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Aake Tumne Qabr Pe"posted by ikrama -
24th June 2010, 12:46 AM
 ]Aake Tumne Kabr Pe Jo Meri Muskura Diya...Bijli Chamak Ke Gir Padi Sara Kafan Jala Diya...Udh Kafan me so raha tha kabr mein...Yaha pe tum pohuj gaye kisne pata bata diya... Mera tumhara faisla ab hoga khuda k samne...Tumne taiz kheej li humne sar jhuka diya Aake tumne kabr pe jo meri muskura diya bijli chamak k gir padi sara kafan jala diya ....¥....¥....¥ Ikrama ¥....¥....¥.... Dosto is ghazal ko padh ne ke baad .. ap apne kayalaath reply kare Na tumne kaha hota na humne suna hota....sh.fn |
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24th June 2010, 12:59 AM
Yeh aapki gazal hai.........
 Im sure it's not your............  Kya Bhai aapko post karne ko mila bhi to yehi mila kya......... 
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24th June 2010, 02:49 AM
ikrama sahab ko mera aadaab, janaab yahaaN apni shayriyaaN hi post kaeN aap, aur agar kisi aur ki ho to unka naam mention karen ya fir nt mine likh deN, aap chuNki naye haiN aur ye aapki pehli galti hai isiliye ise maaf kar diya jaayega, par darkhwast rahegi ki aainda iska dhyaan rakheN, kyuNki aapne ek puane SMS sher ke saath ched chaad kar ke ye ghazal banane ki kosish ki hai....
http://www.shers.in/shayari/dard-bha...la-diya-69261/ http://mailshayari.com/dard-e-jubaan...-kabar-pe.html http://www.eworldsms.net/urdu-shayar...liyaan-ch.html http://www.shayari.in/shayari/dard-e...pata-diya.html http://isms.ibibo.com/lipu_satya/Tum...t-3833865.html itna kaafi hota par fir socha aapko is qawaalli ka poora lyrics hi de dooN.... Tumne jo meri kabr par, aakar yun muskura diya bijli chamak kar gir padi, sara kafan jala diya. main so raha tha chain se, yun hi kafan-e-mazaar mein, yahan bhi sataane aa gaye, kisne pata bata diya. tumne chadhaye phool to, ehsaan kya kiya humne tumhare ishq mein, sara chaman luta diya. pucha na jeete ji kabhi, dard e dil ka haal aaye ho kabr par meri, mitti mein jab mila diya. aaye ho mazaar par mere, dekh liya ab mera haal thukra ke mere pyar ko, kisi aur ko apna bana diya. ab ho gaya hai ilm tumhein, ek shikayat meri jaan lo kiya jo hashar tumne mera, apno ko begana bana diya. main to kafan mein hoon ab, meri baat aur hai, karna na unka haal wo ab, jo haal mera tumne bana diya. tumne jo meri kabr par, aakar yun muskura diya bijli chamak kar gir padi, sara kafan jala diya. aaj kuch aisa gujar gaya, dil toot kar bikhar gaya dard kuch itna badha, hadd se hi gujar gaya shayar ka naam mujhe pata nahin hai, par haaN ye sms me bahut famous lines rahiN haiN, to ikrama sahab agli baar se in baaton ka dhyaan rakhiyega....!! aapka GHAYAL....!! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ http://alfaaz-e-taish.blogspot.in/ Ishq hota tha, ishq karte haiN, Vo zamana tha, ye zamana hai... ----Taish ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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24th June 2010, 02:55 AM
Mujhe lagta hai Ikrama saheb ke liye SDC ke 2 members ke khayalat kafi the aur woh aainda itna bada risk nahi lege hahahahahahah........
Aap please kisi aur ka kalaam post kare to NM likh diya kare. Par tujhe bevafa bhi kehna achcha nahi lagta... Mob.: +971 501297654
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24th June 2010, 10:38 AM
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Aadaab o tasleemaat ! moHteram / moHterma . sab se pehle to app ka SDC parivaar meiN app ko khush aamdeed , dosra appke aHsaasooN ki kadr hai , bahut hi umdra sher app ne pesh kiyaa , zaroori nhi her insaan hi acha likh paaey aur na hi zaroori hai keh her insaan usse acha smajh paaey  apne aHsaason se is meHfil ko ronak bakhshiye . aik baat a'rZ kerni thi keh is meHfil ke aadaab ke liye kuch asool banaey gaey haiN app se guzarish hai keh un per bhi nazar fermaa laiN . link maiN ne appki khidmat maiN pesh ker diya hai http://www.shayri.com/forums/announcement.php?f=4 nahieN to idher bahut saare log haiN jo "Mohd Bin Qassim " banane ki koshish kerte haiN aur talwaarieN hamesha miyaan se baahir rakhte haiN apna bachoo khud kerna hai .aate rahiye meHfil maiN aur apke aHsaasooN ki tarjumaan shayri hum sab ke saath bantiye . moHteram Khuwahish saheb aur moHteram ghayal_shayar. mere azeez dosto mujhe to inki post maiN kahien yeh likha dikhaai nhi diya keh yeh shayri inhoN ne likhi hai . ager inhoN ne aisi ghalti kii bhi to un per TooT peRne se app logoN ko kuch mila ? appko unhaiN kam az kam aik ya do dafa samjhaana to chahiye aur yahaN keh asooloN se agaah to kerna chahiye . phir bhale hi app unko daanTien ya mana kerieN app ka haq banta hai . umeed hai meri baat se bura nhi maanieNge aur agli dafa is qisam ki ghaltiyoN se ijtanaab kerieNge Shukriya nacheez Mujeeb |
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24th June 2010, 01:53 PM
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Aapki yeh baat kuch samajh me nahi aayi Mujeeb sahab, kisi ko kya dushmani ho sakti hai,ikrama ji se, jo unper teer ya talwar chalaaye...aap unki puraani post check kijiye, unko baar baar samjhaya ja raha hai ke ,jo unhone nahi likha hai uske saath (nm) likhe , per woh dhyaan nahi de rahi... isiliye unko baar baar samjhaya ja raha hai... khair is mudde ko behas na banaye... main ikrama ji se khud baat karungi.. Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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24th June 2010, 02:52 PM
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aur kuch fermaana hai app ko mohterma ? na to meri kisi se yahaN dushmani hai aur na hi maiN kisi ka wakeel ban raha hoN . aik naya saarif jo ghalban kuch hi din pehle is meHfil ka hissa bana aur uski ab tak posts bhi 5 haiN auur uske saath yeh salook ... aur app ferma rahi haiN bar bar ... attachment check ker sakti haiN ma'zrat ke saath moHterma app yahaN ki naazim haiN jo munasib samjhieN wohi kerieN . maiN apni ghalti ke liye app sab se ma'zrat chata hoN . nacheez Mujeeb |
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24th June 2010, 03:14 PM
aree chotey miya...aap bhi bina wajah choti moti baato ko dil se laga lete ho.........
are bhai ek family hai.........sab ka baatcheet ka lahza aur tarika alag alag hota hai.....koi kisi par nahi Toot raha hai....ikrama sahiba ke liye net par sdc se jyada mahfooz jahag koi aur nahi milegi....yaha vo bilkul safe hai...dont worry aapki zarurat hame bade bade kaamo me hai..... kuch seekhaane ke kaam me dil lagaiye.....bhai accha ye bataiye ki amaan ko amaaN pada jaa sakta hai kya? kuch confusion hai is word ko lekar.... welcome again and regards |
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24th June 2010, 08:42 PM
Kitne mazakiya andaaz me Khwaish saheb ne apni baat rakhi aur kitne khoobsurat andaaz me Ghayal saheb ne baat samjhaiee.............Pata nahi Mujeeb saheb aap kaunsi baat samjhana chah rahe hai...........aur jis andaaz me aapne baat ki aur jis kism ka khichad aapne aur baki members par uchala use dekhkar bohat afsos hua.
nahieN to idher bahut saare log haiN jo "Mohd Bin Qassim " banane ki koshish kerte haiN aur talwaarieN hamesha miyaan se baahir rakhte haiN apna bachoo khud kerna hai . Agar kal koi aapse bhi is tarah baat karega tab bhi mujhe utna hi afsos hoga jitna aaj ho raha hai............beinteha nafrat nazar aayee aapki bato. Khair main aapko itni achchi tarah to janta nahi lekin agar meri batain aapki narazgi ka sabab bani ho to maf kar dijiyega, aur yaqeen maniye main Mohd. Bin Qassim ko bhi nahi janta to un jaisa banne ka sawaal hi nahi hai. Par tujhe bevafa bhi kehna achcha nahi lagta... Mob.: +971 501297654
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24th June 2010, 11:12 PM
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Sahab aapko mehfil meiN dekhker bahut khushi huyi........ Woh aisi bahas per huyi iska bhi mujhe afsos nahi...... Baat yeh hai Mujeeb sahab ke mohtaram ke maine kuch posts dekhe jin per already Zainy jee ne aur ghayal sahab ne aur baki member's ne unhe bataya tha is baareN meiN..... ke agar koi kalaam aapki nahi to aap uske niche shayar ka naam likhe yaa Unknown likha yaa not mine laga deN.... Maine is post per yehi soch ke nazar dali ke...... yeh post shayad janab ki khud likhi ho...... per nahi ..... aur maiNe koyiN tikhe lafzoN mein nahi kaha hai ke aap aisa na kare maine to bus mazakiya taur per apni baat pahuNcha dii....... Khair itne hungame ke bad to janab samjh gae hoNge yehi ummid hai............ Baki aapse Guzarish hai ke aap yahaaN aate rahiye aapne ilm ki roshni meiN sabko raah dikhate rahiye...... aur apni bhi gazal yaa kalaam se hum sab ko rubaru karate rahiye........ Talwaar ho ya kalam bahut din mayaan meiN raheN to bekaar hone lagti hai........ so aap bhi apni talwaar means kalam ko dhar lagate rahiye Bazm meiN aate rahiye....... Khush rahiye...... Khuda Hafez....
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25th June 2010, 01:29 AM
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mujhe kisi per keechaR uchaalne ka koi adeekaar nahieN hai aur na hi mera aisa koi iraada thaa , jis tereH appko yaa dosre members ko mera andaaz guftago passand nhi aaya theek ussi tereH kisi aur ko bhi bura lag sakta hai , maiN pehle bhi ma'zrat ker chuka hoN . SDC ke ilawa mera dosri meHfiloN maiN bhi thoRa bahut aana jaana huwa kerta hai , aisa bertaao mujhe aur kahieN nazar nhi aaya ... ager aisa koi kerta bhi hai keh not mine ya nm nhi likhta to daad daaine waale usse "nice Sharing" ya dosre ache alfaazoN maiN daad daite haiN , is se na sirf us saarif ki Hosla afzaaii hoti hai balkeh woh aisi ghaltiyoN se bhi ijtanaab kerta hai . aur aap yaqeen kijiye un meHfiloN maiN bahut ache ache shayar bhi haiN aur unke sargarm saarif bhi yahaN ki nisbat kaafi zyda haiN . khair baat sirf itni si hai keh manna hi kerna hai to ache andaaz maiN kiyoN nahieN ? , kisi ko niraash kerna zaroori to nahieN hai , beshak mera andaaz bhi kaafi bura tha per is liye nahieN keh mera kisi se koi zaati masla hai sirf isliye tha keh bura andaaz hamesha hi sab ko bura lagata hai chahey woh app hoN ya maiN .... khair ab bhi ager maiN apna mauqif bayan nhi ker paaya to maiN waaqi gunegaar hoN . aur yeh rahi moHd bin Qassim ki tafseel http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Muhammad_bin_Qasim |
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25th June 2010, 02:57 AM
sabko fir se salam,
maiN shant tha ki yahaN behas na ho par fi bhi ho rahi ho to mujhe aana pada, khwish bhai, sajid bhi aur mujeeb bhai, maiN nhin manta ki ye behasd ka mudda hai, yahi baat zidd bhai ne v kahi mazakiya tareeke me, aur maiN duhrana chaahuNga aap sab senior members haiN... humari in batoN ka galat matlb nikalta hai... sajid bhai maiN pke ehsadhoN ko bakhubi samajhta huN par ye bateN parde ke bheeta ahchi lagti haiN, umeed karta huN ki aap samajh gaye hoNge, aur agar meri bat buri lage to amaf k dijiyega... Khwais bhai, bas yhi kahung ki aap sahi ho agar aapko yr bata pata hai to fir kuch samjhanr ki bt hi nahiN rehti, aur aga is mudde pe baat karni hi thi to khule aam karne bajaaye PM me karna behtar hota... waise bhai maafi chahuNga agr meri baat galat ho ya apko thes pahuNchaaye to...!! Aur jaan-e-ali, mujeeb sahab aapse to aisi umeed kataa'i nahiN thi mujhe ki aap aisi baaton pe behas karode, amaa'n miyaaN yahaaN aur v jaruri cheezeN haiN, aur yakn maniyr 5 sal ke tajurbe se keh raha huN agar aapne shuruat me sakhti nahin barti to log aagr v aisi harkateN karte rehte haiN... aur janaab humnr to shukiya likhne wale na likhne ki samajh na lafzoN ki bas kabhi kabhar yuNhi likh lete haiN b kiske paas itni fursat ki talwareN nikle... waise bhai jaan agar meri baat ka bura lage to beshaq ittella karna aur maiN maafi ka talabgaar v huN bas khuda aapke kalam pe yuNhi meharbaan rahe....!! Umeed karta huN ki ab is mudde pe behas nahiN hogi, aur agar hui v to bandh darwazoN me hogi...!! aapk GHAYAL....!! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ http://alfaaz-e-taish.blogspot.in/ Ishq hota tha, ishq karte haiN, Vo zamana tha, ye zamana hai... ----Taish ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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25th June 2010, 03:05 AM
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Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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