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Meri Jaa.N ko Lelo Sanam dheere dheere ( Qadeertoopchi ) - 16th November 2010, 05:34 AM
Yaarane Bazm aadab ,,,

zainy saheba ki ghazal ki ghaniyat se mutacir hokar ke khuch sher ki amad ho gaai ..to suncha ghazal hi kahi jaaye.. allah ne barkat di aur ghazal mukammal ho gaai to suncha apke huzoor me rakh don ..apni ara nawazen..



Karo mujh pe ye bhi karam dheere dheere
Meri jaan ko lelo sanam dheere dheere



Wo nazaron ko humse chale jo chura ke
to ankhon ka toota bharam dheere dheere



mere paas aaja mai suljha don pal me
teri zulf ke pech-o-kham dheere dheere



teri bewafai ke kisse mai saaare
ghazal me karonga raqam dheere dheere



mera namm sunke tumhe kya howa hai
kyun ankhen howi hain ye namm dheere dheere



ye khamoshi unki abhi ibtedaa hai
ke aage badega sitam dheere dheere



kahin koi tanqeed kar de na tum pe
qadeer ab uthao qalam dheere dheere



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16th November 2010, 05:50 AM
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Yaarane Bazm aadab ,,,

zainy saheba ki ghazal ki ghaniyat se mutacir hokar ke khuch sher ki amad ho gaai ..to suncha ghazal hi kahi jaaye.. allah ne barkat di aur ghazal mukammal ho gaai to suncha apke huzoor me rakh don ..apni ara nawazen..



Karo mujh pe ye bhi karam dheere dheere
Meri jaan ko lelo sanam dheere dheere



Wo nazaron ko humse chale jo chura ke
to ankhon ka toota bharam dheere dheere



mere paas aaja mai suljha don pal me
teri zulf ke pech-o-kham dheere dheere



teri bewafai ke kisse mai saaare
ghazal me karonga raqam dheere dheere



mera namm sunke tumhe kya howa hai
kyun ankhen howi hain ye namm dheere dheere



ye khamoshi unki abhi ibtedaa hai
ke aage badega sitam dheere dheere



kahin koi tanqeed kar de na tum pe
qadeer ab uthao qalam dheere dheere




Qadeertoopchi

aadaab
janaab qadeer bhai
mashallah kiyaa khoobsoorat ghazal se nawazaa hai aap ne khudaa nazre bad se bachaaye raftah raftah nikhaar aataa jaa raha hai jo aap ke roshan mustaqbil ki daleel hai
ek ek sher me ghenaaiyat hai alfaaz ka besaakhtah istemaal amal me aaya hai saadgee pe purkaaree hai ghazal ke naqsho nigaar dekhkar buzurg shoraa ki yaad taazah kardee aap ne mere khiyaal se ye kamaale fan hai ki kisee ki ghenaaiyat ke saath isqadar oumdah insaaf kiyaa jaaye
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16th November 2010, 08:13 AM
Bahut Khoob... Bahut Khoobsurat ... Qadeer Sahab !

teri bewafai ke kisse mai saaare
ghazal me karonga raqam dheere dheere

ye khamoshi unki abhi ibtedaa hai
ke aage badega sitam dheere dheere

kahin koi tanqeed kar de na tum pe
qadeer ab uthao qalam dheere dheere

Very Impressive .... !

Karo mujh pe ye bhi karam dheere dheere
Meri jaan ko lelo sanam dheere dheere

Wo nazaron ko humse chale jo chura ke
to ankhon ka toota bharam dheere dheere

mere paas aaja mai suljha don pal me
teri zulf ke pech-o-kham dheere dheere

Very Romantic .... !

mera namm sunke tumhe kya howa hai
kyun ankhen howi hain ye namm dheere dheere

Very touching ........ !

Very Nice Creation ...

Tahe dil se daad hazir hai ... aise hi likhte rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen ...

duaaon ke saath ...



YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...

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Yaarane Bazm aadab ,,,

zainy saheba ki ghazal ki ghaniyat se mutacir hokar ke khuch sher ki amad ho gaai ..to suncha ghazal hi kahi jaaye.. allah ne barkat di aur ghazal mukammal ho gaai to suncha apke huzoor me rakh don ..apni ara nawazen..



Karo mujh pe ye bhi karam dheere dheere
Meri jaan ko lelo sanam dheere dheere



Wo nazaron ko humse chale jo chura ke
to ankhon ka toota bharam dheere dheere



mere paas aaja mai suljha don pal me
teri zulf ke pech-o-kham dheere dheere



teri bewafai ke kisse mai saaare
ghazal me karonga raqam dheere dheere



mera namm sunke tumhe kya howa hai
kyun ankhen howi hain ye namm dheere dheere



ye khamoshi unki abhi ibtedaa hai
ke aage badega sitam dheere dheere



kahin koi tanqeed kar de na tum pe
qadeer ab uthao qalam dheere dheere



Qadeertoopchi

qadeer bhai
radhe radhe

bahut khoob maza aa gaya padhkar har ashar khoob raha dil ko chhoota hua daad hazir hai kubul karen
duaon ke saath

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Mashallah!!..bohat khoob Qadeer sahab.............................



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Yaarane Bazm aadab ,,,

zainy saheba ki ghazal ki ghaniyat se mutacir hokar ke khuch sher ki amad ho gaai ..to suncha ghazal hi kahi jaaye.. allah ne barkat di aur ghazal mukammal ho gaai to suncha apke huzoor me rakh don ..apni ara nawazen..



Karo mujh pe ye bhi karam dheere dheere
Meri jaan ko lelo sanam dheere dheere



Wo nazaron ko humse chale jo chura ke
to ankhon ka toota bharam dheere dheere



mere paas aaja mai suljha don pal me
teri zulf ke pech-o-kham dheere dheere



teri bewafai ke kisse mai saaare
ghazal me karonga raqam dheere dheere



mera namm sunke tumhe kya howa hai
kyun ankhen howi hain ye namm dheere dheere



ye khamoshi unki abhi ibtedaa hai
ke aage badega sitam dheere dheere



kahin koi tanqeed kar de na tum pe
qadeer ab uthao qalam dheere dheere




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Bahut hi khubsurat kalaam hai aapki, Qadeer Ji...! Har ek sher tareef-e-kaabil hai...!

Daad qabul kareiN...!

Duaaon ke saath


Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai

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teri bewafai ke kisse mai saaare
ghazal me karonga raqam dheere dheere

ye khamoshi unki abhi ibtedaa hai
ke aage badega sitam dheere dheere

kahin koi tanqeed kar de na tum pe
qadeer ab uthao qalam dheere dheere


Qadeer Saheb,

Wah janab,
kia khoobsorat ghazal likhi hai,

Aap ne tamaam ghazal be-had achi likhi hai,
lekin quoted ashaar khaas pasand aaye,

Aise hi mehfil roshan rakhiye,

DuaooN k saath ijaazat,

*hSn* : parStaar

tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
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