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Bewafa Zamane Ka Khuda Bhi Bewafa Nikla... -
16th July 2006, 01:05 PM
Sabki itni achhi shayri padkhe..socha hum bhi likhle kuch arse baad...
Mohabbat hai cheeze buri, duniya ka yeh dawa sach nikla Tumhare pyaar ke Imtihaan mein be_inteha intizar bhi bewajah nikla Tumhari yaadon mein khona chaha to tumhara khayal bhi be_Buniyad nikla Zindagi ke har rashte pe chali tu e-"tulsika" par rah-e-ishq ka rashta anjaana nikla maNgi thi hazaron duwaiyen, Lekin, Bewafa Zamane Ka Khuda Bhi Bewafa Nikla.... tulsika!~ 
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17th July 2006, 11:10 AM
Hi,
bahut acha likha aapne.. carry on Jassi Your Reach should exceed your Grasp, or whats a Heaven For... |
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bhut khub -
17th July 2006, 12:44 PM
tulsika ji bhut achi koshish kay liye meri daad kabool karo bhut achi soach hai.....jajbaat bhut umda hai......lakin phir bhee koi kami khatki mujhay......yeh share bhut pasand aiya.....
maNgi thi hazaron duwaiyen, Lekin, Bewafa Zamane Ka Khuda Bhi Bewafa Nikla.... raj....... ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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bohat khoob -
17th July 2006, 04:48 PM
maNgi thi hazaron duwaiyen, Lekin,
Bewafa Zamane Ka Khuda Bhi Bewafa Nikla.... waah........ tulsika ji app ne to kamaal kar di bohat acha likha hai aise hi likhte rahiyega .iss nacheez ki taraf sai mubarakbaad kabool kijyega . keep righting.................. |
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bohat khoob -
17th July 2006, 07:08 PM
maNgi thi hazaron duwaiyen, Lekin,
Bewafa Zamane Ka Khuda Bhi Bewafa Nikla.... waah........ tulsika ji app ne to kamaal kar di bohat acha likha hai aise hi likhte rahiyega .iss nacheez ki taraf sai mubarakbaad kabool kijyega . keep righting.................. |
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18th July 2006, 10:09 AM
jzpassi
THANK YOU SO MUCH!!  every bit of inspiration helps!! ----------- rajveer ji, shukriya....well kuch kami to mujhe bhi khatKi thi..par i couldn't figure out what i was missing..so i just left it to be whatever it was..!! thank you..though... ---------------- kirti... thnks..!  it means alot when you even leave few words of feedbackk..highly appreciate it..!! ------------------
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