaad ko lekar uske sang piya nahi karte hai
mana ki hum kisi ka picha nahi karte hai
per sharab ka sahara lekar hum ye jindagi jiya nahi karte hai


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[quote=sandysandy;232109]Dohe ka jawab dohe se....

jeevan ke din rain kaa , kaise lage hisaab

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hissab jindagi ka ab apane samjh me aaya,
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Dohe ka jawab dohe se....

jeevan ke din rain kaa , kaise lage hisaab

nice thread....

hissab jindagi ka ab apane samjh me aaya,
paani se sasta bikate, jab usake lahu ko dekha
Khuda hamari tarah apko tanhaayi na de,
Hum jee lenge tanha, par apko Judai na de,
hamari nigahon mein basi rahe apki soorat,
Aapko bhale hi hum dikhayi na de


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dosto.n,

meri aap se gujaarish hai kii yahaa.n , is tarah se sher na likhe.n... aap jo sher likh rahe hai.n, wo aap ke phle waale sher ka jawaab hona chaahiye! aur aap ko jawaab mai.n sirf ek sher(couplets) likhana hai..

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dosto.n,

meri aap se gujaarish hai kii yahaa.n , is tarah se sher na likhe.n... aap jo sher likh rahe hai.n, wo aap ke phle waale sher ka jawaab hona chaahiye! aur aap ko jawaab mai.n sirf ek sher(couplets) likhana hai..

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haan sahi kaha apne bilkul aisa hi yaha pe chal raha tha app dekhiye pehle ke saare share per kuch log aate hai na vo humari link tod dete hai isi liye mujburan hume koi dusra share likhna padta hai
Intzaar rehta hai har sham uska
Raat kat ti nahi hai lekar naam usk
Mudat se bethe hai aash lekar uskaa
Ki kabhi to aayega koi paigaam uska


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Intzaar rehta hai har sham uska
Raat kat ti nahi hai lekar naam usk
Mudat se bethe hai aash lekar uskaa
Ki kabhi to aayega koi paigaam uska


ye raha aap ke sher ka jawaab..............

khat likhu to kya likhu,kaboo me dil humdum nahi,
khak aisi zindagi ke hum kahi aur tum kahi......


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wahhhhhhhhhh...bahut khub MUJEEB....

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dil ka mausam hai ajab, tumse mulakaat ke baad,
jaise jalta hua jungle koi , barsaat ke baad.........(NM)

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bahut khub..............

zindagi chubhne lagi hai kaanto ki tarah yaar muje,
har pal tere intezaar ka sadiyon ki tarah guzra...(NM)


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bahut khub..............

zindagi chubhne lagi hai kaanto ki tarah yaar muje,
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Is bat ka ab kiya tumko gila don ?

janab aap ka jawaab hazir hai...

koi achi si sazaa do mujko,
chalo aisa karo bhula do mujko,
tumse bichdu to maut aa jaye,
dil ki gehraiyo se ye dua do mujko......


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koi achi si sazaa do mujko,
chalo aisa karo bhula do mujko,
tumse bichdu to maut aa jaye,
dil ki gehraiyo se ye dua do mujko......


Meri ibadaton main bhi koi kasar nhi
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mery pass iska koi jawab nhi ...
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visal-e-yaar ki chaah mai yun zindagi beeti jaayegi,
marne ko marjaayenge,yeh ghadi na kabhi aayegi.


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khushiyon ke intezaar me tamaam kar chale hai zindagi,
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zindagii jab bhii terii bazm me.n laatii hai hame.n
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