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subah kii dhuup pe mujhko aitbaar nahi'n - 12th November 2013, 01:09 PM

subah kii dhuup pe mujhko aitbaar nahi’n
andherii raat pe meraa ikhtiyaar nahi’n
chale’n kyun na’nge paao’n terii mazaar kii aur
jalaae paer koee ranj me baar-baar nahi’n
mile the jab tum marne ko be’chen thaa dil
ab zindagii ka bhii mujhko intezaar nahi’n
si’nchaa thaa har-ek gul ko baagbaan ne
viraan huaa gulshan to wo zimmadaar nahi’n
khaalii hai mae’khaanaa isskii fikr kar saaki
“Safeer” ka dil kisiika bhii talabgaar nahi’n



ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता



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12th November 2013, 03:15 PM

chale’n kyun na’nge paao’n terii mazaar kii aur
jalaae paer koee ranj me baar-baar nahi’n

khaalii hai mae’khaanaa isskii fikr kar saaki
“Safeer” ka dil kisiika bhii talabgaar nahi’n


waahhhh, kyaa sher keh diyaa bhaai.... qatal hai

likhte raheN.....

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12th November 2013, 03:58 PM

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8th December 2013, 02:26 AM

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9th December 2013, 11:07 AM

aru ji, zarraaji...
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9th December 2013, 11:34 AM

mile the jab tum marne ko be’chen thaa dil
ab zindagii ka bhii mujhko intezaar nahi’n
si’nchaa thaa har-ek gul ko baagbaan ne
viraan huaa gulshan to wo zimmadaar nahi’n
khaalii hai mae’khaanaa isskii fikr kar saaki
“Safeer” ka dil kisiika bhii talabgaar nahi’n

BAUHT HI AACHE AASHAR KAHE AAPNE BHAI
YE ASHAR HUMKO KHAS LGE
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9th December 2013, 01:12 PM

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mile the jab tum marne ko be’chen thaa dil
ab zindagii ka bhii mujhko intezaar nahi’n
si’nchaa thaa har-ek gul ko baagbaan ne
viraan huaa gulshan to wo zimmadaar nahi’n
khaalii hai mae’khaanaa isskii fikr kar saaki
“Safeer” ka dil kisiika bhii talabgaar nahi’n

BAUHT HI AACHE AASHAR KAHE AAPNE BHAI
YE ASHAR HUMKO KHAS LGE
DAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAD PESH HAI
QUBUL FARMAIYE
Shakir bhai,
Aapko hamare aashaar pasand aaye, ham aapke shukr guzar hai.N
aapkee daad qbul hai hamne.N

apnaa khayaal rakhiye

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30th December 2013, 03:52 AM

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subah kii dhuup pe mujhko aitbaar nahi’n
andherii raat pe meraa ikhtiyaar nahi’n
chale’n kyun na’nge paao’n terii mazaar kii aur
jalaae paer koee ranj me baar-baar nahi’n
mile the jab tum marne ko be’chen thaa dil
ab zindagii ka bhii mujhko intezaar nahi’n
si’nchaa thaa har-ek gul ko baagbaan ne
viraan huaa gulshan to wo zimmadaar nahi’n
khaalii hai mae’khaanaa isskii fikr kar saaki
“Safeer” ka dil kisiika bhii talabgaar nahi’n
Bahut hi khoob likha hai janab Adil ji..
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Likhte rahiye..
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Bahut hi khoob likha hai janab Adil ji..
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subah kii dhuup pe mujhko aitbaar nahi’n
andherii raat pe meraa ikhtiyaar nahi’n
chale’n kyun na’nge paao’n terii mazaar kii aur
jalaae paer koee ranj me baar-baar nahi’n
mile the jab tum marne ko be’chen thaa dil
ab zindagii ka bhii mujhko intezaar nahi’n
si’nchaa thaa har-ek gul ko baagbaan ne
viraan huaa gulshan to wo zimmadaar nahi’n
khaalii hai mae’khaanaa isskii fikr kar saaki
“Safeer” ka dil kisiika bhii talabgaar nahi’n


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Wah Wah Wahhhhhhhh Bahot Khud Bahot Khub Likha Aapne Dil Ko Chu Gayi............
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