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Chhoti si hasi.. - 16th August 2004, 01:19 PM


suni suni si fiza
bas maine yuN hi
unki sanso mein guthi khamoshiyo ko chhu liya
vo mude thoda hashe
main bhi hasi
phir hamare sath
nadiya,vadiya, nabh ke badal
phool,koyal,shaher jungle
sab ke sab hasane lage
ek muhalle ke kisi ghar mein
kisi kone mein
ek chhoti si hashi ne
door tak faily huyi duniya ko
roshan ker diya
jindagi mein jindagi ka rang
phir se bher diya...



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hi - 18th August 2004, 05:29 PM

Shivangi ji,

ek muhalle ke kisi ghar mein
kisi kone mein
ek chhoti si hashi ne
door tak faily huyi duniya ko
roshan ker diya
jindagi mein jindagi ka rang
phir se bher diya...


bahut khub likha hai aapne..
jindagi mein jindagi ka rang bher diya...
aise hi likhati rahiye..


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Thumbs up True! - 18th August 2004, 11:12 PM

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hi - 19th August 2004, 12:48 PM

Thank you Akant ji... esi tarah hausala badhate rahiye..


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thanks - 19th August 2004, 12:50 PM

welcome.. and thank you very much parul...for appreciaiting my thoughts

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